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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 31, 2004 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and this chapter and look forward to reading more of both... Pleas update soon...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 31, 2004 09:24 CST
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Squishy!! I love this fic! I enjoyed reading this chapter. Keep up the awesome job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 20:29 CST
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*Cough* Well that was nice and "chokey"... It's so heart-wrenching how youngsters will come up with a word for things that are dear to them and keep that word no matter how old they are. I was surprised that it was Wufei that recognized Duo's need when he was asleep. Jeez, is there a heart somewhere in the Dragon after all? I loved how you wrapped up this chapter once the boys got through telling their stories to each other. Their little bout of awkwardness was so cute. So is Duo's nickname going to stick? : )
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 16:14 CST
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Oh wow . . . dat was so sad . . . *sniffles* Wufei was absolutely adorable; that one act just said sooo much about him. *sighs contentedly* Peez update soon!! ~Wanders away huggling Fei-chan to death~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 14:34 CST
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And here I was worried you'd forget Soldier Boys because you started a new fic! Excellent chapter, delving gently but powerfully into Heero and Duo's feelings. Sometimes emotional discussion scenes can be a bit long and drag, but this was perfect and kept me glued to the screen with my heart in my throat - heck it's still there - the entire length. And I love Wufei's reaction to the 'squishy'!
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful story that I could not put it down. I read the whole thing through, though it took me a few nights to do so and I love the way you write. Everything is great and you're doing such a great job. Please continue soon!!!! Yours truly!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 18:53 CST
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Awww! *Giggles* Wuffles is so cute in dis fic. I liked his warm reception. Hee! Hee! As for the bike, lol; dat was funny to me because it reminded me of how my brother would react to it. **Sighs** Poor Hee-chan. I hope that he at least won't revert back to his "perfect" soldier mode if he screws up his second chance. Update soon!! ~Wanders away teasing Fei-chan~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 20:10 CST
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Duo's getting back into the swing of being a young, fun-lovin' terrorist who blows things up real good! Super! I'm not sure I like that 'one more chance to prove (Heero) can stay in the war and love Duo too', sounds like Heero might have a nasty decision to take in the next few chapters...gulp.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter. I love how Duo and Heero are able to complement each other's skills and abilities. Update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 19:19 CST
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**Grins Manically** HEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! That is too adorable; the way Heero and Duo express their affection that is. I loved that! I dunno how you do it. But, keep it up. The best part about it, is that they never slipped OOC. Amazing!! ^.^ Update soon!! ~Wanders off Happily~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 27, 2003 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With every update or chapter .I just want to here more . That's right I just can't get enough and yes this story is that good ..Have you ever found a story you didn't it want to end.. This is one of them and I want more .. You just want it to go on and on and on because it is such a good story ..Ok so I'm getting sappy sorry well it is a great story so shoot me ok I'll stop now and please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 12:26 CST
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Whee excellent chapter, a well detailed and well thought out escape. Still lovin' every minute of this fic!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OOOoooooo!! Mucho like!!!! lol. Another great chapter. I liked the whole Duo on cloud nine thing. That was cute. Please update soon!! ~Wanders off to peek at Christmas presents~
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 20:31 CST
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I feel as if I'm walking on a very narrow fence. While I love how you're bringing Heero and Duo's relationship along slowly, I'm dying for a little more than hugs and nibbles! :( That scene in the gym was beautiful. I never knew working out could be so erotic. ;) The interaction between all the pilots is entertaining, and I thought Duo and Wufei's 'conversation' in the rec room was straight on. Duo engaged his mouth before his brain and Fei got his point across in his personable manner, as usual. This is an anjoyable fic so far and I'm looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 18, 2003 17:09 CST
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Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon!
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