| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 03:27 EDT
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Part of me feels fufilled now that I have read this chapter! It was sooo funny! I had to keep pausing in between paragraphs. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Has Hojo learned nothing! Stay away from Kagome when she is steamed. (Even InuYasha isn't that brave!) Speaking of steamed I thought for sure you would sic InuYasha on Hojo, for his outburst- "Someone has to protect you." I know I covered my eyes before reading the next part after that comment. I thought I was going to die as Koga started to realize the situation. Then InuYasha tells him to-"Take a number." Really does Hojo not remember what era he is in? Back then women where objects to fight over. Duh!! Oh, the paragraph was a little confusing. I had to read it a couple of times to get it. And the ending felt a little rushed but, I'll live.
I was going to send you some name suggestions but due to the site being down I was not able to get the address. oh well! Nice choice though. And thank you! Thank you! Thank you! For updating as soon as the site came back up!
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 23:07 EDT
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Ha, cute! It will be interesting if Kouga decides to go back with them...and I have a feeling he will. After all, he will want to stick with Kagome, piss off Inuyasha, and keep his eyes on Hojo. |
Reviewed By: Brownilocs On: August 13, 2003 05:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed the last 21 chapters & can't wait for more. It's really refreshing to see Hojo depicted as the idiot I believe him to be without it seeming ridiculously over-written. HE still come across as likable. He deserves to be ruffed up a bit but then again so do our beloved Inuyasha, Miroku & Kouga too. They all act like idiots when it comes to dealing with the women they love. I just hope they Hojo return to modern-day Japan alive & mostlye one piece and that Shippo isn't an evil entity like Hojo thinks...
Oh, I also have name suggestions. I don't know they will be anything you like but I figured it was the least I do considering how much I have your story:
Kamaria, Nuray, Aysel (all moon related)
Rois, Varda, Sirvart(all rose related)
Femke, Niu, Cailin (all girl related)
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!! Thanx :) |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 02:13 EDT
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Ladies and gentlemen, we are all here to say our last goodbyes to Hojo, because in the next chapter either InuYasha or Koga is going to kill him! ( I'd put Miroku in the toss up but, he wouldn't make it to Hojo before those two. ) They will probably decide who gets the honors with a coin toss....
Thanks for putting in Koga! I knew it would turn oh so juicy if he turned up! For a moment there I thought InuYasha was going to forget his promise. ( but if InuYasha is not allowed to kill him, I know he would not give Koga the pleasure. ) Oh boy, Kagome saves Hojo's life, yet again!
I wonder how the Shippo situation is going to work out. And Sango is going to be mad tat she missed the floor show. I can't wait til Kagome tells all of them off! But me thinks that Koga will have to go through his "my woman speech" first. Because if InuYasha can smell her I know Koga can, too! This going to be sooo good!
Thanks for the update but please post the next chapter soon I have to know what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: caliko On: August 10, 2003 11:06 EDT
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Ahhhh!!1 YES!!!! SOMEONE FINALLY TOLD THEM BOTH OFF! LOL... i really enjoyed that one! ^_^ Make Kouga join the crew! /snickers/ it would be fun to watch Yasha, Kouga, AND the Hentai Monk plot against the poor boy! |
Reviewed By: Madartiste On: August 09, 2003 19:20 EDT
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This is certainly one of the most entertaining fics I've read in a long while. You do an excellent job keeping everyone in character. The pacing is good as well. Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 10:51 EDT
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If Inuyasha had been smarter, he would have let Kouga kill/maim Hojo >) Nice chapter ^^ |
Reviewed By: someone importent On: August 09, 2003 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story |
Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 18:10 EDT
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This is good. Speechless, yup yup! Keep it up! ^_^
Raye-Rei |
Reviewed By: becky On: August 02, 2003 02:35 EDT
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poor inuyasha how could anyone have been so mean to him as a kid he was so cute! as for hojo they should have taken him out back and shot him years ago....how could anyone be so so DUMB? *grr* i hope kagome hears about this and gives him a piece of her mind maybe this also deserves another slap?? but im sure two slaps wont get through hopos thick head. which makes ya wonder....was he dropped as a child? multiple times even? well enough wasting my time on hobo just wanted to say how great this fic is and how happy i am that you update quickly so nobody dies waiting. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: mint On: August 02, 2003 02:28 EDT
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inuyasha really needs to kick hobos ass. at least he kept his temper for kagomes sake, but seriously he is really starting to get on my nerves. anyway glad youre so great at updating and the story is still the greatest so i hope you stick with it till its over whenever thats gonna be (hopefully not for a long time!)
p.s. love the kurama part he is a major hottie!!! |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:02 EDT
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dah! effin hojo! i wish i could kick his ass... HOW CAN ANYONE BE THAT MEAN TOWARDS SHIPPO?!?!?!?! grrr.... baka... inuyasha n kagome are like his new family, its not a good idea to piss them off. I really like the story, update soon! (Kurama's a hottie... n its just so funny what u write before n after chapters... ) |
Reviewed By: M. Durand On: August 01, 2003 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is quite enjoyable and doesn't let me go. I also like the unrelated sidelines w/Kurama & you. Really funny! Write more Inu fanfics, i'm sure they'll turn out real good! |
Reviewed By: Uncle Rickie On: August 01, 2003 15:21 EDT
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Mutter Father AAAAIEEE! dO HaST mEisT BIatchchachachacha! |
Reviewed By: VEE On: August 01, 2003 15:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the Sh1T is wrong with HOpo....is he on something?!? Shippo isn't some kind of freak. He's a bit too furry for anything like that! By the way Inuyasha should wup some major A$$ next capter! |
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