| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: flame81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 06:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great, very sensual and I liked that you didn`t underestimate the hurting of ones first time.
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Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 01:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it. For your first lemon you did an excellent job. You really conveyed a lot of emotions through your writing. I've really been enjoying your story. It's so sweet at times, but you've also managed to keep up the excitement. You've also kept a nice logical sequence to the events. You aren't hopping around and leaving out details just to get to the juicy parts. Please post more soon!
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Title: *blush*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 00:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just so happen to be listening to some of that music you listen to when you meditate when I was reading the last chapter...it seemed to fit with it so well, I got lost in the story. I think thats THE single most beautiful lemon I've ever read, and damned hot too, I hope you have another before the story ends
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 11, 2003 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will Inuyasha be able to tell by Kagome's scent if she is pregnant? What will happen next? What about that thing that the seamstress made that had the dog demon and the human woman on it? Is he going to give it to her now? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome first lemon! It was romantic and sweet and all that other good stuff.
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Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes buging* O_O Very nice lemon. Very, very, really, really nice, oh h***, GREAT STORY! Keep it up! Very sweet! I wish we could rate higher than 10, I would give you a 1,000,000,000,etc. Very good! PLEASE keep it up, writing I mine!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 22:15 EST
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The lemon was good and sweet, update soon it's so good!
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Reviewed By: Missy-Bee (not logged on) On: November 11, 2003 21:59 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA that chapter was really good. Nice lemon do more. Hmm what about Shippo can he come home now or what? Oh well. Nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 11, 2003 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the new chapter. The lemon was quite good (though a bit angsty). I love when you have Inuyasha show his vulnerable side like the trembling hand as he shows her the house. Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next chapter! It's almost over (sob).
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Reviewed By: Zenny On: November 11, 2003 19:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Quite good for your first lemon, if I do say so myself. ^_^ Keep on writing, and I'll keep reading!
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 16:50 EST
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yrah great chapter. They finally got together. It was a great lemon. Can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 16:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be fair - I give it a 10 for the lemon. Very well done. Thanks for the premature warning about the last chapter though - much appreciated.
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Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I really liked it up till you said Baby Time. I guess I won't be reading the next chapter... oh well.
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Title: Beautiful Job!
Reviewed By: KuramasGirl1 On: November 11, 2003 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story! I have read it over a hundred times waiting for the next chapter to come out. You are such a great writer, and the lemon was perfect. I say that because you didn't make it seem like they had sex before, like a lot of other fan fics do. But anyways, the next chapter sounds quite interesting, a baby. I wonder what it will look like.
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Reviewed By: bl On: November 11, 2003 15:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's fireash...good job on the lemon. i think i am blushing too. good details. thanks for updating.
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