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Reviewed By: rk On: December 04, 2003 01:38 CST
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Re-reading what I said "Seriously though, part of me feels that while there has been some major events and twists, the story has not moved along enough to really get a feeling for what exactly is happening" - To me it sounded like I had serious issues with the story. Which I do not, I just meant that besides the dream bit, the many little twists seem to have not fully blossomed yet.. and while I understand this is on-going, thus it is not going to all *poof* be laid out before me.. Just where we stand with the chapters now, quite a bit is going on, and without details to backup various events, everything tends to get meshed in the mind.. It is quite possible that as the story unfolds, more can and will be said.. I always keep in mind that quite often a "web chapter" would not cut the average for a real paper book chapter. Then again quite often manga chapter all the dialouge could maybe fill half the average "web chapter"... and here I go confusing myself again... To simplfy my rambling: Write more and I'm sure everything will even itself out... I love the story and I'm just trying to help or be suggestive... or something... heh
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Reviewed By: rk On: December 04, 2003 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's been about a month since you posted your last chapter (at least on MM), so I hope you are not still sick (not just for my selfish story needs, but being sick sucks, I pity you)... So don't torture me *cough cough * more story or else! *waves bamboo stick of doom around* I really try to read only completed fan fiction.... Why? I am just too damn impatient. Let's skip the plot and get to some sweet Fluffy action!! Seriously though, part of me feels that while there has been some major events and twists, the story has not moved along enough to really get a feeling for what exactly is happening. Ignoring my *cough* questionable interest in Fluffy, I enjoy the fact that it is not just one big Fluffy Fluff Fest. Frequently fan fiction authors forge fiction filled with Fluffy fluff (and fluff filler). For example finding Fluffy forlorn, forsaken, naked *cough*, frigid under his coating of a fluffy, fluid, film of Fluff'n'Nutter. See now I'm being crazy... and I'm sure instead of helping... I just convinced you to run and hide... This is what I get for writing comments at 3am... oh and if you are gonna notify people of updates, please drop me a line kennedy@undertheskysoblue.com - For frequently freakygirl forgets her sources of Fluffy fanfare...
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Reviewed By: Bloodth1rst On: December 03, 2003 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! although you lost me some places. (was back on cores in no time )Spelling , don't notice. I myself am (don't know if that is the right grammer ) bad at spelling. I love Inu-Yasha fanfics. Overall rating...... I WAN'T MORE! MORE! MORE! from L.N.B.
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Reviewed By: Sando On: December 03, 2003 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story. its awsome. then again i love any ses/kag fanfic. still its awsome!!! cant wait for you to update!!!!!! so plz update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Reality On: November 29, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness...girly...please continue this fic...it is so good...
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Title: death threat
Reviewed By: bbbbd14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
You are so mean do you know that. Leaving a cliff hanger like that. By the time you write another chapter I will have fallen off the cliff from curiosity. Oh yea I like your fic but if you don't finish it soon I will kill you and any reincarnations you have later on.
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Title: Mmm...Sesshy..*drools*
Reviewed By: Chocokat On: November 21, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to see more!! Soon!!! I keep coming to the site to see if you've put up the next chappie and I don't see any new ones! I love Kagome/Sesshy pairings. You've done well with this fanfic, and I'd like to see more of your work. Here's my email address: chocokitteee@hotmail.com. Email some of your fics to me, please! Thankies for all of your time and effort that has been put into this lovely fanfic. Bye bye!
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Title: Hiyas!
Reviewed By: Chocokitty On: November 12, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I'm one of the readers of your lovely fanfic. I absolutely love Sess/Kagome pairings, and this is a wonderful one. I'm hoping to see the next chappy soon! By the way, I hope you feel better. I'm sick right now, too. I have a terrible cough...blech... Thank you for time and effort put into this well-written fanfic! Bye now!
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Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 20:57 CST
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I can't wait for the next chappie! I just want to say... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU... for updating of course.
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't stop! go on! go on!
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my....what haapends next?
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Reviewed By: Wethril On: November 07, 2003 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story KEEP UPDATING!! :P
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Reviewed By: KohakuTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's hoping you get well! Seems to be a lot of that kinda crap going around and compounding, so be careful! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: heikaru On: November 05, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII!! YOU MUST UPDATE MORE OFTEN1 OH AND GET WELL SOON. I LOVE THIS STORY!
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Title: sick means updates!
Reviewed By: wolf. On: November 04, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wondering but if you are sick and HOME dosen't that mean you should have more time to type. SICK + HOME = UPDATES!
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