| "Yume" Reviews/Comments [ 153 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 21:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter Five, another great chapter ^^ I loved the inner thoughts of Sesshoumaru...poor guy, having to deal with the possibility of feeling *whispers so he can't hear* love. |
Reviewed By: Flambeau-Willow On: August 02, 2003 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really nice!! The plot is not only intriguing...it is masterfully planned. Please update soon, ne? |
Reviewed By: Tom On: August 01, 2003 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You the Man build the Suspense |
Reviewed By: aborable akane On: July 31, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love Sess/Kag fics! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hear that TT!! I mean who wouldn't want to have a little 'exercise' with Sesshpumaru *really perverted grin* Loved the story!! Keep it updated!!
Eqlipse: Oh yeah when's the lemon!! I can wait til u describe Sesshoumaru's body. *Drooling*
Mystic-Vixen: You are such a perv. Sesshoumaru is not that hott.
Eqlipse: r u crazy?! He is soooooooo hott!!!And I'm not a perv! I just know the finer things in life *Gives a sly smirk*
Mystic: What the hell is that supposed to mean!!? *yells really loud*
Eqlipse: *Starts to walk away* Oh nothing, just that I think ur a dike. *Walks out if sight*
Mystic: *Face red in fury* WHAT THE HELL?!!! I am NOT! *Chases after Eqlipse* |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 21:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yikes, you actually got flames for this? Geez! Another great chapter...I had wondered if the sword would react to Inuyasha's touch/command. Nice emotional description of the moments between Inuyasha and Kagome. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great so far. You are very descriptive, your words dark...after reading chapters 1-3, I feel like I have a very good understanding of what each character mentioned is feeling. |
Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy On: July 28, 2003 23:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh this was cool! This was the greatest! But when is Sessho-Maru and Kagome going to meet and such? I want to know! *starts to throw fit* *calms down after five minutes* Please update soon and e-mail me...again...when you do! |
Reviewed By: raven39 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I worship you. That was awesome. I am stunned. Please continue. Excellent, very creative. Raven39 |
Reviewed By: Tom On: July 25, 2003 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Kagura at the right moment should stab Naraku in the back as she wants him dead anyway. Kagura and Inu Yasha thats a good pairing. "laughs evily." |
Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!
I liked it a lot!!!
What's going to happen next?! |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit your an amazing writer. You've kept Sesshy in character as much as possible, and still kept it intruging. But I think that's an understatement..Anywho, I can't wait for more on this story, it's definitly gonna be good!! Update soon!
~mandi |
Reviewed By: Tom On: July 23, 2003 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AS I promised Your favored reveiw this is an exellence style of writing. You show whats in sesshoumaru's mind without bogging the story domn thats quite an accomplishment. |
Reviewed By: Tom On: July 21, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fix the damn margins so this readable then I will give you a more favorable oppinion. |
Reviewed By: D.d. On: July 21, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am stunned, that was beautifully crafted, yes indeed it was!
it's without a doubt extremely intriguing, and not to mention your writing skills are excellent!
i hope you do continue with this, i'd love to read more!
continue soon!
D.d. |
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