| "Dream Weaver" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 22:15 CDT
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Have you read the Dreamweaver? I can't remember who it's by... |
Reviewed By: Just Another Saiyan Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 22:08 CDT
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Very good story. It is definitely building itself up to a HAPPY ending. HAPPY. HAPPY. Please let me escape my miserable, depressing reality with some happiness for a change!! :) |
Reviewed By: NK On: July 10, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love to see hiei and kurama get in love. It's soooo nice to have something in common (demon+demon) or common interes. I just love those two guys together because the way hiei has love for the fox's and fox's love for hiei and in their dreams tooo. Please make the next chapter a happy ending for both of them they are sooo cute together.
Seeya later!!!=) |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 19:08 CDT
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Cool. Great story! Love the 'dream weaver' plot. after reading the chapters you have, i'd say they are all screaming, "MAKE THIS LAST CHAPTER A LEMON,' but the story would still be awesome if you made it sad. please continue with whatever choice you make soon!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hm... On: July 10, 2003 18:36 CDT
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End it happy.
See, you don't have to ask if I liked this story or not because if I didn't, I wouldn't have read it to the end. So there! |
Reviewed By: Rose Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this stuff! KuramaxHiei rocks!^_^ Make it a happy ending and a lemon! Cuz lemons are yummy |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 04:58 CDT
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Yay another chapter and a promised one to come.
Please let them get together. I'll live without a yaoi lemon but they both are such sad characters it would be nice after all the torment suffered here and in other fics that they could be together.
Besides the poor Dream Weaver is back in prison it would be nice if she could have helped two who need each other get together-a consolation and boon to her karma.
Loved your story so far. So do you have other fics planned in the near future? |
Reviewed By: anime_angel123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please have a nice yaoi ending!! I hate to see (almost) everyone's favorite coupe end up in misery. Its so SAD. My only suggestion is MAKE THE STORY LONGER THAN JUST 5 CHAPTERS!! I'M Begging you!!! I'm totally addicted to this fic (But I'm not gay/lez or anything myself, mind you. I'm perfectly straight.) |
Reviewed By: ^_~ On: July 09, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur story. plz update soon & don't u dare make it a sad endin, idc bout lemon or not, but get Hiei & Kurama together, especially after wat da Dream Weaver had gone throu, & get her out of da damn freakin cell!!!!!!
thatz all 4 now
P.S. u must lllluuuuuvvvvv DBZ ;) |
Reviewed By: Bolivianprob [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love Kurama Hiei Yaoi! Dont end it in a sad manner!!!! Thanks for listnen! |
Reviewed By: Teena M. On: July 09, 2003 17:01 CDT
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Teena: *waves brightly* Lemon! Happy ending! Ignore your brother, he has no taste. Kura-chan deserves a happy ending! |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 01:21 CDT
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I vote for a lemon! Please make it a happy ending... my lifes depressing enough as it is to have this end badly... Um... I'll give you a cookie! ::waves a box of oreo cookies:: yummmy cooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssss! Cookies improve everyones mood!
~Elvia |
Reviewed By: la-la On: July 08, 2003 22:14 CDT
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heh, i like it really i do. please continue! |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 17:17 CDT
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Good chapter. I am enjoying the story. Ah the angst, so soothing in a twisted way.
When I get the nerve I just may check out that site. |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 03:31 CDT
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I'm going to have to check out that website... It'll be something interesting to try when my hubby gets back in December! Great chapter, I liked the dream sequences. I feel so bad for Kurama though... I can't stand the thought of his cute little self crying. He's just so sweet. Well... his human part is sweet, Youko Kurama was pretty evil. That's why he's one of my favorites! And I agree, spiked bracelets are very pretty, however I prefer the chokers. I have about 20 matching sets of bracelets and chokers that I got from Hot topic back in my high school days. Unfortunately after having a child you can't really wear spiked jewelry without causing harm to said child. Oh well.
~Elvia |
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