| "Soldier Boys" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 10, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the best ..I love this chapter and want to read more so please keep updating your doing such a good job ..And I want to read the next chapter so badly!!! thanks for the update ..TTFN
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 15:50 CST
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NOOOO!!!! You can't end it there!!! NO FAIR!!! **RATTLES PC MONTIOR ANGRILY** UGH!!! *heaves* I'm okay. lol!! Great chapter. Nice cover at the hospital. I like how you handled Duo's little revelation. *Glomps confoosed Duo* Hee! Hee! Update soon! Update Soon! Update Soon! ~Wanders away incessantly chanting "Update Soon!"~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 12:13 CST
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Agh! Talk about a cliffie, Duo (and the readers) being hurled through thin air! Great, heart-wringing chapter leading up to it, explaining in a very readable scene the several emotional steps Duo goes through. Now...all I can say is, you better let him land on his feet! And not just physically!
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Reviewed By: anonymous99 On: November 10, 2003 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always loved your stories. You manage to make the characters believable and the plots entertaining and intriguing. I especially like the way you adhere to the principle of yaoi- two men together. So many writers fall into the trap of making one of the male characters into a pseudo-female who acts more like a girl than a real girl does! Keepp the good work.
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly terrific! I never give 10 across the board but this story is great. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 07, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it when Heero get all mushy when it comes to Duo! That was a sweet, yet somewhat sad chapter. But it leaves the reader with alot of optimism, a kind of hope that their plan will work all because they love eachother. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 06, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just love this story ...It just keeps geting better and better with every chapter... and I will read every one.. so please keep writing so I can keep reading ..Please update soon.. TTFN
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 16:10 CST
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Awww!!! How sweet. *Glomps Heero and Duo* Injured Duo yelps* Oops! Sorry Duo-chan!! Hee Hee! I gotta see how they get outta dis scrap. Keep going!! ~resists da urge to wander and waits impatiently for next chapter~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 12:33 CST
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Super chapter! I'm all happy smiles now, despite the tension inherent to their situation. 'Fuck the right thing' indeed!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 15:37 CST
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**SQUEALS** YAY! LOL! I've been waitin' for that!! Excellent work!! Keep going!! ~.^ ~And so da wanderer skips away happily squealing...~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 00:07 CST
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Well that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! It's realistic, but also deeply touching. Sniff :) Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 28, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right way to go Duo or better yet way to go Heero ...I new thay loved each other.. This is the best story.. I can't wait till the next update...read you later..TTFN
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 28, 2003 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sighs! I love this chapter. I love it. I utterly love it. They kissed, they kissed...(does a happy dance). Keep up the good job and update soon.
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Title: Oh. My. Gawd.
Reviewed By: Gelasia Castle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just want to say this, wow. Now I'll e-mail you to tell you exactly how I feel! Wai!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**Sighs and blushes** How adorable. Now if only more writers could portray Heero in this manner, not just a mindless soldier. This is a truly great story. The characterization is some of the best I've ever read. Keep up the good work. **. . . an so the wanderer keeps wandering. . . **
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