| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 16:12 CST
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“Did I hit you in the naughties?” Ha! funny...keep up the good work.
I think all the people that bash Anzu should be a club or something. That would be somrthing, wouldn`t it? |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 16:03 CST
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me like!
can't wait to send steven to jail, that bastard!
:)gralnak
surprised by the ending of ch.8?....
It just gets more and more twisted.....
just remember Otogi is crazy.....
so not all the rules aply(SP?) for ever thing........ |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 04, 2003 14:37 CST
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Oh poor Malik after that I dont think hes going to want to have anything to do with the Millinum rod for a least a couple weeks :P See this is what happens when you like you story lol you turn the readers into perverts like Malik and Marik :P |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: April 04, 2003 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Stupid thingy... not sure what happened.
~_~ Owies! Poor Malik!
Tigerlily: Poor Marik, he won't be able to get any from Malik for a little while or take him ice skating.
*snicker* At least he got some before they left. Ya know, with so many people falling on ice it must be like Christmas in July. ^_^ Is Malik going to be unavailable for the threesome? Maybe he can watch and cheer them on. ^___^
Tigerlily: It was nice to see a rod joke, the golf balls ones were really funny... think Yami will have an aneurysm one day from those two?
I loved, “The friendly fire hydrant invited me back! It loves me!” and the whole pavement scene. I really laughed my ass off over that. |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: April 04, 2003 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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>_ |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 10:05 CST
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I swear I will never cuss again if you never do this again? Got it? I mean, it was good and all...but.... *shudders* Oh, and I loved the Malik/Marik rod jokes. And the ball one. ^^; Ice cream...yummy! X9 |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 09:57 CST
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LD: Hehehe, golf ball jokes. I just love Marik and Malik. The are great!
Karen: Oh, this is getting to be so sad. Not that it wasn't sad before. I just keep feeling worse and worse for Ryou. But with Bakura, Malik and Marik, I am sure that he will be alright.
LD: Wishful thinking. You know he is going to go through hell before this story is over.
Karen: Normally I don't say that the end justifies the means, but...as long as it ends happily, everything about this story will be good!
LD: Well, here is hoping, I guess. |
Reviewed By: Kye On: April 04, 2003 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I like this story, poor Ryou though. I liked the whole dramatic Malik/Marik chapter. I don't care which turns out to be the father.
I like the Anzu bashing so I look forward to that next chapter. However she really isn't that bad in the series, very easy to make fun of but not really that bad. Did you know that there is actual Anzu bashing in the series? it is very light but does happen. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: April 03, 2003 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ya know, I wonder if they record those conversations between visitors and prisoners? Because that sure sounded like a threat to me. It made me so happy when Marik hugged Ryou and said thank you. It was really sweet.
Tigerlily: Yeah, the Aaawww meter hit a 9.9 right there. I'm glad that guy was at least sympathetic to Ryou.
I have a question. Why would the Prosecutors office be playing the tapes of Bakura beating Ryou? They want to build a case against Steven not Bakura, even if Ryou refused to testify. I can see them doing it if they decided to charge Bakura though. Shouldn't that be used by Steven's lawyer or Public Defender? And can they really charge Bakura if Ryou refuses to press charges? I wonder what the statute of limitations is on that? I can't wait for the miniature golf! I can see Marik beating her senseless (does she have any sense? Don't think so) with the golf club. I wonder what Malik will have her go hug? For doing such an awe inspiring job, I feel the need to give you a Ryou Change of Heart plushie! Enjoy it as much as all of us enjoy your writing. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hato chiisai On: April 03, 2003 19:44 CST
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I promised to review, and I am! Yay! I really like it so far. By the way, I did a drawing of female Ryou for you. You know where to go to see it. It's not there yet, give it time. I'll let you know when it's available. I'm really loving this fic. Oh, and I vote Marik! |
Reviewed By: Yui On: April 03, 2003 19:16 CST
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Steven better go to jail! Evil, evil, evil Steven! Oooh... he gets me sooo mad! *pulls out Steven voo doo doll* Take this! *jabs needles through his eyes* Steven ought to die, not just get sent to prison. *sighs* Oh well. Keep up the great writting!
~Yui |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: April 03, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW DARE HE SAY RYOU TRIED TO KILL HIM!RYOU WOULDN'T EVEN DO THAT IF HE HAD TO!
Bakura:Yeah!
*growl*I'm gonna soooooooooooooo KILL HIM!
Bakura:Yeah!
Chibi Bakura:Big Me gonna kick ass?
Bakura:Hell yeah!
Chibi Ryou:Batuwa you gonnas kill Steben?
Bakura:Yeah I guess.
Chibi Ryou:But mommy just weft.
Bakura:O_oWHAT?!
................Gone away to kill.Ja ne.............
Bakura:Tory get BACK HERE!*runs after*
Chibis:*sweat drop*
Karona:Write more,live well,and play games!^_______^ |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: April 03, 2003 18:22 CST
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*trying very hard NOT to scream* Grrrrr...*gives in* YEAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! RYOU'S GONNA TESTIFY AGAINST STEVEN!!! EVERYONE DANCE FOR JOY!!! OH HAPPY DAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! Steven still doesn't get it, does he??? Damn it! I was aiming for a happy father-son reunion thing... but Ryou testifying against his *cough*father*cough* is just as good too! I can't wait to see what happens with Anzu at a miniature golf course ^-^ One time me and my friend Cat went mini-golfing... I hit her in the head with the ball and I think I gave her a concussion... And for some reason I can see Marik doing that to Anzu *evil laugh* And now, for that infamous line..... Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 17:14 CST
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Nice chapter. Poor Ryou though *kicks steven* Update soon! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 16:26 CST
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YAH!!!ANZU BASHING!!!
when Ryou went to see Steven it felt like
The Silence of The Lambs!!!
Hello Ryou.....
:)gralnak |
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