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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 17, 2003 15:48 CST
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*Jumps up and down* An other one^^!!!! YAAAAAAAY!!!!*notcies she's getting wierd stares* what? *scowls and continues jumping* great chappy BG^^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 17, 2003 09:34 CST
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MMMMMMM :::: cuts up some fruits and gives them to the chibis:::: once you eat that, i'll give you each a surprise
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal can't login [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man that chapter was really sweet. Please don't let Ryou get hurt by Steven in the sequel!!! I hate seeing Ryou hurt!! By the way, special request, can you make Malik get in the bath with Aten one day? I love the thought of Malik in the bath!! ^________^ mmmmm.... sexy Malik... lol okay I'ma shut up now! Great work! Can't wait for the sequel!!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your number one, your number one *chants on and on* good lemon, damn the devil family! Ahh...RYou has become such a soilder it amazes me and makes me proud! *teary eyes* ill be sad when this is over, but i have faith in where ever your going with this *throws roses at ya* heheh love much! it was double the lemon *nods* thats right...and i want a doujinshi very bad btu i cant have one! oh well...^_^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 15, 2003 12:34 CST
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:::Hides as she fills a bag with only RED M & M 's::: Aria, Sweetheart.... Just kidding, hon. I loved this chapter... keep them comming. ::drops the bag of m's on the floor and walks away::
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 14, 2003 16:36 CST
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*is staring at yaoi doujinshi* oh, I'm on? *glares at her producer* Heeeeeeello, sex craved fiends!! Tired of the old flavors of lubricant? Want a better taste inyour sex life? Well, have I got the thing for you!! *holds up a shining red bottle* Now, Cinnamon flavored Lube!! *squeals with delight* It tastes like those cinnamon heart candys you get on valentines day!!! *giggles endlessly and pops the lid, sniffing* mmmmmm, cinnamon *drools, thinking of any of the Yu-gi-oh guys using this* ^.~ Think of the possibilities!!! *Runs off the screen with jumbo pixi sticks in hand* Producer: *blinks and picks up the lube* Buy our product!!! *sighs* cuz she's probably the only one who will >_<
This was brought to you by a Kawaii Neko Production (MINE!!! NO ONE STEAL THIS NAME!!! IT IS MINE!!!! MY COMPANY!!! *continues to eat Jumbo pixi sticks*) Ok, we're dun? Producer: *nods* Good!!!! *hands You Cinnamon Lube, 5 jumbo pixi sticks, about 12 Yu-Gi-oh Yaoi Doujinshi and a sticker and toy kitty that both say "I Luv Kawaii Neko Production"* ummmm..... yay? ^.~ this is for all the wonderful Lemons you've wrote! I'm feeling generous.... YAY!!! *looks at the mondo pile of J.P.S.(Jumbo Pixi Sticks)* ORO!!!! *dives in and starts to devour them!*
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: November 13, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww that Malik/Marik lemon was sooo sweet. Satisfies you greatly when you're PMSing like me ;_; lol..... ok anyway I have fics to get on with too so sayonara!! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: valea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAHHH!!!!! lemony good stuff! yay and bakrau and ryou next chapter! i can feel the joy! hopefully nothing can mess up that day. anywho, contuious sex over and over was a good idea i coldnt imagine it any other way. good job, i love starting my day with reading a lemon ^_^ lol ~Valea~
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 12, 2003 11:49 CST
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Very beautiful... NOW GET TO THE LEMON!! I'll pour m's on you and sick Aria on ya ... tee hee. ::: Holds out 3 bags of candy to the chibis. :::
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Title: Wedding Greatness!
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i so need to knwo who that song was by it was so great for the chappie! you know what i love? you manage not only to just liek write up the fanfiction but then you go into deeper stuff like by looking up words on a dictionary and whatnot and anywho, it was a sweet and kawiiful cahpter and i liked it! but then again i lik evrything lol. anywho..not to get off subject...are you planning a L-E-M-O-N ? lol anywho will aria ever ease up? can there be a lil moment where like i dunno she goes up and hugs him? but then there wouldnt be any drama, im talking to myself now! love much good stuff! ^_^ ~Valea~
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Reviewed By: Cynicalspiritvalea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font colorYay! Perfect song, once again my friend! *giggle* im so looking forward to the wedding, coudl there be second thougths coming back? But anyway nice remiscing you had going, it was so sweet, emtionful, il be getting good sleep tonigth because of you and all the cutness and old friendship stuff going on...OMG I SOUND LIKE ANZU!!! ahhhhhhhh!!!! *bashes myself over hte head with a fryign pan* ahh much better, love much it was great so very great...makes me question will Marik run away dont run away from the good future Marik, it will be okay or at least i hope so right...??*slips into sweet unconisouness* KURA!!!!!!!!!!! lmao love!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 11, 2003 17:36 CST
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Awwwwwww, kawaii!!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 09, 2003 14:32 CST
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wow, fluffy, and sort of angsty, and kawaii at the same time. Bg, you know your stuff. *smiles and cuddles close to her pillow* i wish i had someone to cuddle with. *looks over at her cat* but kitty is sleeping and no one is here. Except for mu cat. Oh well, lemons always cheer me up. So, keep up the good work, I'm off to scrub my eyes (*Shudder* anzu naked*) and go read so good ol' lemons. Yaoi lemons, ya gotta luv 'em
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: November 08, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnnnnnoooooooooooo you can't bring Steven back!!!!!! nnnnooo!!!! WWWWWAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! Mmmm just imagining Malik in that outfit makes me tingle!! He's soooo hot hes my second fave after Bakura & Ryou... Great chapter, I can't wait until the wedding is on! I reckon you should make a sequel to this when Aten and Aria grow up... if they don't get killed first! ;_; keep it up great work!!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was a cute chapter.
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