| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryuuka On: April 08, 2003 05:52 CDT
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well...Ryou seems to have adapted to being a women...uh...quickly for the most part. Well, yeah, because she's so hot. I wonder how Bakura's going to act about the lingerie. "It's revealing like friendship"? GOOD GOD THE GIRL NEEDS TO BE SHOT! I can't wait to Ryou get all emotional during his time of month, that will be so funny! This is going great! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 07, 2003 23:12 CDT
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OH I feel so sorry for Ryou haha I alway say that a guy couldnt survive having cramps! You made me horrible lol I cant stand to look at Anzu now whenever I see her I can just picture her carring Fluffy and going on and one about friendship!! hehe |
Reviewed By: JOcelyn On: April 07, 2003 20:46 CDT
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Wow! Anzu and RYou... in one chappie! Okay, i love ryou, but he's so easy to torture... RYOU IS THE NEW YAMI!! I doubt ryou is gonna appreciate what youve done to him... man, i wanna be a boy now! Oh well... At least we have womens rights!!!
Bakura: Gee, our little activist...
Me: Bite me! Anyway, maybe it should be marik... or maybe another four-way... the possibilities are endless. At least steven will be happy that his 'son' is no longer gay... HE CANT HURT RYOU NO MORE CAUSE HE CANT HIT A GIRL!! Wouldnt put it past him though.. |
Reviewed By: Yui On: April 07, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Ryou's gonna have such a hard time with this! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA- *gasps for breath* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Tampons, cramps, pregnancy, periods, oh what a fun experience this will be! Ha ha! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very Interesting story. and I can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RYOU'S GETTIN A PERIOD!!!!!!!!! *singing* someone's gonna die. LOL. I knew it was PMS when he bitched at Anzu but doesn't everybody. ANYWAYZ i sense people are going to die. *sadistic grin*
*singing again* let the red river flow! |
Reviewed By: Angel Black [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:42 CDT
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Hehehe he's gets his period. god, i didn't know some boys were that naive. at least for nine months ryou can get away from it cause when youre pregnant you dont have your period. |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
so happy I can review this!
Great chappie!
so cute, and cuddley....mmmm...
and fuzzy...............fuzz.......
me like.....
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: April 07, 2003 18:29 CDT
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PLEASE add the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:23 CDT
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Great chapter! Ryou in an emerald green nightie huh? hhmmm...sounds interesting! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: April 07, 2003 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*giggles insanely* Marik and Malik's talk was fun. Arguing over calling Ryou he or she was so cute. And I loved the little conversation between Bakura and Anzu about poor Malik. ^__^ Too, too funny. Tim coming up to them in the candy store had me slightly worried. I really enjoyed what Isis said to him on the way out. I wonder if he'll catch a clue?
Tigerlily: Ryou sounds like he's starting to get a little hormonal. I cheered when she blew up an Anzu.
I remember me at that age, I was a bitch and major pain in the ass 24/7. ~_~
Tigerlily: And you aren't now?
*glares* You should be grateful, I'm nowhere near as bad or evil as I used to be. Damn hormones. I can't wait for the little heart to heart and of course a detailed explanation on feminine needs from Isis. I wonder if he'll pass out? He better pop those pills before the talk starts. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: April 07, 2003 18:18 CDT
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Yes, Marik is funny. Still a bugger though. I also get the feeling he's gonna be the second daddy... I was hoping for Malik, but I guess Marik's ok too. No one can have everything in life. I feel sorry for Ryou. He can be SO naive sometimes. And poor Isis... having to explain THAT thing. *laugh* but I can just see Ryou sitting there, totally confused by what she's saying!! So funny! Keep up the excellent work! Lookie! I said "excellent" instead of "good!" I feel smart and less repeptitive!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:17 CDT
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Karen: Poor Ryou. I remember having to learn about...that. I can only imagine it being ten times more embrrassing for a former male.
LD: Hilarium abounds. *snickers*
Karen: I swear, you have no heart LD. I am sure Ryou's friends, though shocked, will be fine with the transformation. 'Cause that is just how they are! I will refrain from saying what we can all imagine going here.
LD: Thank the gods. Oh, but I can't wait for the Marik/Ryou heart to heart. I don't think it'll go perticularly well... hehehe. This is so exciting! |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 17:52 CDT
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*giggles* Poor Isis. *shakes head* |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! Ryou's gonna have PMS!! HAHAHA!! That's gonna be funny!!!!! |
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