| "Dream Weaver" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rose Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wee, you finished it ^_^ Thank you, it was great! Though I really was rooting for a lemon. ~sigh~ oh well, I guess I can deal. Good job! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KURAMA AND HIEI......... *twiches* ME love those two especially Hiei Damn that demon is hot and then Kurama such a sexy fox *licks my lips* Yaoi YUMYYY! Please my dear I need the second ending damn it!!!! NOW! and if you could manage some Yaoi lemonade in the process very much apreciated.
Love ya ! later! |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 02, 2003 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you sooooo much for writing a happy ending. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 23:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I had a grin stretched from ear to ear. I thoroughly enjoyed this ending. I like the way you wrote Kurama's internal dialogue about the incident with the Dream Weaver and how well he knows Hiei, and that forcing Hiei to do anything just isn't something he wants to do.
I'm really going to have to see what that position is about. |
Reviewed By: Jennifred [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*melts into a puddle of goo* I could have sworn I had reviewed this before, maybe not. Anywho, I loved this story, and I loved the happy ending! You did a great job caputuring their emotions, and making all of it seem believable. Good job ^^
-Jennifred |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm gone from cyberspace for a while and look what happened! I have to say I enjoyed both endings. They each fit the story well. However I am a sucker for happy endings so YAY! Oh and I honestly tried to write an ending myself but I just couldn't do it. I just couldn't get into their heads I guess... I mean after all it is your story and I have a hard enough time writing my own. Sorry... If you write any other fics in the future though send me an email or something! I really love your style of writing. |
Reviewed By: Trina On: August 01, 2003 06:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sugoi a little short and u tell nothing but I still liked the second ending. |
Reviewed By: animeHELLangel On: July 28, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. It's just what us YYH freaks have beenwaiting for :) |
Reviewed By: Kristoth On: July 27, 2003 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was an amazingly well written story. but i won't accept an unhappy ending when it involves Hiei and Kurama!!!!!!!!! lol. i can't help it, it just won't process in my brain that they couldn't be together, lol. it was a great story though, this fangirl gives it ten thumbs up :) |
Reviewed By: Tori On: July 24, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yay! I like the sad ending, but I'll LOVE the happy ending. I can't wait! So hurry up please? Oh, and smack The Boy for me. hee hee.
-Tori |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 03:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah so painful. Beautiful and heartbreaking. I'm sorry I read it but glad as well. I liked the inclusion of the song and the length was correct.
Well I'm off to feel like an idiot for crying.
If you remember the site where you got the song post it cause I'd like to hear it. |
Reviewed By: la-la On: July 24, 2003 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is a great story. When I first got into reading fanfics I was kinda yoai-baised too, because I just couldn't see my favorite charaters that way. I soon realized that it really is just a story, and gay people never bothered me at all, so why should gay anime characters? I give this story 10 out of 10 |
Reviewed By: xi_hou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That "me" person is a flaming moron, ne? It's an excellent story, and your average mature reader doesn't care if you are gay, straight, or attracted to fruit. You write well, and that's all that matters.
I liked your sad ending, by the way. (Yep, I'm an angst queen.) That's not to say that I'm not looking forward to the happy ending, but Kurama is so...lovely...in misery. *evil laugh* Write on, m'aam. ;-) |
Reviewed By: Trina On: July 23, 2003 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
u mad a ending i'm so happy. 2 bad it was a sad one so make the other one quick. and plese be in a happy mood. |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Very good fic...*still laughing at Kuwabara*
And as I said before, I'll be looking fwd. to reading both endings, because I like to see how ppl put Kurama and Hiei together (most of the time Hiei is OOC), but I also think Hiei would keep it bottled up inside of him for the most part. (and as for the "Are they even friends?" question...yes, they met about two years or so before the beginning of the series.)
Your spelling needs a wee bit of work though, gomen.
And I agree with your "chapter 5" 100%. For one, Western culture is waay too dualistic ("you're either this or that") and too logical ("if A, then B") for its own good. We need some insane sanity here!
Later!
-SirPsychoSexy |
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