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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 19:28 CST
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OMG! Dat's soo sad!! I think I'm going to cry! I like how you've kinda reversed roles here. You would think Heero would be the one to be able to just leave Duo to die, instead of the other way around. I'm really impressed how you've managed to keep them mostly in character on top of that. Great job!!! UPDATE SOON! ~Wanders off Sniffling~
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 22:54 CST
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aw that was sad
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 26, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is good to see Heero with fealings... I hope Duo can save him self... This is a good chapter ..Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Nubes On: February 21, 2004 10:34 CST
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Oh wow. OMG I love you. I don't even know what to say that could do justice to your story and writing skills. But I'll give it a shot anyway. Well first off let me tell you that while I do enjoy reading fanfics a story has to catch my interest right away for me to keep on wanting to read it. And your story has not only caught my eye but held it from where I sarted reading from chapter one and not stop until the last posted chapter. I've never done that before no matter how good a story is, but yours is amazing. Your writing skill are truly wonderful, your stroy flow was what really kept me glued to my seat. You've found a way to keep the story going on a steady pace. It's not slow where I go "my god when is something going to happen already!" or fast like "wait what the hell just happened!" no it's perfect. I guess what I'm trying to say is that I'm awed by your writing skills. The story not only does it flow nicely but it keeps the readers wanting to read on. Its simply not boring. Oh and your charactarization of the pilots is awesome. I've finally found someone who can portray Duo as Duo should be yay! Duo is my favorite and you've balanced his character perfectly. He's I think out all the pilots more complex. He's not exactly more human than any of them but he has this awarness I'm not sure how to explain that the others don't. He's not a goofball though never that he has fun but he's also very aware of his duties where he is willing to sacrifies himself for what he is doing. Not that the others wouldn't but sometimes authors forget or overlook that fact and it bothers me. Add to that, that you've made Duo's and Heero's relationship completely believable. Yes they have priorities and as much as it pains us to admit it's not each other it's the war and their missions. I'm glad that their love for one another hasn't blinded them into jeoperdazing their cause, yet they're intimate enough to make the readers like me realize they could and do have a life outside of the war. See your story flow doesn't let us forget that they are in the middel of a war and that it is dangerous to get involved but also that they're just as human as anyone else and no amount of training could ever strip them of that maybe like Heero make them forget for a while but never get rid of his emotions completely and I love that. And so the soldier boys will keep on holding on to hope even if they don't want to and we will keep hoping right along with them that they'll get to continue with a life during and even after the war even when all odds are agiast them. Hmm okay well that was uber long ugh I hate that word (shrugs) anyway great story. you are an awersome writer and I can't wait for you to update. Yup I think I've said all I needed to say for now. Laters
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 15:49 CST
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aw yes the homemade gifts r the best =P
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Title: 21
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 15:04 CST
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awww their first non real time lol so cute
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 13:04 CST
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o no duos captured! good chapter i liked it =D
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Title: 12
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 12:57 CST
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yeay they kissed =D
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Title: chap 11
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 12:49 CST
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honestly duo r u that blind...
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Title: chap 6
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 12:14 CST
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lol these guys crack me up
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 22:58 CST
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very likely duo...great story=D
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Title: chap1
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 22:39 CST
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gotta read chapter 2...
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Reviewed By: patty 40 On: February 15, 2004 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story ..I love this chapter ..Your a really wonderful writer and I want to here or read more of this and all of your stories so please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: February 15, 2004 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre! Meant Quatre! Got to love the guy and Heero is just so adorably sweet. This chapter was uterly and completely sweet in it's own different kind of way! Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 08:48 CST
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Heheh, sneaky Quatre! That was sweet. Heero and Duo are so shy about their relation it's almost painful! Funny how they're so much better at making bombs...
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