| "Untold Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: okokok On: January 31, 2004 15:03 CST
Comment/Review:
write more
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Reviewed By: ookami_rocks On: January 28, 2004 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok 4get what that idiot said and use the japanese words. we like the language but are cursed by not knowing the whole language. i personally do use as much japanese as i can in my speech and would use whole japanese if i could but i cant so we can make due with what we have. besides some japanese ppl like 2 use some english too, you can see that by looking at some of the anime themes which have 1 or 2 english sentences in them, such as the opening song "I want to change the world".
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Reviewed By: Koniko-chan On: January 14, 2004 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
zhey really intresting story you have here ^_^ I'm a little confused about Kohaku though, you said earlier on the shikon no tama was completed meaning the there is no way kohaku can still be alive, unless there is still a chip missing from it. ^_^ but other than that slight confusion, this is very exiting I do hope you will continue. I especially like your writing style, several fics I've read in the past were very promising story line wise but the writing style that was used either killed it or severly dulled the edge it could have had. great job
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 12:05 CST
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Are you still alive? Are you okay? It's been forever sense you updated and I'm getting worried!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good please update soon.
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Title: tgyf
Reviewed By: inuyhakmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic keep writing
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: DemonKitty51 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i love your story!!!! where did you find those names????? i do think if he loved that much he would say he loved her even in his hanyou form.... but that's just me??? i can't wait for you to update! that sandrock production story is really good too!!!! i loved it it gave me good inspiration to!!!!! good luck and keep up with the excelent writing!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lani On: September 26, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! oooh! wow! i luved ur fanfic!!!!! i think its absolutely wonderful!!!! omg! i hope the twins rnt dead!!!!! wah! thatd be terriblr if they did....or is it shippo that dies?!*panicks* ok, ne way.....I HATE Naraku!!!! well, in this story, coz (sorry for rambling yea) in the anime series its all thanx to Naraku Kikyo is dead, n dont he wanna kill her too *again....*? if he does, then Kagome will have inu, and since naraku killed kikyo all those years ago, kagome was brought to the past n blah blah blah.....well, ne way, i love this story, and i was just wondering wut Iie and Demo are.....soooo many jap terms!!!! well, ne way, goood story so far n i cant wait for more!!!!!!!
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Title: pruningshears here
Reviewed By: great job! On: September 23, 2003 20:18 CDT
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wow great job! so whats gonna happen? please post more soon!!! evil cliff hanger!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The next chapter has got to be extra long because I don't think I can take another cliffie!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: pruningshears ^_^ On: September 10, 2003 09:52 CDT
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umm, dont' you think she would have mentioned the cursing? I mean its a horrible example to set dont you think? And your making him an insensitive prick, more so than before. but i cant wiat for the next chapter, is this any where near close to ending? cause i cant really tell, nice job! loved the " 'Bitch!' 'That's a new one!'" that was perfect! lol, nice job! post more soon! |
Reviewed By: saiyajin_princess On: September 10, 2003 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz update |
Reviewed By: RavenShadow On: September 09, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I love this fic!! I remember the last month of my pregency with twins a living nightmare!!! No sleep, pain galore, and mood swings to make the devil hide! You captured it all, I can not wait to see what is going to happen next!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: pruningshears ^__^ On: September 03, 2003 09:51 CDT
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nice job! posessed huh? well, please post more soon! and i vote for the first name and the one meaning strife. hurry and post more okies? and we really need to establish whterhe or not naraku is dead is mirkou's kanzana gone? |
Reviewed By: Kitcat ^_^ On: September 01, 2003 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do enjoy this fic it is one of the few original plots with Inuyasha I've seen so far. There are too many simular plots out there and I get them all confused. Well I usually read this on fanfiction.net but they are unaccessable at the moment. As for the names I vote for Ichiru and Kigai. I look forward to your next chapter. ^_^ |
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