| "In the Heat of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 258 ] |
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Title: Keep going!
Reviewed By: Lady Pantera On: February 25, 2004 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hi there! I just wanted to tell you that I am really enjoying your story. Although, any type of rape situations are very hard for me to read, you've actually done a really great job of not letting it be someting horribly gruesome, and I have great faith that somehow everything will turn out okay. You are a very talented writer, and I just wanted you to know that even if people don't review, or if they are constantly flaming you, try not to think about it. It's hard to write fic's, and you really do have a great ability at writing detail and emotion. Most stories you read seem like they were thrown together in a matter of ten mintues. Yours has thought, depth and emotion in it. You don't hurry through your work. You can see that you care about your writing. So thank-you for writing, and please, keep at it!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 07:58 EST
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Kagome needs to come to a realazation soon!!!! She is not the only one hurt here!!!!! And don't worry I was so caught up in your other stoy I forgot about this one too, so no yelling from me.
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Title: GREAT FIC!!!!!TOTALLY AWSOME!!!
Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: February 18, 2004 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AN AWSOME FIC! SERIOUSLY1 I HOPE U UPDATE REALLLLLLLLYY SOON!I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN...TELL ME, TELL ME, TELL ME!! ^_^I HOPE U GET INUYASHA AND KAGOME BACK TOGETHER!THIS IS JUST TO KOOL OF A FIC TO GIVE UP ON NOW...MAKE SURE YOU FINISH IT!OR I WILL DIE OF WONDERING!
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Reviewed By: Lagra On: February 17, 2004 17:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god i love this fic.. it rivals even your other fic "The new student and kagomes secret" that's what it's name was right? I hope you update this one soon and i don't mind how it goes, i just hope it won't get anymore angsty, i can't stop crying!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 17, 2004 16:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hadn't read this fic before and when i did, it was so sad.. i hope you finish this and i REALLY hope for a happy ending. i really do.
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Reviewed By: noel&jenn On: February 17, 2004 09:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I"ve never written a reviwe b4, but I have read many stories involving Inuyasha. I have to say this is one of the handful I keep on my favorites list so that I can keep comming back ! Keep up the great work!! I wish your friend a quick recovery!!
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Title: Revison!
Reviewed By: Faye273(NLI) On: February 16, 2004 12:42 EST
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Ok, I've revised my past idea. I think that while he's watching her she should get into trouble in a battle, and IY should jump in at the last sec and kill the demon (like he always doe ^_^). Here's where I'm undecided... he could just come and go, leaving Kag to think about it... OR she could yell for him to stop before he leaves and ask him "why?" (ready for the WAFFynes?) and he can reply something like "because I told you I'd protect you, and I failed once. I WON'T fail again" So whad'a think?? huh? huh?? Meh, they're just ideas (but I like them ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 03:22 EST
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I like the story. keep it up!
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Title: Yes
Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: February 08, 2004 16:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated im so happy. you made my day.this story is really good.i like the way you word things. its easy to understand and stuff.i really like it.its defenently not the work of an amenture. keep up the good work i love this fic.oh and update soon.plz?
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Reviewed By: kiara_23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, I like!!!.......i just read the whole story in one shot, and i think it is a really great story. I love the suspense and the over all story..you are doing a great job portraying the characters.....and i like the way you are very descripted.....so a long story short, you are a very good writter and I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Mickey_chan On: February 08, 2004 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ey wiil u promise to finish the nxt chapter by mon, or tue.? please please... ur so oooo kind laaaa. ur fic is soooo cooool
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'bout time you updated!!! please have kagome forgive him
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 22:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww how sad
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Title: I LOVE THIS FIC
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle Morte On: February 07, 2004 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing, well LOVE IT! but well, i don;t know really i just know i love it meh, okay i wasn't really paying attention to the grammar and what so i just gave you an eight sorry if thats wrong i was paying more attention to the story line! lol, creativity well i;ve read about two others fics kinda like this so i gave you an eight and enjoyment factor, well i just had to give it a ten! hello this fic is so good and my overall rating in nine because its sad and that gets me depressed but i also love angst so i'm kinda undecided on that one, oh well LOVE THIS STORY! it's so good, when will you be updating next I NEED more!
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Title: FREAKING AWESOME
Reviewed By: aurlen On: February 07, 2004 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, it's me again. WHO THE HELL CARES ABOUT WHAT EVERYONE ELSE THINKS! Don't let anyone's criticism bring you down. This is the best story I've read in a long time, damnit. UPDATE. PLEEEEEASE. XD I've also had the strong urge to draw a scene from this story.
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