| "Yume" Reviews/Comments [ 153 ] |
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Reviewed By: jink On: June 18, 2004 00:32 CDT
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good grief, are you ever going to update? i was starting to get into this story but there's no new chappies! please write more!
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Reviewed By: firefalcon On: June 02, 2004 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting and original! I love the Sess/Kag pairing, and the way you've done it is, well, not like the overdone Inuyasha betrays, Kagome leaves, Sesshoumaru saves plot. I know that may not seem to make any sense, but you know what I mean. But could you do me this teensy weensy favor and, well, UPDATE??? I mean, it's been about half a year now, so you'd think you would have gotten over wny writer's block you might've had! ... Well, other than that little waiting problem, his is a great fic, so KEEP WRITING IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [not logged in] On: May 23, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! I'm dieing of suspense!!! So please be nice to your loyal readers and update!!! ~Miyumi
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Reviewed By: Zenkai On: May 15, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, perhaps the best one I have ever read. I am an avid reader of fan fiction (all kinds) and I am especially fond of Kagome/Sesshomaru pairs. I applaude your excellent use of difficult words, and an engaging and involved plot that is not sex driven, but with still enough sexual tension to be very entertaining. I would have found your fan fic sooner, but I switch between this and another site and I have just recently come back to MM. P.S. Sessie interior monologue is super!
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Reviewed By: Broken_ Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 00:01 CDT
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um...i have a question...has this fic been discontinued or are you just writing a lot of other chapters and keeping us all in suspense....STOP IT..UPDATE..pllllzzzzzz,pplllzzzzz.*wines*
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Reviewed By: Kitten Paws On: May 06, 2004 18:04 CDT
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Please, please, please, please keep writing!!!! And fast!!! I want to keep reading! This is a wonderful story, I'm really, really enjoying it!
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Title: WHAT AN AWESOME FIC!!!!
Reviewed By: Swasdiva On: May 03, 2004 03:36 CDT
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I can't wait for the finale of this one, even though I'll be sad at its ending. What a fic!!!! Passion, excitement, and mystery. I LOVE this pairing and you have expertly tied them together. Please udpate soon!!!!
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Title: baka_juju2000
Reviewed By: baka_juju2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: I saw what your reply was to my earlier review, and I'm so sorry for what Sess has done to you. Sess:I have done no such thing. Me: I never said what you did, why are you being so definsive about??? Sess: nothing.... Me: (to Sess) You are such a horrible liar. (to author) Once again, I am sooooo sorry! To make it up to you, lets go eat sushi. (and leave Sess at home) Sess: Now you can't do that! I'm going and that's final! Me: (ZAP)*stupid flea boy. you will be sleeping on the couch tonight* And he won't be getting any cheesecake for a week. Sess: Hey that's not fair! You already took away my alcohol! ... Wait! Did you say I was gonna sleep on the couch? Me: Are you deaf? Yes. I took away the alcohol because... you tried to bite me. *gee, you're such a sore loser when it comes to drag racing*... Sess: *bitch* Me: Damn straight! And that's Miss Bitch to you! (to author) So anyway how 'bout that sushi??? Sess: You're really going to leave me hear? Me: Maybe if you're good, I bring you some chicken crunch rolls.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: SailorWashu15 On: May 02, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I read your story and now I'm addicted, it only saddend me that you last updated a while back. A long while back. I hope you didn't abandon this 'cause its really very so good! *sheepish grin* Grammer problem I know! N/E ways plz plz plz plz update soon! These are the fanfics that make us amatur writers keep up hope. This has quickly become one of my favorite stories of all time! (chibi SailorWashu throwing confetti in background) And I would hate for it not to be compleated! So I ask you on my lovely writer goddess to update soon. OK I've ranted enough. Now for the threats *cracks knuckles* if you don't update soon I will "borrow" Everyone's wardrobe except Kikyo's, forcing everyone to wear Kikyo's 50 year old miko costume.(hey what can I say ^_^; I'm desperate) Also will infect your house with a plaugue of Naraku's wasps (which I hear are nearly impossible to get rid of without the tetsusaiga or a flea bomb)Ok so update please with sugar on top. SaiorWashu
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Reviewed By: blooded blade On: April 15, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD do I LOVE this story!! I finally got the time to sit back and have some quality time with my computer and of course, fan fics. I started reading yours and I couldn't stop! It's so WONDERFUL!! I LOVE IT!! Your an awsome writer with amazing talent and I envy every inch of your being! *bows in aww* Please update soon cause I noticed a little space between the last time you've updated and todays date ^_~ If you get what I mean. Well I must be going. Need to get some sleep... *hands cookies, cake, brownies, other fatining sweets with more sugar than necessary to author* And please except my lowly gift! ^^
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Title: AAAAWESOMME`
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Keep the fic going. Can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does to Naraku for what he did to Kagome.
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Reviewed By: koiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!! PLEASE!! I love this story and want to know what happens!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:48 CST
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This is great... but PLEASE finish it!!!
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Title: Where ish you...? O.o;
Reviewed By: Anonymous!!!! On: March 18, 2004 02:55 CST
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I, along with alot of your other readers, want to see what happens!! Tell us what's going on or something!! The dancing Kirby is out to get you...
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Title: Where ish you...? O.o;
Reviewed By: Anonymous!! On: March 18, 2004 02:53 CST
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I, along with alot of your other readers, want to see what happens!! Tell us what's going on or something!! The dancing Kirby is out to get you...>.>
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