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"A Shard in Kyoto" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ]
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 Reviewed By: shurewood  On: July 23, 2008 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
the kagome sesshu scene confused me so much i passed out seriously.
 Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2006 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! ITS SUCH A GREAT STORY!! Please?
 Reviewed By: Cougiecat  On: June 26, 2005 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bah! Grr... I really liked this story but it looks like you have writer's block or something. No updates in ages... bah grumble mumble grrr...
 Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2005 08:53 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE
 Reviewed By: inuyasha-delirium [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2004 00:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a rea+++lly good stroy update soon please
 Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2004 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a very exciting chapter. I particularly liked the ghost helping Kagome; I thought it was very true to the spirit of the canon. I also thought the councilor killing the lord because the councilor's first duty was to the family seemed very true to samurai culture as I understand it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. There were a couple of rough spots. Kept the dagger, return it to me, someday. -- I think it should be "Keep". "The guards begin to pour from some of the secondary entrances of the main house. (The main entrances are where the lion-dog's are at, so no one is using them.) Some also come from the building along the inside of the outer wall." -- This paragraph seemed awkward to me. It seemed like you were breaking the 4th wall when you explained how the main entrances were blocked.
 Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2004 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow this is great please update soon
 Reviewed By: KimberlyH  On: October 11, 2004 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
your leaving me hanging by the end of the chapter! Hurry and get to the next chapter i gotta know what happens!
 Reviewed By: blade341  On: October 10, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
damn nice so far i love it but damn u no how to leave ppl on the edge i need to no what happens next so hurry up with the next chapter ty anyway by now
 Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2004 13:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
coolsa.
 Reviewed By: Rommel17 not signed in.  On: October 07, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Will Forward Patrica
 Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 11, 2004 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Keep up the good work. cools beans.
 Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in  On: September 10, 2004 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmm... Well... Semper Fi
 Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2004 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic please update soon
 Reviewed By: oych [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2004 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoy al of your stories, and would like to see the ending to this one. I tried looking through all of your stories to see if you had written a Kagome/Miroku fic, but I couldn't find one. Typically I don't liek the way people portray any of the characters (mainly because they end up lookkng like two-dimensional characters) but I thoroughly enjoy how you portray the cahracters and find creative ways to test their morals and help us, the readers, gain insight into their character.
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