| "A Shard in Kyoto" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Title: e-mail address
Reviewed By: Zhare On: October 22, 2003 00:20 CDT
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One thing that I hate about mm.org is that you have to be a member in order to see the e-mail addresses of authors. Now, to my question: what is your e-mail? I had a few questions about web sites related to ancient Japan that I wanted to ask you, but when I click on the link to e-mail you it says that I have to log-in first. I would really appreciate it if you could e-mail me at dragon16@wcnet.org and let me know e-mail address. Thank you ahead of time, Zhare
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Reviewed By: kookie On: October 07, 2003 15:35 CDT
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another wonderful chapter--very humorous :)
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Reviewed By: crystal singer On: October 02, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super job, I hope this a long one. I liked the story where Kagome meets Akane as well, they seem like logical best friends. Kyoto is very good. I love your work, Write a story about being stuck in the future, I like the fish out of water scenarios. I would also like to see you include Kouga in a story. Read everything posted here and Fan fiction that you have written so far.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a great story.(Of course what idiot wouldn't?) If you wanna keep PG-13 rating go with the less graphic violent scenes. Is it Sesshoumaru? Dah Dah Daaaaaaa... Overall Rating isn't based on anything in the story.
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 21:51 CDT
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Oh, and I wanted to mention that I especially liked the reference to Kagome sensing ghosts, and putting another one to rest. After the initial story early in the series, you would think that she would see/sense ghosts on a regular basis, but Takahashi hasn't done anything with that ability since.
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been following this story and enjoy it a lot; I especially appreciate the research you've done to attempt historical accuracy. (Though you did play with the dates with regard to Sesshu, eh; according to the museum links he died in 1506, and the Inuyasha story has to take place sometime after the 1540's when guns were introduced.) In addition to paying attention to historical detail, you've also done a good job of keeping the gang in character. Thanks for posting this and I look forward to future chapters.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Jade, the witch On: September 27, 2003 08:55 CDT
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I am enjoying your fanfic so far, and hope that the next few chapters will be coming out soon. I would also like to thank you for the explainations at the end of each chapter, it really helps me to understand things about the Japanese culture that I have not read about yet. Thanks. Priestess Jade.
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 16:42 CDT
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This could be really great. I am very interested. cat
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok, I meant to go to bed after the last review, but I couldn't leave this story alone. I am interested on how Sango handles the two drunks. Please please please continue.
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your last reviewer is from the year '69.*hentai thoughts* I have only read the first two chapters so far but this is a excellent story. I would like for you not to give up on it. I want to know though, will there be lemon? *hopeful eyes*
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Reviewed By: c_vega On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing a great job of keeping the characters in character and making their situation plausable. The historical authenticity is making this story all the more enjoyable without being too heavy handed on details and facts. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry Jeff, we need more to read. This is nice an intricate, so I know it takes a lot of thought. Inu would be able to go in the city when he is human... I like this, but then all your work is super. Keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Tom On: August 11, 2003 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish This Story Don't leave Me Hanging |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: July 25, 2003 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this sounds like quite an ambitious project. I liked "When Friends find Out", and the first chapter of this story was a good read. I've always wanted to see the gang get caught up more in some of the intrigues and wars that were going on in the time. I would have expected them to run afoul of some daimyo and his armies by now, hunting jewel fragments, or at least investigating the trail of destruction and death that the quest for the shards has left behind. So, I hope that your story gives us a look at how the Inu gang try to cope with the very center of Japanese civilzation at the time, and hope that your research pays off. |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't think I've ever seen anything like this before. I admire your historical authenticity, and how you don't let it get in the way of the story. I appreciate that you keep the characters in character. |
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