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Reviewed By: g.j.g On: July 09, 2005 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did he die that is so very evil you can't make the main charater die that is completely insane
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 05, 2005 18:09 EDT
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First of all I owe you an enourmous apology, sorry for taking so very long to review. That was, as ever, a magnficient chapter. What started out as an alternate ending is now a full story in it's own right and one that I have greatly enjoyed thus far. I have to admit at first I had forgotten the identity of the killer, recalling when I did was a shock at first, reliasing it was him from another time line. I can't help but wonder what will happen when he is done, if he will vanish or remain. Glad to know Kikyo was finally resolved. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 05:28 EDT
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Well i'm in no way a kikyo lover but i still think what you did somehow fits!. It's nice to see new chapters and the length is great i really dislike the fics that fit in a single window no scroll bar. So maybe i should use a lower res.. But anyway this is marked as a dark fic in the summery... as it would shre as :bleep: warrent it.. Not that i'm in any way complaining. Keep up the good work:) O right and this was for the last 2 chapters.
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Reviewed By: Mr. Chaos On: July 02, 2005 00:27 EDT
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Can I make a prediction? I have a weird feeling it's Koga. That, or Shippo. I just don't think it's going to be another world Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Rosy On: July 01, 2005 21:17 EDT
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As much as i liked the original version, I think i like the alternate even better. I love a good mystery, and now all i can think of is who the killer could be. I wonder, could it be Inuyasha from a different time? But no, that doesn't make sense....then again....great! now i won't stop guessing until you let us know. Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 16:51 EDT
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Yay a new chapter. I liked it. I can't wait for another one. I hope you update soon. Are you gonna do one murder every chapter? Well Ja ne for now, *~Star Fire Kagome~*
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: June 30, 2005 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cutting off his eyelids so he couldn't blink away the blood? you are truelly sadistic and for that i love you. damn you're good! it pisses me off...*pouts*
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Zach On: June 30, 2005 12:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i love your writing, and you made my day yesterday, i came to see if you posted an other chapter, and you did! i was like HURRAH! anyway, keep going, and i was just wondering, how come your not posting any chapters in DarkWorld, cuz i like that story too. :D anyways, Ciao!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 18:58 EDT
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hm..*watches DL chase Naraku for a bit...then put an old Kikyo plushie in a large strong cage* "here boy, here Naraku, get kikyo!!" *Naraku jumps out of the tree and right into the cage...SLAM....the door slams shut* *mutters* idiot.....@ DL: there you go, he's all caught again. :D great chapter by the way. *gives DL the key to the cage(which has a flap to feed whatevers in it)* update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 18:57 EDT
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hm..*watches DL chase Naraku for a bit...then put an old Kikyo plushie in a large strong cage* "here boy, here Naraku, get kikyo!!" *Naraku jumps out of the tree and right into the cage...SLAM....the door slams shut* *mutters* idiot.....@ DL: there you go, he's all caught again. :D great chapter by the way. *gives DL the key to the cage(which has a flap to feed whatevers in it)* update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Inu_Girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!I DEMAND IT!!!AND WHO THE HELL IS THE KILLER???WRITE MORE AND TELL US!!!!=^.^=LOVE THE FIC!!!
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Reviewed By: tinky On: June 18, 2005 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more?MORE?MORE
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Title: tinky
Reviewed By: bitches_unite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please more!!!
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 14, 2005 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Looks like it has a lot of potential. Sorry I knocked you on the 'style of writing' section. The writing was ok, but I could tell your heart was not in it (as is understandable when rewriting something that has been randomly erased). Something else that I thought was odd was why did Kagome bring this dagger thing and forget her arrows? Why did you introduce this dagger in the first place? Inuyasha could have killed the blue wolf with Sankoteso (sp). Would have also been nice if you had given the wolf a bit more personality- just so we could get an idea of what will happen to the poor girl. Also I don't think they would have just gone right to bed after she was bitten- especially if Inu thought there was poison. They would have at least woken Kaede. Maybe you could get around this by having them not be at the village. Have them be out somewhere and Kagome changes as they are rushing back. Also thought it was a bit.. extreme to have ALL the 'secondary' characters show up within hours of Kagome's transformation. Finally- Kikyo's note seemed a bit.. wordy. And the rock with note thing just seemed a little odd. If she can't say what she wants to in person or through a proper messenger, I doubt she'd say anything at all. I guess I am grateful that you put the note in so early though because it gave us Kikyo lovers a warning. As such, though I very much enjoyed your story, I will not read any further. Nice story! Good luck with it!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: June 13, 2005 02:19 EDT
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haha, I'm on chapter three... Inuyasha has the mood swings of a pregnat (sp) woman, eh? ;)
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