| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 16:24 EDT
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wow! awesome chappy, but i still didnt get to see the dumbass's head split open... you'd better update soon! sorry i didnt review sooner, but my parents wouldnt let me do anything til i finished the evil summer reading assignment. keep up the good writing! you rock! (but please have hojo get the crap beaten out of him next time. love ya!)
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Title: chapter 43
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 17:18 EDT
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Hi The chapter seemed kind of short but you were able to make things clear. Thanks for the update, jschu25
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 22:23 EDT
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Wow. Great chapter. But not what I want. When I saw the update and remeber where you left us, I instantly uncorrectedly thought, *with glee and happiness* Hojo's going to get it, Hojo's going to get it, over and over again. Oh well I can wait another chapter for Kagome to beat his ass into the ground. *with wide hopeful eyes* She is going to beat his ass into the ground, isn't she?
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Title: Also, for the most recent part of my memory that functions. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 02:03 EDT
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Hamsters! And. . . I hope Hojo gets his ass kicked. NOW goodnight
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Title: Do you have any idea how hard it is to read your fanfic and not laugh loud enough to wake my family at the same time? I think my ribs broke sometime near chapter thirty. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oy. . . that was a helluva long read. Worth it though! I love your little author-note-things which prove once again that genius and insanity are separated by a very fine line made entirely of oreo crumbs. Oyyyy. . . my head hurts. . . *rubbing head.* Maybe I shouldn't read things like this in one gulp. Anyway, I now have a new favorite author! And you have a new junkie, because my old favorite author did bad things to their arm. X.x. Also, I like laughing my head off. And suddenly I wonder how this fanfic hid from me like that. *Mumblemutter* Anyway, great. . . *yawn* great fanfic, and g'night. . . and stuff. . .*yawn*
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 01:43 EDT
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eeek! too short! but still good. Is Kagome going to hurt Hobo? PLEASE?!?
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 21:41 EDT
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Hehe... evil hamster *snickers* oh yeah, please update!
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Reviewed By: LDD [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 16:09 EDT
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Hooray for the update! ^_^ I'm so glad you did! Anyway, I love the whole story, even the author's notes are hilarious! Please update soon, I wonder what's going to happen to Hojo. Methinks it will be something painful, ne?
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Reviewed By: Ryuu of the Broken Light [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, this fic is hilarious. please,p lease update real soon! i love the idea!
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Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 02:25 EDT
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Well then... It is about time someone kicked Hojo's ass, isn't it? All the better that it's Kagome. Kind of poetic justice mixed with irony, though truthfully I don't know if she'll hurt him bad or just banish him or what. It's gonna be fun to see regardless. The last twenty chapters have all been building up to this scene so unleash the pain on Hojo and give us an update!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin On: July 10, 2004 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOJO'S GUNNA DIE!!! HOJO'S GUNNA DIE!!! ^_^ yippee!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ophelia Revived [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 14:17 EDT
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Wow! This is a great fic! The concept is hysterical, and I think you have done a wonderful job with it. Everyone is in character. This could be an episode, it's so good! Plus, your little author notes are so funny! Usually, I just skip over the author's blather, but your dialogues actually make me laugh out loud. Sometimes it's a little hard to follow what is going on, who is thinking what and so forth, but you always clear everything up. In fact, I prefer it that way. It makes reading your work VERY entertaining. I also have a great appreciation for authors who can write without having the characters paring up and rutting like bonobo monkeys after chapter 3. You MUST keep this fic going! It's great! I wish there were more authors and fictions like this! It would make being a die-hard fiction reader much more enjoyable! Carpe Noctem, Ophelia Revived p.s. one itty, bitty, tiny, little thing: though I appreciate being able to use the "f-word" artfully, it does tend to up the rating of a fiction. I think you might want to make this one rated R. Inuyasha's a potty-mouth.
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 00:20 EDT
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dude, that was cool! i hope she really hurts hojo because that little snot is starting to get on my nerves (actually, i think hes been tap-dancing on the since the begining of the fic.) plan something evil! hit him once (or twice) for me! update soon! your fic rocks!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 nli On: July 08, 2004 18:44 EDT
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Uh-oooohhhh.... Hojo's gonna get his ass kicked! FINALLY!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: haleos18 On: July 08, 2004 15:48 EDT
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w00t! hojo is FINALLY gonna get his ass kicked!!!! horray!!! and the kleptomaniac meeting was hilarious! hope you update soon!
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