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| "Yume" Reviews/Comments [ 153 ] | | Pages (11): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 > » ] | Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Rain Of Stars On: September 14, 2003 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Rain is running down the halls beginning to slow down huffing and puffing for all she's worth with a very persistent inu taiyoukai still chasing her* Geeze...*huff* Doesn't..*puff* he ever..*huff, slows down greatly*..give up?..*puff, suddenly stops and collapses on the floor* Oh crap...Can't go on...
Sesshou: *jumps in air ready to pounce on exhausted Rain* I got you now!! (lol! Wouldn't it be funny if he said, "Here's FLUFFY!!!" instead?! ^_^)
Rain: Welp...looks like the end guys...*a fishing net comes out of nowhere and entangles around Sesshou, Rain looking first shocked, then extremely greatful, then just plain happy grinning like the cheshire cat* TT!!! You came to my rescue!!! *Rain glomps TT* Hurrah!! ^_~ You saved me AND you updated!! *hops around holding TT's hands in pure joy with Sesshou on ground mumbling about killing and blood spill..* I'm alive! I'm alive!
Sesshou: You won't be when i get out of here!! *growls*
Rain: *ignores threats as lightbulb flashes over head* Oh yeah!! *Rain leaves TT and Sesshou then returns with a large bag full of men's clothing* Here Fluffy!! *tosses bag on Fluffy's head earning a growl and more mumbled threats* Hehe! Oops! :S *turns to TT* Let me get rid of these really quick...*grabs end of Sess's net and bag dragging them across hall to a closet then proceeds to toss the bag in one then Sess in the room next door* There! *claps hands together then turns back to TT* One is just an ordinary closet, the other is...*whispers* my room. ^_^ Hehe! *blushes at hentai thoughts* I have..A-hem! Plans for Sesshou! *winks* ^_~ Yes well, i LOVED the new chappy!! ^_^ Don't EVER change the way you write!!! I love how you write! Screw the dialogue! (lol) You explain your characters and what thoughts are going through their head-which you do VERY well!! ^_^ It makes us love the story more and understand and love the char.'s more too!!! And for doing such a good job, i have *drum role* COOKIES!! ^_^ Yay!! No more interruptions from CERTAIN sneaky inu taiyoukais!! *glares at door hearing continuous growls and threats on the other side* *turns to TT and smiles widely then whispers* Also, another bonus...*leans closer making sure no one else hears* i have a pair of HIS *motions at door* silky, *drools* black, *waterfall of drool* boxers for ya!! *winks* ^_~ Hehe! For all the great, hard work you've done!!! ^_^ Maybe i shouldn't give him back his clothes...*ponders* Ya know, for the kilt thingy...make it EXTRA short!! ^_^ Anywayz, email when you update k! ^_^ Till next time!
~Rain Of Stars
Lolz, sorry for the long review!! :S | Reviewed By: Defafeath Mechqua On: September 14, 2003 19:22 CDT
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*eye twitch* | Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 14:53 CDT
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Yes! Sesshoumaru finally decided to admit to himself that he loves her! *grins* I like the inner thoughts/feelings style of writing, it gives you a better feel of the character ^^
And Crawford...yes, he's a Weiss bad guy. K is from Gravitation. He also does a voice on Love Hina...Kentarou? Keitaro's 'rival.' I have 3 of the 5 Weiss DVD's...I love the series ^^ WK has great actors *sighs* Seki *grins* He's also a main char. in Gravitation, and he's my Chichiri in Fushigi Yuugi, and Van from Esca ^^ He's in quite a few I love, actually...and he is adorable to boot! I love the interviews on the WK DVD's ^^ I didn't know that was Ayame, but it's been a while since I saw that, and I wasn't as familiar with his voice as I am now. I can pick them out all the time now, it seems! Kurama...Megumi Ogata, I LOVE her. I love the YYH music, namely the songs she sings ^^ Hiei's va, I love, but I really don't know anything about him :*(
*goes back to drooling over the same actor I drooled over in the last review, puts Weiss back in, drools more, watches FB, wades in drool puddle, watches Gravi, drowns* | Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyng your fic...appreciate the time you put aside to write it!!! I know it can be hard.
And yay for Sess/Kag pairings!!! | Reviewed By: karen in ct On: September 08, 2003 05:15 CDT
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I have got to tell you some of the descriptions are REALLY getting to me. The bit about silk sounding like a knife on bone...that's going to stick in my head all day.
Karen | Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 10:46 CDT
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Hey, that is an EXCELLENT reason not to execute the guy. Shigure...K...Crawford... *drools over voice*
I thought that having Naraku believe Kagome healed Inuyasha was great...actually, I loved the entire bit with him trying to figure out exactly what was going on. And Inuyasha picking up on the fact that Kagome KNEW Sesshoumaru was the other man in her dream...very nice indeed ^^ I almost feel sorry for him. Almost.
As far as ff.net goes, what I think has happened is that people have been reporting abuse on R rated fics that go beyond R ratings. I'm on lists where people have said that they received emails because their summary said "lemon." Any truth to it? Who knows. If people didn't abuse the rating system, things would be okay. Of course, if ff.net hadn't taken away NC-17 (which was their right) then people wouldn't incorrectly rate their fics. Ah well. I might have to go back and re-edit some of my stuff, make it a bit cleaner (Leviathan, Silent Scream). I might not bother *laughs*
*giggles more at Inuyasha's upset over Kagome's dreams*
*chants* K, Shigure, Crawford, K, Shigure, Craford... *sighs* Now you've disrupted my mind and I'll have to change my Weiss DVD (which I was watching in English for the first time haha) over to the Japanese language track just so I can hear the guy's voice ^^ Only then can I continue to function for the day *grins*
I bet this will be a big jumble as usual, since the formatting seems off and my breaks never show up! | Title: I'm South Beach Gir ^_^l
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEah, this update is fast enough. ^_^ And thanks for explaning.^_^ Thank you. Update soon! | Title: question?
Reviewed By: South Beach Girl On: September 05, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Some parts were confusing, thankfully i understood the dream sequensess, even if it took me a while to recognise which were the dream and which were real. But, i liked the story. But i don'y understand why it says it's completed. It isn't complete, Sesshie and Kagome still have to get the last shard, they still have to get together. And Naraku ahs to be killed. PLease tell me you are updating this soon. | Title: yume
Reviewed By: whit On: September 03, 2003 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a great fic. I cant wait for you to put up the next chapter let alone finish it!!!!!!!
Great job | Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: September 03, 2003 11:01 CDT
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q(@.@)p Why does it have two different chapter numbers? Its confusing. Anyways. Hehe. He's powerless when it comes to Kagome and Rin, eh? The big softie! (sigh. what i wouldn't give for a life size plushie of sesshou right now.) Oh love how you use so many sophisticated words. i learn new words while reading. Of course that means constantly opening up the dictionary that weighs a ton, but its all good. q(^.^)p | Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 09:58 CDT
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Hearing you say you wish you could write more like me is a great compliment to me, considering how much I love your style! ^^
I've already fallen victim to the story removals of ff.net, but that was last year when they took down the NC-17 pieces. It was my most reviewed fic ever at almost 100 reviews, too *sighs* I try to edit down my fics for ff.net, but I still have a few that are only found here and at aff.net.
Now, on to the actual review! Sesshoumaru is turning into a softy! He couldn't even strike down the lowly demon after he was finished with him! I like the way this is going...Sesshoumaru finally has his dream woman, even though he isn't quite sure what to do with her yet *grins* Those darn humans have a knack for pulling him around on a string, it seems ^^ | Reviewed By: Ithilelda On: August 30, 2003 20:06 CDT
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Love chaps nine and ten. keep posting please. I'm getting kinda addicted. | Reviewed By: karen in ct On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a while to warm up to your fic but something just kept me reading....
The later chapters have been very enjoyable and I really don't want to say stimulating but I must.
Did I read that you have children?? Good grief, they give you time to put two thoughts together in a row? Hurray for you!
Since school is starting I hope you will have more time to write. | Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. The jewel feeding off the tetsiga (spelling?) is very interesting and orginal. Great dreams! Love the detail! I'm not that good at detail. *crys but setles down after a while) Update soon! I want to know when Kagome an Fluffy get together. PLEASE!
Ja Ne | Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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Great updates, well worth the wait...too bad I didn't think to check for your fics at ff.net *laughs* Of course, now that I have, I added you to my favorite authors list ^^
I love your descriptive writing...THAT is how I want to write! That is something I absolutely LOVE to see in fics, and it seems that yours only gets better as the story progresses! | | Pages (11): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 > » ] |
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