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Reviewed By: Aesc On: February 04, 2004 05:45 CST
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Simply amazing. What I really love about it is the way you inject humour into the storyline. It's so... I dunno, droll? Whatever. Anyway, I really do like it. And the plot line is wondeful. Keep on writing, because you have a real gift for it.
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Title: Psst...*poke poke*
Reviewed By: Chocokat On: January 25, 2004 23:57 CST
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I can't wait any longer!! I must see another chapter soon! I think all of your other faithful readers are anxious for the next chapter, too. I hope you post something soon saying where you are and/or what's keeping you from writing. Thank you again for all of the work you've put into this fanfic. I hope to hear something from you soon!
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Reviewed By: markyc58 On: January 15, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying your story! I love the way you are 'fleshing' out the characters, and using their emotions to move the plot along! I have this story on my computer and I keep checking periodically to see if you have updated! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha_Offline On: January 13, 2004 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY DEAR GOD! You don't get a choice, my odd little muppet, YOU MUST UPDATE! I will kill if I don't get more soon! BTW, Kissing Booth was AWESOME!
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Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: yelly On: January 02, 2004 12:03 CST
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This is such a great story i like it alot because the charators act like them selves sesshomaru is ashamed of his lust for kagome and kagome is confused inuasha is jealous and miroku still get hit up side the head when he gropes sango
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Title: The Best
Reviewed By: kagome19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is about the best I have ever read and I am just on ch.1 You have figured out Sesshoumaru all the way, it's almost as if you have been it side of his head. I love your fanfic your writing style is that of which I hope to achieve myself someday. Great work the best I have every read. WoW and I am just now heading to ch.2 lol
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly love your story please please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Sasumi On: December 28, 2003 19:42 CST
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Awesome! Right more quickly! (PLEASE!!!!!) Looking forward to reading more soon!
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Title: O.o Where are you...?
Reviewed By: Chocokat On: December 23, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm...it's been a month or so since you last posted a chappy. I hope that your next chapter is posted soon, because I've been coming in and checking every now and then...and I miss reading it! It's been wonderful so far, and I've been so anxious for the next chapter to arrive. Thank you so much for all the work you've put into this! I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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Title: this is my second review
Reviewed By: =:) Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 21:55 CST
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the ratings remain the same as the last and i am waiting for the next chapter to come out. and it would be good if you put in some more fluff between the two of em.*wink wink*
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Title: Get well soon and update!
Reviewed By: Devil Incarnate On: December 19, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get well soon and update. Its been more than a month since the last update. Don't you even think of stopping. If you do, I'll track you down and make you finish this fic at gunpoint(yep! I'm a Heero Yuy fan 2^_^-). It is an excellent fic and I really really love it. Keep writing. Waiting for your update and yes, have a merry christmas (even if u don't celebrate it) and happy holidays. love ya, Devil
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Reviewed By: kagome rebe On: December 06, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story i think i get the dream. she answering his question by showing him events like when she was kikyo and when she first came through the well the jewel was in her body. am i sorta right or am i just crazy? any way great story.
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Reviewed By: rk On: December 04, 2003 01:38 CST
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Re-reading what I said "Seriously though, part of me feels that while there has been some major events and twists, the story has not moved along enough to really get a feeling for what exactly is happening" - To me it sounded like I had serious issues with the story. Which I do not, I just meant that besides the dream bit, the many little twists seem to have not fully blossomed yet.. and while I understand this is on-going, thus it is not going to all *poof* be laid out before me.. Just where we stand with the chapters now, quite a bit is going on, and without details to backup various events, everything tends to get meshed in the mind.. It is quite possible that as the story unfolds, more can and will be said.. I always keep in mind that quite often a "web chapter" would not cut the average for a real paper book chapter. Then again quite often manga chapter all the dialouge could maybe fill half the average "web chapter"... and here I go confusing myself again... To simplfy my rambling: Write more and I'm sure everything will even itself out... I love the story and I'm just trying to help or be suggestive... or something... heh
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Reviewed By: rk On: December 04, 2003 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's been about a month since you posted your last chapter (at least on MM), so I hope you are not still sick (not just for my selfish story needs, but being sick sucks, I pity you)... So don't torture me *cough cough * more story or else! *waves bamboo stick of doom around* I really try to read only completed fan fiction.... Why? I am just too damn impatient. Let's skip the plot and get to some sweet Fluffy action!! Seriously though, part of me feels that while there has been some major events and twists, the story has not moved along enough to really get a feeling for what exactly is happening. Ignoring my *cough* questionable interest in Fluffy, I enjoy the fact that it is not just one big Fluffy Fluff Fest. Frequently fan fiction authors forge fiction filled with Fluffy fluff (and fluff filler). For example finding Fluffy forlorn, forsaken, naked *cough*, frigid under his coating of a fluffy, fluid, film of Fluff'n'Nutter. See now I'm being crazy... and I'm sure instead of helping... I just convinced you to run and hide... This is what I get for writing comments at 3am... oh and if you are gonna notify people of updates, please drop me a line kennedy@undertheskysoblue.com - For frequently freakygirl forgets her sources of Fluffy fanfare...
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Reviewed By: Bloodth1rst On: December 03, 2003 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! although you lost me some places. (was back on cores in no time )Spelling , don't notice. I myself am (don't know if that is the right grammer ) bad at spelling. I love Inu-Yasha fanfics. Overall rating...... I WAN'T MORE! MORE! MORE! from L.N.B.
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