| "Soldier Boys" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 18, 2003 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was great and so is this story... And I look forward to reading more...I can't wait until your next update so please update soon so I can read more.. Thanks for the update TTFN
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 10:06 CST
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That was so beautiful. **Glomps Heero & Duo** I loved the whole hug thing; so much can be expressed in that one action. Great job! Update Soon!! ~Wanders off **Huggling** Duo & Heero~
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 06, 2003 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 06, 2003 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a verry good chapter...I'm so glad Heero and Duo are understanding each other and working things out...And Trowa is nice to ...Well this srory is great as always and I really ,really want to read more so please update soon ... so unil then TTFN...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 05:49 CST
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The conversation about Quatre and Trowa's feelings (and how their relationship could foreshadow what happens to Duo and Heero) was interesting, though it didn't flow quite as well as your usual. The rest of the chapter however is just fantastic, as poor Duo-kun's mind and heart run to try to catch up with his body. S'ok, Heero's there to catch him though :) A nice twist on the 'unemotional soldier' canon, as we get a glimpse of how he evolved from that to what he is now. New chapter soon I hope!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 26, 2003 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this chapter. It's good that Wufei and Duo did come to an understanding. Heero as usual is so sweet. Keep it up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 11:19 CST
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Aww, that was sweet overall. I wanna see if Duo can crack through Fei's shell. Keep going! ~And so da Rurouni Wanders . . . ~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 25, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay another great chapter ..And this story is coming along really good ... I can't wait to find out what happens next..I hope you update soon so until then TTFN...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 10:40 CST
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I was just wondering what had happened to Wufei. Now we get to see how he integrates into the picture. Fascinating read as always.
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Title: Lovin' it
Reviewed By: Destinys' lot On: November 20, 2003 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
*grinning happily* This is so good I'll have to check out your book. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 18, 2003 12:13 CST
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GREAT chapter. (Grins) I always love Heero and Duo moments. Keep it up and update soon
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 17, 2003 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories Iv'e red in a long time ..And I look forward to each and every update and I encorage you to write more.. Because if you keep writing I'll keep reading ..Thanks for the update slease update again soo TTFN
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 17:08 CST
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AWW!! How wonderful!! I was so worried they were gonna get chased by Ozzies! Yay Trowa! . . . Wait a sec . . . **whacks Trowa for aggravating Duo's wounds** >= ( HMPH!! Poor Duo! I hope he recovers soon. Great job! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 08:59 CST
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That was hilarious :D And tense too, of course. But finding Trowa in the parking lot with Duo's underwear *dissolves into laughter* The dialogue with Quatre was excellent as well, brushing on several themes without belabouring them. Great writing all around. I'll be looking forward to seeing how the various relations evolves from here (IF you've finished beating up poor Duo now)
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 12, 2003 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't help but think that Heero is so sweet and so understanding of Duo's emotions. I love this chapter because it depicts their conflicting emotions during a time of war. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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