| "Blood-Red Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel99 On: May 17, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give the whole thing a ten...because this fic just rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The plot is very good and the yokai inu and hanyou inu just fits perfectly to the story. So do the other characters. I enjoyed it very much!!!
I hope you write more stories about inuyasha and kagome! I want to read aa of them!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
There are some paragraphs missing in Chapter Ten. Maybe you should reload it; I'd really like to read them.
It's kinda' funny, actually... "having (ev)ery female we come acros..." hee! |
Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan On: May 09, 2003 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic it one of my fav. I think that you should go with both of your ideas in future chapters. This is a great twis to Inu-chan and Kagome-chan's relationship. Ihope to see futer chaters posted soon! |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 09:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, maybe it's just me, but I felt sorry for poor Kouga-kun. *pouts* I'm not the only one that likes Kouga, am I? O_o; I can't help it, I like his character, and he's not afraid to let Kagome know how he feels, unlike a certain hanyou... ^_^
But, still, it was a good idea to bring him into the fic, along with Sesshoumaru. I can't wait to see what happens now that they have arrived on the scene. I wonder.... will Kouga be able to just let Inuyasha have Kagome.... hmmmm.... ^_^
Also, wonderful lemon with a human Inuyasha! My hentai heart loved it! ^_^
And on your question... O_o; what a silly question! Of course you should continue this! If you don'tt I'll send my rabid pack of youkai hamsters after you! Be afraid! Be VERY afraid! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! O_o; *looks around nervously and clears her throat* o_O; Ummmm.... yeah... uh... just continue this okay. ^_^
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: bsasami153 On: May 06, 2003 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One more Demon writing to go...! |
Reviewed By: Nick F. On: May 06, 2003 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew!
That is SOO hot!
Well, I really think you should take your friend's suggestion and continue this. Damn! This is good stuff! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I very much think that you should continue. These are some fine lemons, but it doesn't seem to me that the story ends here.
Many issues were brought up: the rules, offspring, Kagome's place in this new "pack," and now issues with Sess and Kouga (great move having it be both of them, by the way). At least a few of these should be resolved before it's over. I love reading different people's takes on youkai culture. |
Reviewed By: ShellBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 22:34 CDT
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Please continue turn him into demon one more time plz |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 17:12 CDT
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AHHH!!!! *BITES* WAAHH!!!! T-T YOU STOPPED IT RIGHT THERE!!! YOU MONSTER!!! HOW COULD YOU!?!?!?
o.o;;; Er...I mean...Please continue ASAP or I shall surely die!!! ^_^ Thank you!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I bet it's Kouga...^_^;;; That's just my guess!!! Ooh, he's gonna be REALLY jealous I bet!!! XD |
Reviewed By: I_luv_inuandkurama On: May 04, 2003 23:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, please keep writing, can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you have a great style of writting this is one of my favorite stories so far. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 07:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whether it's jealous Kouga or Sessoumaru or even schemy Naraku or schemy-jealous Kikyo, next chap expects fun and yumminess!
(Memo to self: too much sugar) |
Reviewed By: lulu On: May 01, 2003 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, all I can say is, WOW! I mean, there aren't too many well written lemons around here, and lemme just say yours is just great! Great writing style and I just love the lemons! ^__^ Update soon cuz I'm loving this fic! |
Reviewed By: samantha On: April 30, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...um...very discriptive..yes,nice story.this was written very well. |
Reviewed By: hi On: April 30, 2003 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story please put more chapters up |
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