| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: firelord (not loged in) On: October 22, 2004 18:38 EDT
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that was great but you need to repost the chapter your cuting part of it off that was a ver fast up date keep up the great work you are a great writer.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 21, 2004 19:05 EDT
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Absolutely fantastic chapter, like how you wrapped it up. Look forwards to the final sequence all though perhaps a little scared by the sheer volume of lemons promised... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:56 EDT
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Very cool. I hope that you are able to update soon so that we can see what else you have in store for these characters! Good luck and catch ya next time! ^.~
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Title: chapter 57
Reviewed By: firelord (not loged in) On: October 20, 2004 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yhaa more you have got to write more and dont for get to write a squal to
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Reviewed By: The Irishman On: October 20, 2004 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!! This is a great story. I can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: sarah gray On: October 09, 2004 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaahhhhhhhhhh hurry up and finish please ive been patient long enough
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Reviewed By: Rihana On: October 09, 2004 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole 'Kagome becomes demon/hanyou' is an overused plot device, but you executed it in an admirable fashion. It's a great pleasure for me to read your work. I'm not sure what chapter you asked this in, but Kikyo's soul-stealers are called Shindamachuu. Also, in Chapter 26, you have 'japanese food' inserted in your story. You could say 'gyoza,' which are Japanese fried dumplings (Japanese version of Chinese potstickers). Or maybe 'nikujaga,' which is a meat-and-potatoes dish. 'Tempura,' deep fried battered seafood and vegetables, would also work.
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Reviewed By: ina_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just want to say that i love your story transformations, but the final battle chapters are really jumbled together. it's like you cut off some sentences when you start a new one. i still got the idea but it was sorta difficult to read. so if you could do something about it when you finish your story that'd be great. anyways again i love your story and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am REALLY enjoying this fic but talk about a cliffie!?!? I understand the moving thing and I hope that you get your info soon. Good luck and REALLY can't wait! Till next time. ^.~
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 01, 2004 21:49 EDT
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D'oh! That was the last one for now...sorry to hear about your computer, I would have to admit I get like that. I went to Japan for a week and had no access all that time *shudders* Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 01, 2004 21:47 EDT
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Excellent chapter, that was a magnificent battle scene. Look forwards to reading the final part in a moment. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 01, 2004 21:30 EDT
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Excellent chapter, now moving onto part 2... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Deanna (reader from ff.net also) On: September 28, 2004 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i've read this fic before then i sorta moved and didn't get internet for like months so i couldn't read the next chapters ,then i sorta forgot the chapter i was on ......so i simply started over (from the first chapter mind u) and i couldn't review at all, ff.net wouldn't and still won't let me, well i was reading the A/Ns and was reminded of mm.org so here i am typing away .......and i forgot what i was going to say........................................................................ ........................................................oh i remember which MSN Groups are u in?.....stupid, i know ,for all that typing just to ask u that and also what ever happened to that girl that stole ur stuff? i remember hearing about it but didn't really know what was goin' on ...well anyway great fic and i hope to ee more til then (probably before) ja ne' Deanna^_^
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Title: chapter 54
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 13:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dame it u have got to have your father send you your comp. soon i cant whait untail spring for the next update it has got to be sooner than that what about arond Crismas or New Years or anthing but not untel spring that is just wrong
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Reviewed By: kawaii_becky10111 On: September 21, 2004 04:35 EDT
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so is that the end? if i were you i'd write a fight scene or an epilogue... or something. but hell you may never even read this... well it was very good... one of my most favorites. an ending would be nice but I for one dont need it... i like letting my writers mind fill in the blanks for my own ending inside my head. ... but a written end would be cool. but like I said... you may never even read this... well good luck. -becky PS i plan on giving this little bitch plagerist girl a little email... but it might be a little late... and i am a member on here... i just didn't sign in as kawaii_becky... read shared life? i wrote it even though im not done yet
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