| "Unexpeced Allies Part III: Trial of the Century" Reviews/Comments [ 239 ] |
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume(not signed in) On: February 08, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: ACK! How could you leave it here?! CF: Yume should know that SF likes to leeave cliffies...Yume: I know...but still! {whimpers} Sometimes I wish this fic never ends! Update soon! ^^
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Title: Snicker
Reviewed By: KohakuTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! *glomps you and bites your head affectionately* You rock so totally awesome! Keep the chappies coming! *snuggle snuggle* Thank you thank you for writing them! :)
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Title: wahhooooooo!
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 21:16 CST
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CiCi: {::does little happy dance::} yay! i love it! i love this story! i love this chappy! {::sigh::} it's so great to be back and reading your works... JD: you call reading her works off my lap top, 'being back'? Miroku: wow for a four year old you have a mouth... JD:{::quiet and points robotically to CiCi::} CiCi: oh be quiet! anyway! Miroku: SF! she won't go back out there! kago still has the speeding trap up and she's holding me hostage! CiCi: oh please! i am not holding you hostage! you just have to stay here cause that speeding trap will paralyze you! not that any women would mind...right SF?
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 00:04 CST
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GYAH!!!! YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO UPDATE TODAY!! I was going through hell waiting for today to come so that you would update...and you didn't...*sniffle* Well, please update really really soon, and make it so that Kagome and Sesshy meet really soon and live happily ever after!! Yeah!! *grin* Ja!!
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Reviewed By: moon of twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good to i hope you keep writing okie-dokie
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAH!! NOOO! I THOUGHT WHEN THE VOICE WAS HEARD THAT SAID "He said you smell like Uncle Sesshoumaru's pack", that it was Sesshy's...*sniff* Great chap. Hope she meets Sesshy in next chapter. UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON OR I WILL SERIOUSLY END UP HURTING MYSELF. And I might be able to continue your story "You don't know what you have 'till it's gone" if my friend helps me. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Kizna Kyouru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 18:12 CST
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oooooOOOOOOoooo inuyasha's a daddy. and he's married to an american? thats cool, i suppose that what kagome said is true, americans can most definently deal with foul language. please update soon, pretty please ^_^
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 01:13 CST
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*is sitting and pouting* it's not FAIR!!! my dad's in Hawaii, WITHOUT ME!!! whaaa!!!! he get's to see everyone! it's not fair!! ok, I'm done now. heh, good chapter, I really liked it. ^-^ ya know, when Keni'Chi said Shorin couldn't resist him, I thought that probably was something Silver would say... *pouts* Inu doesn't have his cute little doggie ears any more. Is Amy a..*thinks for a second* New Yorker maybe? I don't know WHO would be able to deal with Inu and his mouth. *looks disturbes* the last thing Inu said was rather disturbing, 'I know where you live' eh, whatever, I hope Kagome gets to see Sesshie in the next chapter! later ^-^
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess (too lazy to log in) On: January 27, 2004 17:00 CST
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LOL i like the end sentance :P now in your AN u said u were going to kill the fic...i hope u dont mean really cause this fic needs an ending...but not too soon...the way your writing the fic now it seems your going to end it next chappie T.T thats not allowed youve made it this far and its REALLY REALLY good but with this new chappie i feel as though u r giveing(sp) up on it and are just going to leave it in the next few chappies...if that...plz dont give up i did and now i dislike myself for it...though i still write i dont post :P
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Title: YaY!
Reviewed By: Niamha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well since Fanfiction is still being weird *shrugs* here i am. This chapter was great! I loved it. Everything is *almost* perfect for Kagome. It is kinda odd how they all appeared at once but whatever. I'm am totally positive you know what you are doing. Anyway,i cant wait to see how the rest unravels. I would write more but *sigh* finals calls. Two more AP classes tomorrow, and my brain is already dead from the ones from today. Whatever. Maybe i'll go take a nap.............
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 14:18 CST
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Yep only an American could marry Inu-kun! LET'S GO SESSHOU-KUN FIND YOUR KAGOME!!!
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Reviewed By: RBM On: January 27, 2004 14:12 CST
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awwe... she's getting her friends back!
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 12:39 CST
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GYAH! NO YOU CAN'T STOP THERE! SHE HAS TO MEET SESSHY! SHE HAS TO!! HAAAS TOOOO! Can she meet him next chapter? Huh huh huh? Puuh-leeaaaase! I beg you!!! I wanna see them together...it be happy moment...yup. PEOPLE ARE SCREWED UP! THIS STORY IS GREAT AND I BET IT WAS ACTUALLY ONE PERSON USING MORE THAN ONE ACCOUNT!! THERE ARE LIKE FOURTY TIMES MORE LOYAL FANS THAN STUPID ANGRY PEOPLE!! Yeah...*sugar rush* WHOOOO! JA!
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Title: (grins)
Reviewed By: Youkai Yume(not signed in) On: January 27, 2004 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: haha, Yasha with an american girl...that does make sense...Despite what you say about killing this story, I still think it's fantastical ^^ CF: Look at all the happy moments! (gushes) CF is happy now! Yume: (nods) Update soon! As usual, nothing can top your work...though we all try very hard...lol.
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: LFF On: January 27, 2004 06:21 CST
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NO!!!!!!!!!!! You can't end it there! I swear you are trying to give me a heartattack. I don't give a rat's ass if other people don't like the frickin' story. Where the hell is the next chapter? -LFF She said it was only going to be 21 chapters long. -Kurama Does it look like I give a rip? I wanted the lemon, but when she said that due to the other 'people' complaining, she wouldn't. Okay fine. Then she decided not to even finish with a definite happy ending? I'm going to my room to sulk. *slams door* -LFF If you have any more unposted part of this story, please send it to her before I have to re-plaster her walls...again. -Kurama
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