| "Soldier Boys" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, like almost every other one of you fics, if not them all, this is a wonderful story. I love the way the story flows, along with the way you write each of the characters. I can't really find anything even slightly negative to say at this time. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Duo, at least he's no longer so clueless. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 17, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter, but poor Dou, he thinks is his fault. Anyways keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Duo is really clueless in this fic. Heero & Wufei knew what was up... |
Title: great story!
Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great! A good plot and I just love reading on how the boys are learning to work together. Let me know when you have the next part posted? |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Only Duo and maybe Quatre can get away w/ the sniveling kid routine. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 07, 2003 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the past two chapters. Dou finally noticed Heero blushing. Oh things are begining to get more interesting. Update soon and keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 08:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I always look forward to your fics, and looks like this one has kept the promise once more! I'm really enjoying the pace; it's fleshing out each character well, giving time to let the relations develop very naturally and realistically.
I also like the fact that we see the pilots in action a lot, not just playing (safe)house. It adds a level of realism, to see them in the context of a desperate and nasty war.
Writing, vocabulary and style tops as always. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 21, 2003 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter... Wufei joined in and Heero is... well let's just say I love those small Heero and Dou moments. Update soon and keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 12, 2003 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fics rock, Kracken. Your characterization is always fantastic, and it's refreshing to see an author who stays so true to the characters. I'm glad none of the boys can cook, because I'm sick of seeing fanfic writers turn Quatre into a little housewife, heh.
Hope to see more soon, 'cause I'm hooked. |
Reviewed By: Pretty Lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are trully a great autor. Your caracterisations are unique. The situations are original (like yours other stories), I enjoy your stories. Please continue like that.
Sorry if my english sucks (I'm french) |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: July 25, 2003 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well now my week is complete. Thanks for getting another chapter of this story out. It's interesting to see your take on the pilots. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Duo really doesn't get it does he ::snicker::
I like how this fic is making all the pilots more 3 dimensional. |
Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(*squeals*) Another ficcie! I can't wait to finish this one! I've read all your one-shots, the first 2 Shinigami's Lover Arcs, Tin Soldiers, and Crossing paths! You're such a wonderful writer! Finish this soon! |
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