| "The Claim" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 11, 2003 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh,uh, trubles ahead. That's really interesting and captivating.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 07, 2003 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really something, Heero saw Wufei and Dou. That is just so amazing, hey how does Heero know that Dou doesn't lie? Write more soon and keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So has Heero had a thing for Duo for a long time?
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: September 30, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's excellent, you have all to make this fic good.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 30, 2003 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really short, considering that there was alot going on and now Heero finally shows Dou he cares. Anyways hope school doesn't keep you too busy so you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric_Draconis On: September 30, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Have fun at school, heh.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heero's revelation.
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Reviewed By: madamebutterfly1983 On: September 28, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting fanfic. I have never seen one done like this. Keep Writing!
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Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 17:12 CDT
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Awww... *sniff* so wonderful. Now, I am awaiting the next part, I cannot wait to see what else the two are going to do. Duo has a road of healing to walk up, and Heero now has to open up. And comfort each other. Please update soon!! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani On: September 25, 2003 21:04 CDT
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AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! NO MORE ENDINGS LIKE THAT MISSING UNLESS U UPDATE, LIKE . . . THE NEXT DAY!!! LOL! Can this fic get any better? PPEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!! **cheers enthusiastically** KEEP WRITING!! KEEP WRITING!! KEEP WRITING!! KEEP WRITING!!. . .**CONTINUES FOR THE NEXT TWO HRS** (lmao!! ^_~)
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
How is Heero going to snap Duo out of it?
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Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 14:39 CDT
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OMG!! Poor Duo!! *cries for Duo* I hope he doesn't follow through with the suicide, and that Heero will save Duo from his hell. This story is so emotional, I can't wait to see more! Keep up the wonderful work! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 21, 2003 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sad chapter. I can't wait to read how the story progresses. Keep up the great job. |
Title: Part 4 and 5
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too all those who voted for Duo's child to die:
ARE YOU HAPPY NOW? I'M NOT!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 20, 2003 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
that wads such a mean way to end this chapter - must have more |
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