| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vioden On: August 01, 2003 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Shippo that HOMO was imagining sounds like a freaky mother FKR*. I wonder how Koga is going to react when he learns of Hobo...Vegetto F****'N rules!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 00:17 EDT
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So InuYasha is going to take his frustrations of Hojo out on Koga? Now that just isn't right. Well I guess Miroku will have to explain Koga to Hojo sooner rather than later. And thanks for the way you worded the begining of this chapter. It helped me figure out who was thinking the italics in the last chapter, I think? So if that is not the real Shippo then where is he? Is Kagome going to be mad at Hojo for much longer? What does Sango think about this new development?
I have to know! Enjoyed this chapter. ( even though it felt like a nessesary filler ) Be looking for the next one. |
Reviewed By: mizuko On: July 25, 2003 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was confuse ( still am) about hojo's adversion to Shippo. (Who could dislike such a cute kit?) But I reread it. It almost sounds like Hojo was insiuating that Shippo is a ghost...Creepy. But funny too.
I'm I on to something or am I way off and just really confuzzled?
Anywho I really like this story, it's so funny ^_^. You gave hojo new meaning to the word clueless!
-Mizuko |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: July 25, 2003 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear if you don't tell us what Hojo's problem with Shippo is in the next chapter i'm going to curse you out. It will make you feel bad. Do you want to feel bad? I didn't think so. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 23:49 EDT
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Great fic ^^ I'm so sad that I haven't yet found out what the deal is with Hojo and Shippou! I really, really didn't think I would like this, based on the summary, but I am glad I took the time to read it! |
Reviewed By: nekobaka On: July 24, 2003 23:25 EDT
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the part where hojo refused to save shippo when he had the chance?
she isent mentioning it - did she not here? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 18:37 EDT
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Cliffhanger! ( *whinny vocie* ) Nooo, I hate cliffhangers! Hmmmm.. I wonder what Hojo was trying to say. I think he completely blow off the fact that they could have gotten killed to ask if Shippo has a crush on Kagome. And wants to know if he is using his shape-sifting powers to look like a kid still. The italicied part during the battle is Miroku, right? Oh well, I'll figure it out. Thanks for the update. Be checking for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aisuru On: July 24, 2003 18:05 EDT
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This is such a great fic! Please update very soon. I just HAVE to know why he is so scared of the kitsune! |
Reviewed By: RainCloudRoth On: July 22, 2003 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I have been reading this fic for almost two months now and contine waiting for you to update. Very good story! |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: July 21, 2003 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was chapter 18 not nifty? Yes it was! ^_^
So, do we get to see Hojo display some kickass
powers of his own in the next chapter? And will
he ever get a clue? Only the author knows....
Looking forward to more (and more and more etc) |
Reviewed By: nekobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crourser and crouser
what is hojo's problem with shippo?
must say though - kagomes gota be prity pissed at him for this - the others to but spesely her
hehe - cant wait to see THAT confruntation.
please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: French Fairy On: July 21, 2003 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo glad you updated, I've been checking every few days to see if you have heh.
Up to now, I've been half annoyed and half amused with Hojo. Now he's just annoying me. It's because he knows Shippo is a demon right? Gah!!! I'd really like to kick him!!!!!
The ratings I gave are all high because I think this story is just one of the best I've read. Definetly one of my favorites (there aren't that many fics that I check up on nearly every day). Heck, I'm even enjoying the author notes. Now that is really creative, having an almost mini story in them, I've never seen that before and I think it's funny. Though, I have to confess to not knowing the character you are talking to or about... heh. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 03:13 EDT
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Well this is new. Hojo is developing a back bone in this battle, now of all times! Why didn't he stay in the village or just hang back to see what a battle is like first before attemping to help unless asked to do otherwise?! I hope doesn't think that a "normal" arrow can take a demon down. He is so going to get someone hurt ( probably InuYasha or Kagome ). Then he'll will get chewed out by the one that isn't hurt. However for his sake it better not be Kagome that gets hurt. But enough of you babbleing.
Thanks for the quick update. Be looking for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel One [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO HAPPY to have made this my first official Inu Yasha fic to read. Your story is not only great, but your style is awesome and you update frequently. Kudos and keep up the good work! (and I love the little sidenotes at the beginning and end - gotta love the humor!) |
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