| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious On: June 26, 2003 22:54 EDT
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I read Ch 13 and I liked it. Keep the up dates coming!!
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Reviewed By: becky On: June 24, 2003 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FANFIC KICKS! haha I can't stop laughing. I also really enjoy the Kurama parts. Here is one of the best fanfics a person can come by. Keep up to good work and update as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 15:58 EDT
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I almost feel bad for Kouga. I like the fact that you made Inuyasha overhear Hojo, and that Inuyasha held his temper back. It makes me wonder if he wanted to keep his word to Kagome, or if he just wants to get his 10 days ^^ I think he would have done more, regardless of the 10 days...and that he only 'behaved' because he really didn't want Kagome mad at him. |
Reviewed By: HimitsuTheHunter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say... i didnt really expect that much from the fic until i got into it... But Man That was L33+ ^_^ lol. The turning point for me was when Miroku was remembering the "wise" words of his sensei. lol. dam that was funny
Hmmm... Hojo seems to have a certain fear of Kitsune.... hmmm... lol
Keep on going i wanna see where this ends up!
-Himitsu the Hunter |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 20, 2003 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get a thumbs up all the way around!! This is by far one of the best fan fics that I have ever read. I could see everything in my mind as if it were on TV. I could barely read the chapter 10 because I was laughing so hard! I always wanted to know what would happen if Hojo came there, now I know. I definitly approve of the hut scene with InuYasha And Kagome, it shows the soft side of our loveable half breed we usually don't see. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*giggles* Ok, so Shippo is 'setting up' Hobo. Too bad Kagome caught him. It would have been fun to see Hobo get yelled at again! Are they leaving soon??? |
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 16:04 EDT
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//sob// TOO SHORT.. need MORE.. please??? ^_^
~caliko |
Reviewed By: tigereyzgurl609 On: June 19, 2003 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic! Please keep it updated and continue with it because I hate it when people stop writing all of a sudden during the middle of a fanfic! You have a very creative plot and I like that it wasn't "choppy" writing! Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very funny! i like it a lot! keep on updating! i cannot wait to read the next chapter! i wanna known more about that talisman and what it has to do with everything!! |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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*grins* Ahh the endless torture of Inu-chan and Miroku! Ok, now I'm wondering about Hojo with Shippo. Why is he acting that way towards him?
As for Hobo's feelings towards Kagome and Sango (is Sango developing a crush? Ewwwww!) what is with them?? Yeah he (Hobo) is a different type of guy than they're both used to but can't they 'see' through him? *shakes head* Unbelievable. |
Reviewed By: stacie On: June 17, 2003 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, great, great!!!please update! love the ear scratching and neutering part, hope more to come!! love the fact that you don't alter the characters and stuff, this could be good enough to be part of the series :) |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 03:22 EDT
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Oh, I forgot something. Thanks for redoing the chapter. I can understand it a lot better now. An stealing Kurama's undeies are naughty! (lol) But my the interesting colors they are!
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Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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*laughs* You never fail in the humor! *shakes head* Well maybe Inu-chan will be able to scare the bone-head Hobo anyway! *evil grin* Please do that?? |
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 19:36 EDT
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MORE! Please? **Sitting up and begging*** ^_^ I'm loving this |
Reviewed By: kili087 On: June 14, 2003 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still haven't stopped laughing. please do update soon. :) |
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