| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 03, 2003 16:24 CST
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I love this chapter, and it was nice to see Bakura so upset about how he use to be. You can tell he really has changed!
I can just see Anzu in future chapters "Giving Birth is like friendship!" |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 14:58 CST
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MINI-GOLF?? What in the world are you thinking! Ack! Anzu _and_ Mini-Golf..... *shudders* disturbing..... |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 14:50 CST
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OK..Steven's lost it completely! Ass! If only there was still snow, I could get out my snow plow!! I'm going to have to trade it in for a backhoe or something. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shit...Steven is still an asshole! Is he honestly gonna ever accept them? |
Reviewed By: silverwerewolf On: April 02, 2003 23:01 CST
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Great ideas, as usual! I can't wait for the next chapter... then again, the SATs have been gettiong to me.... no time to read or write much. I do, however, check this story for updates daily. I think I've become addicted ^__^ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 22:10 CST
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Karen: Awww, this chappie is so sad.
LD: Marik is insane. Just how I like him!
Karen: Poor Malik. He just go caught in a bad situation, wanting to comfort Bakura and not being able to be with his yami. I could cry.
LD: You cry at everything. Although, I suppose I can see how it is sad that Marik would hurt Malik.
Karen: Are you going soft?
LD: *growls at Karen* NO!
Karen: *chuckles at the frustrated writer* This is good, I can see the plot developing nicely. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: April 02, 2003 18:33 CST
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I vote BakuraxRyouxMalik! All the way! I think Malik would make a cute daddy ^-^ Bakura would too, Marik... I just can't see him and kids. Nope, not at all. Good chappie! I LOVED it! just like all the other chappies ^-^ Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: April 02, 2003 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MARIK!MARIK!HE NEEDS FUN TOO!
Chibi Marik:Yeah I needs fun too!
He doesn't know.
Chibi Ryou:Where daddy?
Chibi Malik:Where daddy?
-_-Write more!HURRY WRITE! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marik X Bakura X Ryou! I think that'll be good ^_^ |
Reviewed By: cool On: April 02, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MALIK X BAKURA X RYOU |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 17:49 CST
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I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOO sorry I haven't reviewed until now! Ryou's turning into a girl? O.o That's different. I can't believe Anubis is back, that butthole. Nice start, can't wait for more.
Oh and do you want your link banner chibi style or normal style art? Sorry it's not done yet! |
Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. it`s so original. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 17:17 CST
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Bakurasgirl! Long time no see! This baka computer took so long to download the chapters that it took me a while to get it to work faster. >_ |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 02, 2003 16:51 CST
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the 3 should be Marik/Bakura/Ryou. Malik wouldnt feel left out if he wasnt the blood daddy because he never quostioned Mariks love for him but Marik has so if Malik was the daddy he might feel more left out. err let me say this in terms of real life so I dont should like a nutcase talking about them like they are real! Anyone would feel upset if their lover was a daddy but in this relationship he might start to question Maliks love for him again if he is the daddy!But if he is the daddy then he wouldnt feel so left out, besides Marik hasnt slept with Ryou yet outside of a foursome I think being the blood daddy would make him feel better!
Instead of turning Ryou into a girl you could always make it a MPREG! hehe keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 16:18 CST
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Let the fun.....BEGIN!!! Marik Marik! If for no other reason than he's always funnier in bed....hehe ^_^ Cant wait for the ahem..."change" .... Keep on goin' lovin it. |
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