| "In the Heat of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 258 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lover 01 On: April 10, 2004 23:26 EDT
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ur story is great umm.. mabe u could get Kagome to over hear Inuyasha talking to some one about it .... or mabe u kould well I dont know but its great and this is my first time reviewing so really dont know wat Im doing well I hope they get back 2gether ...Ja ne
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 05, 2004 23:39 EDT
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Wow. Angsty! I liked your other story so much I looked up some of your other pieces. This one is great too. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Star-Child20 On: March 19, 2004 18:56 EST
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I feel so bad for inu and kagome. I know that the use of exclimation points are a good thing, but you use it a little to much. other than that, everything is great. Write a new chap soon please, I will be waiting.
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Title: Good but sad
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 01:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. A sad one to start off with, hopefully it will have a happy ending for Kagome and Inuyasha. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: noel&jenn On: March 12, 2004 11:20 EST
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NEED... MORE...updating ... not .. going.. to .. make .. it.. much longer .... must..have .. more ... lol !! its great and i know that your updating lots, thanks for that .. but still.. must... have.... more..... hahahhaha lol !!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 21:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww I fell so sad
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: March 10, 2004 16:46 EST
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T_T poor Inu and Kag...
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 03:55 EST
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way too tiered to make any real coments but still wanted to review. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 20:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and post the next chapter sheesh!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 09, 2004 20:06 EST
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Whilst very dark and covering some very diturbing ideals this is a beautiful work and one I have greatly enjoyed reading so far. Appologies for no previous reviews but I just read all the chapters up until now tonight so I suppose this will have to surfice for now. I hope to be able to read more of this work in future as it has struck a numer of emotional chords. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Write more please
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well when I first read the fanfic at the few chapters.I was not sure that I was going to keep reading the fanfic, but as I kept reading I wanted to see how it ends.So please write more. It is a good story.
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Reviewed By: ces8cute On: March 08, 2004 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR FIC IS SOOOOO AMAZING AND I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPPIEE!!!
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Title: in the heat of passion
Reviewed By: cornelia On: March 08, 2004 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my reason is that she wrote the story very well and the hentai factor is not clearly seen as much as the drama and it really keeps the reader from going on to the next chapter. i hope she continue the story immediately, it's good!!!1
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Reviewed By: noel&jenn On: March 08, 2004 09:21 EST
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YOU ROCK!!! we soo look forward to you updating this fic .. its what we look forward to ever day when we get home from school ( college .. dont worrie .. im not a little kid reading adult materal.. well, not any more at least :P!!) thanks again and im sure what ever ideals you come up with for the following chapters will be EXCELLENT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kzands On: March 07, 2004 02:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really gotten hooked on this fic! Please update SOON so I don't go into withdrawal. :)
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