| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Berrieberrie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this was intersting. You have a wonderful writting gift. Too bad I can't write like that. But anyway this is a Great way to start a continuation!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
LD: hey Bakurasgirl, I just read chappies 3 & 4 at adultfanfiction.net and I must say that I just love crazy Marik!
Karen: he hurt Malik, you wench, how could you like that?
LD: I just do, Ok. the point was that I am happy that I don't have to wait until tomorrow to meet the villians!!
Karen: You already knew who the were...
LD: yes, but the plot thickens!
Karen: you are so stupid. Fall of Icarus was not updated as frequently there as it was here, so why would Baby of mine be any different? You do realize that by reading ahead at the other site, you are probably going to have to wait three days for the lemon?
LD: NOOOO
Karen ^-^ hehe, I am so bad! |
Reviewed By: EscaChick On: March 30, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh! So good, as usual! You definitely have talent! ^____^ I'm very happy that Ryou-sama is okay. I feel bad for Bakura though, having to go through all of the pain of almost losing his lover. I'd be sad too! **sniffle**
I started crying when Ryou kept on saying he didn't want to die. **sniffle**
Oh, I have present! **hands bakurasgirl Ryou and Bakura kiss-kiss plushys** Heeheehee. I've got my own kiss-kiss plushys, so don't worry. ^___^
Can't wait for next chapter. Hurry up! I need to cry some more! ^_____^
And my mother told me the craziest thing ever! I was bawling like crazy because I was watching Yami no Matsuei and yeah... she came up to me and hugged me by my shoulders and said "You can cry all you wish. A woman's day isn't complete unless she cries a little bit." I love my mom, she makes me feel better all the time because of all the crazy stuff she says. But to tell the truth I'm beginning to believe her. Hehehe... I hope Bakura can hang in there with all of Ryou's moodswings.
Ooooh! I love kids! I bet they're going to look just as CYYUUUUUTE AND SWEET AND DID I MENTION CYYYUUUUUTE AS RYOU AND BAKURA!!!!
YEAH ROMANCE!
EscaChick |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 16:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: awww, totally adorable hikari moment
LD: pft. You are a freak
Karen: what, it was cute
LD: whatever. And I totally knew that the money was from Seto. who else could afford that kind of expense.
Karen: show off. But that was really sweet too. I guess love is mellowing Seto a little, hunh?
LD: So emotional. I can't wait for tomorrow when we meet the villians!
Karen: Well, untill tomorrow then! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 30, 2003 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
*Stops trying to hit the fans of Ryou and Bakura off with a stick and instead uses the stick to keep Anzu far far away* Good story Now I am hoping that Anzu suffers major pain hehehe maybe you should have a puppy bite her :P |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Concussions are like friendship?!?!? BWAHAHAHA!!! That's the best one yet!! Damn that braindead chick for upsetting Ryou! Can't you send her to the North Pole to make friends with the polar bears or something? |
Reviewed By: Caro On: March 30, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! i haven't talked to you for a long time, i haven't even reviewed this story yet! sorry! i love this story, more than the last one (~if~ that is possible). i almost have all of spirit message, FINAL (not DEATH, stupid dubed version) i only need the F and i know who has it!
Caro |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it was Seto!!! ^_^
"Concussions are like friendship!" LMAO!! Oh god that girl is retarted... |
Reviewed By: Jocelyn On: March 30, 2003 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!!!!! Ryou's okay!!! I so happy...
^____________________________________________^
Uh... lets see... possible rich guys...
Seto (duh...)
Otogi or whatever... Duke Devlin in english
Pegasus... ? Where in the world did that come from...!!!!!!!
I know it was probably seto, hes the only guy mentioned. In the fall of icarus, i have to say you did i great job!! I'm not normally a lemon liker, but i got entangled in the malikxmarikxryouxbakura!!! Ja ne,
Your ever-faithful (until my parents ground me again, at least!) Reader and reviewer
~Jocelyn~ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 30, 2003 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY SEQUEL HAS TAKEN PLACE!!! ^_________^ Me happy you have this here. Yes! I'm glad Ryou-chan is better now too. Who did give them the money? I was just wondering if you would tell us. Anyways...as usual I just wanna read more! PLEASE! MORE! Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai! ^_^
~B&RForever!~^-^ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 30, 2003 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY SEQUEL HAS TAKEN PLACE!!! ^_________^ Me happy you have this here. Yes! I'm glad Ryou-chan is better now too. Who did give them the money? I was just wondering if you would tell us. Anyways...as usual I just wanna read more! PLEASE! MORE! Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai! ^_^
~B&RForever!~^-^ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 30, 2003 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY SEQUEL HAS TAKEN PLACE!!! ^_________^ Me happy you have this here. Yes! I'm glad Ryou-chan is better now too. Who did give them the money? I was just wondering if you would tell us. Anyways...as usual I just wanna read more! PLEASE! MORE! Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai! ^_^
~B&RForever!~^-^ |
Reviewed By: Liz On: March 29, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again! Aren't you sick of my reviews by now? Wait never mind, it's impossible to get sick of reviews! Some of my friends think I'm crazy since I'm walking up to random teachers and friends at school and asking them if they could read "Goddess of Fate". I've got a non-anime friend addicted to it. Hopefully I can make her read Nanny Bakura and somehow not mention that it's Yugioh related. That'd be kinda hard though. |
Reviewed By: Liz On: March 29, 2003 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles happily* told you i wouldn't miss it. |
Reviewed By: EscaChick On: March 29, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm yeah, I'm back =P
**sniffle**
I really gotta stop crying so much. I was so happy to know that little Ryou was okay. **hugs Ryou and Bakura kiss-kiss plushies**
I got some for you too! **hands bakurasgirl kiss-kiss plushies**
Wheehoo! It's Saturday, and that means in another hour I will be heading up to my church to sing. The choir director of our church is a big fan of anime, so a lot of times we get to sing songs from different animes. We're going to be singing "Messiah" from Angel Sanctuary, and "Sora" from Escaflowne. YAY!
But I have one thing to say. I pray that Ryou doesn't get PMS as bad as I do when he is a woman!
I swear to god I am a total **ahem** when umm... yeah... ^_^; I feel sorry for poor Bakura. BUT IF YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT.... **holds up her trademark frying pan**
Bakura - **cowers in fear**
OHBOY! I can't wait! Write more, hun! You are the greatest and are my inspiration to keep writing!
I just read the Fall of Icarus AGAIN for the ba-zillionth time, and when she got to the chapter where Anzu hugged the beehive, I was laughing so hard, I accidentally tipped the computer chair over and fell on my head. And I was crying like crazy too. I hate it when I cry, it makes me so sad.
Keep up the awesome work! ^____^ hehehehe
YEAH ROMANCE! ^___________^ |
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