| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: tinky On: June 18, 2005 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more?MORE?MORE
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Title: tinky
Reviewed By: bitches_unite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please more!!!
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 14, 2005 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Looks like it has a lot of potential. Sorry I knocked you on the 'style of writing' section. The writing was ok, but I could tell your heart was not in it (as is understandable when rewriting something that has been randomly erased). Something else that I thought was odd was why did Kagome bring this dagger thing and forget her arrows? Why did you introduce this dagger in the first place? Inuyasha could have killed the blue wolf with Sankoteso (sp). Would have also been nice if you had given the wolf a bit more personality- just so we could get an idea of what will happen to the poor girl. Also I don't think they would have just gone right to bed after she was bitten- especially if Inu thought there was poison. They would have at least woken Kaede. Maybe you could get around this by having them not be at the village. Have them be out somewhere and Kagome changes as they are rushing back. Also thought it was a bit.. extreme to have ALL the 'secondary' characters show up within hours of Kagome's transformation. Finally- Kikyo's note seemed a bit.. wordy. And the rock with note thing just seemed a little odd. If she can't say what she wants to in person or through a proper messenger, I doubt she'd say anything at all. I guess I am grateful that you put the note in so early though because it gave us Kikyo lovers a warning. As such, though I very much enjoyed your story, I will not read any further. Nice story! Good luck with it!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: June 13, 2005 02:19 EDT
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haha, I'm on chapter three... Inuyasha has the mood swings of a pregnat (sp) woman, eh? ;)
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Reviewed By: msm On: June 12, 2005 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your my hero. thanks for being my main source of entertainment for the past couple of weeks. but now that i'm caught up, what will i do with my free time??? :( looking forawrd to your next update! :)
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Reviewed By: mystical_armored_man On: June 05, 2005 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A complete masterpiece. A true joy to read and reread. I loved how the author would plan out something in great detail.
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Title: Title?! What the hell?!
Reviewed By: I wonder what pimp juice is... On: May 30, 2005 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Those hoho's were brutal. I recall a day at school were I went insane with a package of twinkies, and rained destruction from the heavens. Anyway, this fic is cool-modie! I hope ya write more stuff, cuz all the fics make me feel ill to my stomach. Kinda like cheese that you let sit there for about...two years.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas_gal On: May 26, 2005 19:01 EDT
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I love it so far and i hope that you update soon!I hope that you are writing at this moment because if you dont post the next chapter soon i just might die!
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: lilmab207 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Type FASTER I must reach the end I finally caught up Im in a trace I cant stop reading AHHHHHHH! I love this story finish it please.AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Please dont make Inuyasha go to jail. Let Kagome live please!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I am all caught up!! Whoa! I have been reading this story on my spare time ever since April 19!!!! This is the longest story i have ever read and you have a way of not letting readers get bored. wonderful, wonderful job. I am really glad you decided to put an alternate ending in, i personally like it more than the original, easier to understand. Anyways keep it up (lol i didnt say "update soon"!) i cant wait for the next chapter. youve got great talent, bye for now
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i just read your fist story and now i have read a couple of chapter of your alternate ending (dont worry i am going to read them all), i must say i am very impressed with how many names you have come up with for kagome and inuyasha's children, grandchildren, great grand children, etc... and they are all in japenese! that is very impressive. keep writing cause i will catch up soon! im on chapter 36 of the AE. terrific story. bye for now.
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: May 14, 2005 05:04 EDT
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i think i may cry... ive been reading this story for an entier week and its been so good. i was really supprised to see that the whole beggining of it was really just a story kagome wrote! very interesting twist :P first time ive read a story in a story. and those B@$7@rds! how could they rape her! its just so wrong! and poor inu! i would have killed them myself too, if i were him. it practically broke my heart when i read that kagome and thier un-born child were murdured, i just about cried (its 2am and im so incredibly tired its messing with my mind!) very good story, and please, PLEASE update soon! and is it going to be a happy ending? i like happy endings ^^;
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Reviewed By: Immortalspoonlord On: May 09, 2005 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this review probably looks like I'm kissing your ass something fierce, but I stand by it. This is a robo-bitching fic! Probably my favorite so far. I really REALLY look forward to reading all of your fics, if they're even HALF as good as this one. Even a quarter as good, I'm on it. Please keep writing, you got some crazy talent.
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: junsei On: May 09, 2005 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on!!! post more!!!!!!!!! >___
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: May 08, 2005 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think i love you.
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