| "In the Heat of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 258 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu13 On: March 06, 2004 15:11 EST
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WHAT THE HELL!! ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER!! Please stop doing that you, always leave it at a cliffhanger whenever something good is about to happen. Then again, your cliffhangers do keep your reviewers intrested in your story and want to continue reading it. Anywayz, great chapter. I think that it was a really kawaii idea to make Inuyasha never leave Kagome's side even though after their little accident. Keep up the good work! Oh, and one more thing, is Kagome ever going to forgive Inuyasha, and when she does is anything going to happen between them? (If you know what I mean) Ja Ne! ^_^
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Title: hmp!
Reviewed By: kistune On: March 05, 2004 22:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why the freaking hell did you have to stop there.....................i want a answer i swear i will kill whoever made cliffhangers
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Reviewed By: StarChild On: March 05, 2004 17:32 EST
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i like it, keep it up
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 21:07 EST
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What's he planning?!
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Reviewed By: emike89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, please keep it up i am so into this story.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 13:31 EST
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Reviewed By: Skylar14 (didn't login) On: March 03, 2004 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH! Cliff hanger!!! I really hope Kagome and Inuyasha can get back together. It's really sad seeing them hurt so much. I feel bad for poor Inuyasha. It makes me wanna cry!!! I can't wait for the next chapter though! Good work!!
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Reviewed By: haruka_tsuki_kou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 13:30 EST
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This is definitely a good story. My heart aches for Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope that she will be able to forgive him soon. I can't wait to read the next chappie!!
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Title: EYAaaaa......
Reviewed By: miki_chan22 On: March 03, 2004 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EYAAAAAA....... y CLIFFY y ????? ohhh please continue... i beg u please... ur the greatest fanfic writer ever.... Please UPDATE SOON >_
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 12:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please update soon please!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 03:15 EST
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i liked it. my little input would to speed time up, Kagome is not likelly to forgive Inuyasha within the week if she even forgives him within a month, and it wouldn't be mentaly healthy for her to either. i think you should talk about several days at a time and maybe skip a few just saying time passed or something other wise your story will become incredably long and repetative. whatever miroku and sango are planning i don't think they should try and trick kag into forgiving him, or force her to realize anything just yet. she needs time to heal and come to terms with what happened. after a month or two you could have her become worn out and a little stressed at Inuyasha's constent absence and invisability. this story is to me so original and true to reality that having her get over the ordeal too quickly may ruin it. so i deffinatelly think that you should skip through time a little just to keep the reality of the story. i like it so far though. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 02:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope they get together again soon.. this is just TOO sad!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 02:25 EST
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Kagome needs to be slapped. Honestly. I don't think Kagome would even THINK of shooting InuYasha under ANY circumstances. That's just not who she is. She's too kind, too forgiving, too UNDERSTANDING. And that's what Kagome seems to be lacking in this story--compassion. Where did that go? She ALWAYS puts other people before herself, REGARDLESS of the situation. I always thought she'd be able to forgive InuYasha before he'd be able to forgive himself . . . Feh . . . I guess what I'm saying is Kagome's too OOC for me.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 22:08 EST
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Kagome is still stupid stupid stupid!!!!!!!!!!! If I were Sango I would grab her by the shoulders and shake her until she came to her senses!!!!!!! What a twit!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!! I'm going to go read your other story now!!
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Reviewed By: Inu13 On: February 28, 2004 20:26 EST
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Great story! I have to say that this story is as good as "The New Student and Kagome's Secret". You are a very talented writer and that I hope you will continue updating your stories for there are a lot of authors in Media Miner who promise to update but don't. And I hope that you aren't one of those authors. Anywayz, again great story and hurry up and update soon! Ja Ne! ^_^
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