| "Unexpeced Allies Part III: Trial of the Century" Reviews/Comments [ 239 ] |
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Title: Cait Cait
Reviewed By: Sanna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo nooooooooo Kagome thinks that Sesshy betrayed her! And Seshoumaru cant do anyting to change her mind, b/c she cut off the mind link! PLEASE UPDATE FAST! i need to know more!
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Title: hello... chapter one
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 29, 2003 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yosh! ~pumps fist into the air~ At long last you've decided to upload the actual chapter for "Trial" and it was a good chapter too. I only wished for it to have been longer. Maa, perhaps you can give us chapter two before next week. ~looks up with puppy dog eyes~ No, yes. Come on take pity on us. Oh, well guess I'll wait. ~sits down in front of computer sets timer 153 hrs. and 7 mins. to go~
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Title: YaY!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Niamha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY!! its here! I am so excited! That was great. And i dont agree wit Sesshy. The council thing is brilliant. Very original. It was so cute how he growled at her observation of one of the council members. Blah. cant get on to fanfic. I havent been able to all weekend, which meant i couldn't update my own story. *sigh* whatever. Anyway back to you. Question: I know this whole thing Kag is going to be dealing with Naraku, and Sesshy will bein jail, but will there be fluff at all? Like dream fluff? please say yes. AND will they ever finish that conversation? Will Kagome get her answer? Sry for all the questions. You dont have to answer if you dont want to. And if you feel like responding to my reviews, my email address is sykochica05@yahoo.com. Have fun! youare going to be responding to a lot of email reviews!! ^_~ love ya!
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Title: YES!!!
Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1 On: September 28, 2003 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah a chapter a chapter i am soooo happy i love it i love it i love it... update soon please....
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Title: hiyaku_de_mon@sesshoumaru.zzn.com
Reviewed By: tessa3 On: September 28, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
***scream for joy** OMG!!!!! ARIGATOU SF-chan **ows deeply, hair sweeps the floor** I usually read your fics on FF.net but something is wrong with their servers so here i am on MM.org....this is tessa3....neways I really enjoyed the 1st real chapter of UA: Trial of the century **gives SF-chan big hug** **looks at SilverFox** I hope he can deliver a very good lemon I hate to be disappointed **grins evilly, stalking SilverFox** **silverFoxe looks around and makes a mad dash** Wait SilverFox do you need any help **tessa3 runs after SiFo-chan *** Sorry I abbreivated your name putting SF-chan twice seemd a little **clears throat** gay **smiles BAI BAI
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Reviewed By: animegirl11 On: September 28, 2003 22:18 CDT
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i FINALLY found you on mediaminer! for some reason my computer kept crashing when i got to the mm site! i was so happy when i finally found you, and what did i find? the first chapter of unexpected allies III! the REAL first chapter that is... anyways, can't wait for more, and by the way, the second chapter of second chance is great too, but i didn't feel like reviewing. hope to see more soon, and lol!
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 21:27 CDT
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*glomps* The first chapter! Well, now my curiousity about his treason is satisfied...I just have to wait for Kagome to save the inu brothers. Sesshoumaru made a smart move when he gave her the sword. I was expecting Kagome to get executed with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Well, not really, but...you know...I had to say it.
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Reviewed By: Crimson Demon On: September 28, 2003 20:19 CDT
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Heh, Love the beginning to the story, and the creativity! Can't wait for the next chapter! email-crimsonangel_08@yahoo.com
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Title: You B*t*h
Reviewed By: Lynn (not logged in) On: September 26, 2003 16:59 CDT
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You eville eville b*t*h how could you! The 1st chapetr! Where is the 1st chapter. I almost died when i got the alert and the the page opens ond that piece of sh*t is there. Sleep with both eyes open SF!
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: September 25, 2003 20:40 CDT
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I can't believe you would do such a cruel thing. period.
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Title: Mispelled title
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 25, 2003 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ano, just wanted to tell you that you mispelled the title. You forgot the "t" in Unexpected.
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 16:52 CDT
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lol... i have to agree with everyone else... that was mean of you to tempt us all like that! lol! ::sigh:: i guess now i'll have to wait for oct... anyways do u plan on having a happy ending???? lol
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Title: evil
Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 14:13 CDT
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have mentioned you are evil you are evil for doing this on fanfiction.net and now you're doing it here so not nice to get people's hopes up like that... meanie put up next chappie asap
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Title: waaaaaaaa
Reviewed By: filialunae618 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 13:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
mean mean mean!!! lol i kno u should do it soon.. and that is not a threat o= )
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Title: Doshite!
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 23, 2003 22:52 CDT
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Maa, your so mean SF. ~crys uncontrollably~ I actually thought this was the first chapter to "Trial". Oh, well, guess I'll just have to wait a few more days. ~pouts~ I just hope the real chapter is a long one. I wouldn't want to do something drastic if it wasn't. Anyway, thanks for the extra info.
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