| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: didn't sign in, sorry
Reviewed By: zirranova On: March 04, 2005 13:04 EST
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awsome, i cna't wait till inuyasha's able to kill those f***ing a**holes but I bet it will be good >D anyways great chapter, love the review you got, it was the funnyest. see ya Zirra
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 21:15 EST
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Nice way to end a chapter!/ I'm not sure if i want to thankyou or kick you but i do know i better not have to read 6 different chapters to know the whole trial. 1 looooonnnnggg chapter would be much perfered. :)
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Title: Agreement
Reviewed By: Stacy On: March 03, 2005 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stacy: *stares at sesshoumaru slightly drooling* MINE!!! *lunges and attaches self to sesshoumaru* Sesshoumaru: O_O NOOOOOOO!!!!! Stacy: *sticks a sock in sesshoumaru's mouth* shh my love, there will plenty of time for screaming later tonight! Sesshoumaru: *eyes bug out* Ward Nurses: GUD GAWD!!! SHE'S OUT!!!!!! AND SHE HAS A PRISONER!!!! Stacy: *armed with other half of carrot and left sock* YOU WILL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!!!! *sits on sesshoumaru's head* WE ARE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER!!! I do not fear Naraku for her is someone's play-thing now! BUWAHA! Ward Nurse: We're gonna need a swat team... she's armed and dangerous... Sesshoumaru: *sweatdrop* Stacy: MUHUHAHAHA!!! YESH!!! AND YOU NASTY REVIEWERS WHO READ AND FLEE!!! *waggles carrot* BEWARE DA STACY AND HER SESSHOUMARU! *cue maniacal laughter*
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Title: Secret Weapon
Reviewed By: Stacy On: February 22, 2005 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stacy: *hair is unkept and very 8cough* "wild", wearing what appears to be a straight jacket* *slowly approaches you looking around, eyeing everything* yesh, secret weapon... i will gives it to you... if you promise me something... MAKE SESSHOUMARU MARRY ME!!! BUWAHA!!! *scoots closer to you* here you go *straight jacket covered hands pass you an old sock* use it wisely, and forget not our agreement BUWAHA! and if those nasty reviewers aren't nice, use htis, the ULTIMATE WEAPON!!! *DUN DUN DUN* *giggles and hands you half a carrot* yesh, it will distroy all!!! *ward nurses appear* Ward man: THERE SHE IS!!! HOW DOES SHE KEEP GETTING OUT!!! Stacy: O_O NARAKU HAS SENT HIS PUPPETS AFTER ME!!! HE DOES NOT WANT ME TO MARRY SESSHOUMARU, FOR HE LOVES HIM!!! AHHHH!!!!... *hugs towel and carresses it with her cheek lovingly* but sesshoumaru and i are meant to be together... yesh... *orderlyes begin to drag her away* Ward man: I'm so sorry ma'am... but we don't know how she keeps getting out... *scratches head and continues dragging me away* Stacy: BUWAHA!!! YOU WILL NOT WIN NARAKU!!! NEVA!!! *yells in distance* I WUB UR STOOOOOOOORY!!!!
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Title: i'm lazy
Reviewed By: ZirraNova On: February 22, 2005 14:52 EST
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Ohh weapons contests, lets see, hmmm......... maybe, nah, or how about. No, I know you know Kohaku's weapon, that's a scyth and chain, okay put apoison on the end , i'll give you the exact poison and it's properties later promise:) Zirra
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Reviewed By: ScaryClownHat On: February 21, 2005 01:35 EST
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Hmm, weirdest weapon...alright, a multi-colored flame-thrower? Its odd... It's an exelent story that I've been reading a while, the threats have only recently gotten to me. Keep up the great work! -ScaryClownHat
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Title: AE:39
Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 19, 2005 21:22 EST
Comment/Review:
Wierd weapons huh? Er...um... *Thinking* A large inflateable red herring? How about a bug catching net? Perhaps a santa shaped cookie cutter? Excellent chapter, quite dark though, still. Um...for the enters you could use < br > a couple of times, that should have the same effect...that or enclose the paragraphs with < p > (Pardon the spaces but I don't know what will happen otherwise. Dunno if that helps at all? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: HanyouGal (Offline) On: February 19, 2005 03:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it just my computer or is the format wacked up? Well anyways its an awesome story please continue soon!
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Title: Where did you go wrong? AE 38
Reviewed By: Fighting Sadness On: February 16, 2005 13:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just lost a big fan. What you did was beyond wrong. I can't read something that causes so much pain. If Kagome had given herself to Inuyasha first, I still wouldn't like it but I could live with it. But what you've written is..is... I can't even describe it. I'll pay you to change it. I'll become a servant. Anything! Just please I can't live with that happening to Kagome. That's pure evil. You act crazy but its all in good fun. This is wrong. I dont care how you do it. Just please change. It hurts too much.
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Reviewed By: dragrdr On: February 12, 2005 10:49 EST
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hmmm, a weapon that you haven't used...kindergarteners, those things NEVER leave you alone and will talk your ear off!. what else...ninja stars, evil hamsters, pack of rabid dogs, base ball(with retractable spikes), giant magnifying glass(use with bright sun, burns readers to a crisp, ...*mind goes blank* damn it! i'll give you some more next time. Love the story! ^^
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Reviewed By: dragrdr On: February 12, 2005 10:49 EST
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hmmm, a weapon that you haven't used...kindergarteners, those things NEVER leave you alone and will talk your ear off!. what else...ninja stars, evil hamsters, pack of rabid dogs, base ball(with retractable spikes), giant magnifying glass(use with bright sun, burns readers to a crisp, ...*mind goes blank* damn it! i'll give you some more next time. Love the story! ^^
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Title: Ch 69
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 00:39 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey, now you really are starting to take a darker turn in your storyline. You had been 'inspired' by a another story right? Well here's a suggestion for you to read 'You Darkness' by Vyncent here on MM/AFFN/FFN. It also may 'inspire' you in your next darker turn you have going. Especially since you have Inu-chan going to 'Hunt'...and she was attacked by multiple persons unknown (for now). Then again, you may go the route of the 'Camera people's evidence'. *shrugs* But definately check out that story beforehand to get 'inspired'! That person (Vyncent) has a way of really getting you into the story...*shudders*.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 11:12 EST
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Ohhhh, Inuyasha is going to make those a**holes pay so badly, *low growls are heard from the dark of Zirra's room* I wish i could help him ohh that pisses me off, SIX gerrrrshshs! i could kill, ohh i...... great chappy, hope Inuyasha gets a looooong revenge chapter, i really mean long, those f*cking a**holes deserve it. Do i sound fanatic to you? oh well. Next. Zirra
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Title: 69
Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 07, 2005 18:39 EST
Comment/Review:
Woah...that was...unexpectedly dark. An excellent chaoter but still very very dark. I don't know what to say this time...it's took me completely off guard. None the less I look forwards to seeing what you have in store for us. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 02:02 EST
Comment/Review:
Well i defently see why someone would accuse you of such a thing.. The resemblince is far to close to just ignore.. But that said there is only one way to really write a chapter like that expecelly if you keep characters reactions to whats knowen.. Any way on a lighter note: the chapter was well written the idea well not orginal is an off norm one. This chapter was quite the jump from the others but i'll wait to see how it all ties in..
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