| "Unexpeced Allies Part III: Trial of the Century" Reviews/Comments [ 239 ] |
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume(not signed in) On: December 28, 2003 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: Oh! This was such a brilliant and sad chapter! CF: {pulls out hanky and blows} CF cried! WAAAAH! Yume: Yes, CF cried... CF: {glares} Yume cried too! Yume: Yes...I did... CF: {sniffles} Does this mean that Kagome will stay in modern times, and Sessho will wait for her? Yume: Whatever you decide to do, I'm sure it'll be wonderful! Damn, why can't I be this creative? CF: Yume can....If Yume will just give CF an advance on CF's chocolate allowance...(muse, remember? *snickers*) Yume: I could....or I could force you to work, and not give you ANY unless you do! CF: NOOOOOO! Yume: lolz, (hugs CF) I luv ya too much! Anyways, great chapter! CF: SF-sama recommended CF's fic! (happy dance) CF loves SF-sama! (hugs^_^) Yume: Update soon! And, yes, CF has produced SOME lightning powers, but she's still working on it. CF: >teeny zap< Yume: Ow! Cut that! CF: (giggles)
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Reviewed By: Puffball Kirby On: December 28, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! My friend introduced it to me a little while ago and I started getting obsessed with it...literally. *flashback* *sits there at 4am finishing the chapter...* Must...finish... *checks for updates every five minutes* *end flashback* Yeah...and my friend (who introduced it to me) and I really think that Sesshy and Kagome make a great couple. Soooo...*gets extremely big and towers over SF* YOU BETTER HAVE A HAPPY ENDING WHERE THEY GET TOGETHER AS MATES AND HAVE LIL PUPS OR SOMETHING OR I WILL PERSONALLY HUNT YOU DOWN, SF, RIP OFF YOUR LIMBS, SET YOU ON FIRE, GRILL YOU, AND DINE WITH THE REST OF THE ANGRY READERS! NOW WHO'S WITH ME!? *calms down and gets back to normal size* So please have a happy ending so that us readers that thoroughly enjoy your story can sleep easily at night. *happy smile* (or else my friend and I will haunt you until you go nuts...not that you aren't already)=D Thanks for making such a great story, and my friend and I worship you so don't make us throw you in the river!(anyways this is my first review. I thought that your story was soooo great that I spent time out of my busy schedule to review. Now I have to mention to my friend to review as well) Bye! WE LOVE YOU, SF! *gets angry* we won't anymore if you make the ending a bad and sad one* *blink* Now what was i saying...Oh, yeah. *smile* BYE!
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Title: ?¿? (hehe)
Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok, just when i am gettin kinda depressed that your story is gonna end soon.........u throw another twist to the story! right now i am feelin pretty good. unfortunetly, u just haaaaad 2 throw kagome to her time, and u didn't stop there--oh no--u had to have sessou BRAKE the well!!!!!! ::sigh:: i guess i will just have to trust u 2 make an EXTREMELY HAPPY ending.
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Reviewed By: Blue_Saiyan_Angel On: December 28, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sniff, sniff That was so sad. Poor Kagome, doesn't really know if he survived or not. Well, I'm fairly confident that in the end all will work out. Happy New Year! Oh, by the way, sorry I haven't reviewed lately. Bad old Flu and lazy ass syndrome. ~_^
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 13:30 CST
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*Sniff* That was so beautiful, so touching, so sad. Hmm I wonder if Kagome would meet Sesshoumaru in the future or would she find a way to go back? Oh by the way I was known as Sweetapple. I think I reviewed your fics before. Just so you know who I am. Anyway that was a great chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter. I also look forward to reading the next chapter of 'To Bear Witness'. See ya!
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Title: You wicked, wicked woman.
Reviewed By: KohakuTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stringin' us along like this, is pure Hellish torture you wicked woman you! :) But its nice. Tell Sesshie to behave! :) ~Ko-chan
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Reviewed By: kccranfield On: December 27, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!! This is probably my favorite fanfic. Three cheers and tra la la. Please keep up the good work and I am looking forward to more of the story.
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Title: wahhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! I WANT MORE! *SNIFF SNIFF* PLEASE? WHOOOOOOOOOOOA! CAPITALS....OHHHHHHHHH.. Sessho: i think shes lopst it CiCi:weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hyper!!!
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Reviewed By: Tiger-chan On: December 25, 2003 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Striking Falcon, you do not know how much I look forward to reading Unexpected Allies when you update! Thank you for giving love to my lord, Sesshomaru-sama! Before I go, my lord wants to know... Sesshomaru, no! This is Tiger-chan's master, Sesshomaru-sama. I want to know if you have any story ideas, and if you do please send them to Ladybplays@msn.com for Tiger-chan to read. Thank You for your patience. Come here Tiger-chan, we have some unfinished business to attend to. ~Tiger-chan runs as fast as the wind as Sesshomaru gets a horny look in his eye.~
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Title: the "traditional 1st Comment" (::you'll see what i mean::)
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 19:46 CST
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(sorry for the one above ::blush:: i pressed enter B4 i was ready) CiCi: {:: grabs skillet and starts hitting SF::} evil!evil!evil!evil! you are an evil little- Silverfox: bitch? flacon? CiCi: {::stops hitting::} was i talking to you? SilverFox: i'm next aren't i? CiCi: oh yea! {::runs after Silver::} Sessho: wow i didnt expect her to stop... Inu-chan: Amazing...
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Title: the "traditional 1st Comment" (::you'll see what i mean::)
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 19:43 CST
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 14:04 CST
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Reviewed By: Shana7 On: December 22, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome finally transformed! I can't believe her power! Her transformation really sounded like it hurt like hell. But it was worth it! Now everyone has their weapons and are out of their stupid cells. I can't wait to read the next chappie! Kagome's gonna beat the crap out of Kenirous! Please hurry and update!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*SAVE ME* WRITE MORE!!!!! this is so beyond good
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 22:55 CST
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Aahh! No! Stop it! For once could you not end on a cliffie?! Nah, truthfully, i'm fine with the cliffies, just makes people keep coming back, right? I love this fic. Whether I review the chapter or not, you can be sure I'm reading it. Waiting impatiently for the next chapter, Sesshiria
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