| "Unexpeced Allies Part III: Trial of the Century" Reviews/Comments [ 239 ] |
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was a wonderful chapter! Although I hate the idea that the story is ending soon (no one ever wants to see a good story end), I can see where it would be winding down and all coming together. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Title: I WILL KILL YOU
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_lover200 On: January 27, 2004 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
200:I SWEAR IF YOU STOP I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN WITH MY 3 BEST BUDDYS AND KILL YOU OR TOUTURE YOU UNTIL YOU WRIGHT MORE sessy:to much ice cream and is vary tired ignor her and plz right more All:YOU BETTER
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Title: Niice
Reviewed By: Niamha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was really good! I cant remember whether or not i reviewed yet and fanfiction.net is being retarded, sooooooooooooo Anyway, yea this chapter is really good. THat sesshouamru thing was heartbreaking. Made me cry. well almost About your story: yeah it did lose its originality at *some* parts, but you write so well that i didnt notice. One thing tho is that i missbthe fluff of the beginning. It was all so sweet in part one. but it is still a wonderful story and i never miss a chapter (except when my comp crashed) wellz i gots to go. Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Title: I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It made me cry, laugh and fell a lot of emotions. You are a very talented writer and I encourage/urge you to keep writing. I'm a little disappointed with the cliffhangers you always do but that's what makes the story suspenseful because you leave us guessing what will happen next, and it's okay. I'm sure not a lot of people like that you do that. However, at least now you have one person(that I know of) that appriates your fic for what it is. Thanks for listening and update as soon as you can. :)
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Title: CrUeLiTy To ThE HiGhEsTt DeGrEe
Reviewed By: Fox flame (not signed in) On: January 21, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UrGg... u did it agan!!! the tears!! this stry made me cry a river... agan!!!oh forget the tears bout the stry line- i shuld b cryin for the anticipation!! u keep draggin me along like a kitten n a new ball of yarn..( in writers wurld thats a very good sign. means ur fans want more!!) n honestly, i dont noe wea these ppl got the clishe( i dun think i spelled it rite) idea. i think its orginal... i mean, there is soooooo much happinin (or happened) in this stry.... how do they get the idea of clishaying??(lol spell check) keep on writing hunn.... ur doinn G-R-E-A-T.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 18:10 CST
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no T.T so very sad. plz give us a new chappie soon ^_^ oh and i dont care how cliché this is i personally love the story and the fact that you can make it this long with out quiting is highly impresive(sp). plz dont give up and dont worry about how cliché it is cause the thing is going in a GREAT direction tough i must admit i have seen some REALLY good fics go down the tubes for lisening to pplz like me so im just going to shut up ^_^ :D :P ~*~Dark Princess~*~
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I wandered over to this story on Youkai Yume's recommendation :::hugs YY and CF::: There are very few stories that play with my emotions the way this one has!! I spent the ENTIRE DAY going through this series (and the side stories ) AND I CAUGHT UP TO YOU????? aarrgghh..... nooooooo.... This is what happens folks when you don't check to see if a story is still in progress or done... You have a wonderful way of weaving a story :::wishes she were capable of doing that ::: and you should never let anyone else tell you how it should go. Not with your abilities!! There were times I was laughing myself silly through a chapter and times my heart was breaking for the characters. You do a wonderful job and although there were times I agreed that your chapters were "too short", they all melded together wonderfully. Now, I hope to be seeing a notice in my email soon telling me there's an update to this!
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT!? I bet those people either like to annoy people or one person used multiple names. I completely disagree. Your story is awesome and always will be. Please update really soon. I almost died waiting for this chapter to come out!! ^___^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: January 20, 2004 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i cant wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Scottishfae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been in love with your your fics forever but this is the first time I'm actually reviewing. I'm sorry for that too. You are a wonderful writer and all your fics are extrememly creative and original. For those people who find your fic cliche, I'm sorry but at this point most things have been done and its impossible to make everything non-clicheish (I think I just made up a word). You have been an inspiration to me as well as others I have talked to who adore your work. I strive to become as good a writer as you are and unfortunetly I pale incomparison. I just wanted to tell you, since I"ve waited so long in saying it, that you are truly a gifted writer and I can't wait to see what other works you put out in the future! Once again, awesome work, I cried on the last chapter. Poor Kag and Sessie! Until Next Time...Sfae
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 12:06 CST
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hiyas! um i have to say i disagree with some of your reviewers... yeah kag turning into demon is what a lot of ppl does...but yours was different! you even had a GOOD solid reason behind it! and best of all you don't have her being "superdemon"... lol...some of the i've read... ::shudder:: ^___^ i loved this chapter! awww.... i feel so sorry for sesshoumaru and kagome now! =( i can't wait until next week...hopfully you'll upload a new chapter then! ^____^
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Title: but why?
Reviewed By: marsmarmalade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 11:58 CST
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but silver's lemon are so good why would you denyme a chance to read his excellence? the story is not as bad as others appear to have thought. . . i really like it even if it is a tad cliche. and what the hell is going on? unless you decide to bring Sessho intothe modren day to at least see Kagome i'm going to have to take back those cookies i sent you and you shall never get one again! teasing Kagome like that, she had every right to attack you. :: takes deep breath :: well, now that i got that outta my system i can apoligze for trying to tell you how to write your story. it's your idea not mine and i have to respect that even if i don't like it but please tell me this wasn't the end of the story.
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so mean....and so sad...where's the happy mushy part! I hate it when Kagome gets depressed...
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Title: PLEASE
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_lover200 On: January 20, 2004 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SL200:YOU ARE MAKING ME CRY....I LOVE IT!!!L-O-V-E LLLLOOOOOVVVEEEE IT!!!!!!!! IM USEING CAPS CAUSE ITS HOW I FEEL DONT STOP OR..OR.....I GET SESSY ON YOU!!! SHIPPO:IGNOR HER SHES JUST HYPER FROM TO MUCH SUAGER SL200:your soposed to b on my side v.v
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 00:09 CST
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