| "In the Heat of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 258 ] |
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 21:07 EST
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What's he planning?!
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Reviewed By: emike89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, please keep it up i am so into this story.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 13:31 EST
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Reviewed By: Skylar14 (didn't login) On: March 03, 2004 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH! Cliff hanger!!! I really hope Kagome and Inuyasha can get back together. It's really sad seeing them hurt so much. I feel bad for poor Inuyasha. It makes me wanna cry!!! I can't wait for the next chapter though! Good work!!
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Reviewed By: haruka_tsuki_kou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 13:30 EST
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This is definitely a good story. My heart aches for Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope that she will be able to forgive him soon. I can't wait to read the next chappie!!
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Title: EYAaaaa......
Reviewed By: miki_chan22 On: March 03, 2004 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EYAAAAAA....... y CLIFFY y ????? ohhh please continue... i beg u please... ur the greatest fanfic writer ever.... Please UPDATE SOON >_
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 12:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please update soon please!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 03:15 EST
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i liked it. my little input would to speed time up, Kagome is not likelly to forgive Inuyasha within the week if she even forgives him within a month, and it wouldn't be mentaly healthy for her to either. i think you should talk about several days at a time and maybe skip a few just saying time passed or something other wise your story will become incredably long and repetative. whatever miroku and sango are planning i don't think they should try and trick kag into forgiving him, or force her to realize anything just yet. she needs time to heal and come to terms with what happened. after a month or two you could have her become worn out and a little stressed at Inuyasha's constent absence and invisability. this story is to me so original and true to reality that having her get over the ordeal too quickly may ruin it. so i deffinatelly think that you should skip through time a little just to keep the reality of the story. i like it so far though. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 02:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope they get together again soon.. this is just TOO sad!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 02:25 EST
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Kagome needs to be slapped. Honestly. I don't think Kagome would even THINK of shooting InuYasha under ANY circumstances. That's just not who she is. She's too kind, too forgiving, too UNDERSTANDING. And that's what Kagome seems to be lacking in this story--compassion. Where did that go? She ALWAYS puts other people before herself, REGARDLESS of the situation. I always thought she'd be able to forgive InuYasha before he'd be able to forgive himself . . . Feh . . . I guess what I'm saying is Kagome's too OOC for me.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 22:08 EST
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Kagome is still stupid stupid stupid!!!!!!!!!!! If I were Sango I would grab her by the shoulders and shake her until she came to her senses!!!!!!! What a twit!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!! I'm going to go read your other story now!!
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Reviewed By: Inu13 On: February 28, 2004 20:26 EST
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Great story! I have to say that this story is as good as "The New Student and Kagome's Secret". You are a very talented writer and that I hope you will continue updating your stories for there are a lot of authors in Media Miner who promise to update but don't. And I hope that you aren't one of those authors. Anywayz, again great story and hurry up and update soon! Ja Ne! ^_^
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Title: Keep going!
Reviewed By: Lady Pantera On: February 25, 2004 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hi there! I just wanted to tell you that I am really enjoying your story. Although, any type of rape situations are very hard for me to read, you've actually done a really great job of not letting it be someting horribly gruesome, and I have great faith that somehow everything will turn out okay. You are a very talented writer, and I just wanted you to know that even if people don't review, or if they are constantly flaming you, try not to think about it. It's hard to write fic's, and you really do have a great ability at writing detail and emotion. Most stories you read seem like they were thrown together in a matter of ten mintues. Yours has thought, depth and emotion in it. You don't hurry through your work. You can see that you care about your writing. So thank-you for writing, and please, keep at it!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 07:58 EST
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Kagome needs to come to a realazation soon!!!! She is not the only one hurt here!!!!! And don't worry I was so caught up in your other stoy I forgot about this one too, so no yelling from me.
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Title: GREAT FIC!!!!!TOTALLY AWSOME!!!
Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: February 18, 2004 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AN AWSOME FIC! SERIOUSLY1 I HOPE U UPDATE REALLLLLLLLYY SOON!I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN...TELL ME, TELL ME, TELL ME!! ^_^I HOPE U GET INUYASHA AND KAGOME BACK TOGETHER!THIS IS JUST TO KOOL OF A FIC TO GIVE UP ON NOW...MAKE SURE YOU FINISH IT!OR I WILL DIE OF WONDERING!
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