| "A DRAGONBALL HONEYMOON" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princesssvegeta On: February 28, 2005 05:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love love love love this story am seriously going to cry when you post the final chapter. please say you willlllll continue :)
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 (havne't signed in yet) On: February 27, 2005 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter! I can't tell you how excited I was to see this fic updated at long last! I loved the Jewish Vegeta and Lester's "Australianisms". Amazing job DA!!
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Reviewed By: kendra(less)not loged in On: February 26, 2005 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually screamed of full blown joy when I received your email that you updated. As for the chapter I love the way mix the dark with the comedy. Even though I feel sorry for the loss vegeta had to experiance again. I'm glad his ass, saved his ass (bad pun intended).
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Reviewed By: Menal On: January 27, 2005 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE.
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I thought I was going to pee myself, I was laughing so hard. What Vegeta and Nappa did to Radditz was just aweful! I have really enjoyed reading your stories. Of all the fanfics, I think yours have remained truest to the characters. I look forward to the continuation of this story.
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Reviewed By: zorella_happymood On: November 24, 2004 17:06 EST
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gokusgirl, seriously, how could this story lose readers? ^_^ Too damned good. DA, as per usual 'twas fantastic. It's always a 'yay!' moment when I get your email, and has been for so so long now. I'll still be around when the final email comes along (lets make that a long way away okay?)
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 16:44 EDT
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Wonderful! And you used Launch! What a great idea! I'm really enjoying this adventure; I love the mix of action and quiet moments of revelation. And I laugh! I would love to see the postcard pic! You really should do a series of drawings for this fic. It deserves them!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 06, 2004 20:49 EDT
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*watchs Trunks' rampage*...Holy Cow! I hate to see what a true saiyan baby would do. *Komachi Ayako, Xiahou Fumi, and Yin Yi`Jing nods their head in agreement* Komachi Ayako:*Blinks her eyes in disbelief* I agree with Bulma, I can't imagine Vegeta not wanting to train. Xiahou Fumi:*trieds to imagine Dodoria as a female*...Is it good that I can't Dodoria as female or not? Yin Yi`Jing:It good that you can't imagine that ,Young one. *Eyes glows with rage* I am going to rip Lunch(The evil one) up into little bits! Xiahou Fumi:*Back away form Veglma fearfully*....Um...I hate to be Lunch if Veglma get her hands on her... Komachi Ayako: All Right! Soon we shall see what the second wish is going to be. ...I still think its is to wish back Radditz and Nappa.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 22:40 EDT
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*wiping tears from her eyes* How many ways can I tell you you're brilliant? Superb comedy in this chapter, and as always your romance, action, and suspense elements are spot on. You certainly have the talent to make a living off writing. I'd be sure to buy every book, and I'm positive you'd have hundreds lined up behind me. Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 11:01 EDT
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deeeeee-licious! My, was that great! You reveal Vegeta's previous life with such grace. And your gift for comedy is at a zenith here! (I *was* wondering about Trunks!) Fine, fine, fine chapter! I read it before my morning coffee so I'm a bit woozy still. I'll read it again later today--that's how fun it was!
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing (not signed in) On: October 04, 2004 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are horrible to Vegeta! roflmao But so good too.... I haven't reviewed in forever! But--you're just too good a writer to ever just read and not review! I look forward to your next chapter.... Really look forward to it. Keep up the wondrful writing. It's this kind of writing that inspires me to write myself! ^______^
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 11:38 EDT
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I loved this chapter--the memory was wonderful. So realized and very emotional and entertaining. I really think you do the best job of tying Vegeta back to his former life. It folds into your stories so naturally; I love it. Looking forward to the next chapter, LisaB
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: August 02, 2004 03:16 EDT
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great chappy... your stories are so interesting... can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it'd be hard to top the last chapter, but this one was as poignant as it was funny. Amazing how your writing improves. This part 3 of your epic is by far the best--each chapter so self-contained yet somehow adding your dbz universe and exploring the B/V dynamic. Chibi Vegeta glimpses are a real weakness of mine--I love to speculate about the prince's life (seems that all fics do in that dept is linger on the abuse--I like your peripheral attention to the abuse and how you don't sensationalize it like some fic writers). Anyway, I was hoping for an update to this story just this morning and was so delighted it find one! Brava, brava! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: July 10, 2004 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolulty love your fanfictions I especally love this story. I agree with the other reviewers that you are a talented writer and I can't wait for the next chapter. And poor Vegeta having a child with Dorothy hopefully she'll leave them alone, here's a funny thought since the first wish is going to be used to bring back everyone Vegeta killed in Ivory City I bet the 2nd wish Bulma will use to bring back Vegeta and Trunks' tails. I also wonder if you are going to rewrite the Buu saga to fit into your fanfic timeline and include Trunks' psychic talent (and any other possible children Bulma and Vegeta might have) it would definatly be interesting, keep on writing we all love it.
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