| "Demonic Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Title: ROFL
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X On: April 16, 2004 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHAHAHAHAHAHA... Roflmao... ok I give you 10 out of 10 just for the pure fact that you had the Inu Yasha chained to your bed part... hehe that was great. I will review the story its self later. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very cool!
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Title: awe so sad
Reviewed By: navyboarder17 (not logged in) On: April 06, 2004 21:53 EDT
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Hey your alive! a little over 2 weeks since I've talked to u online I think. Well this story has gotten into the sad part as do other story's. I'm guessing they all gota do it sometime. Either it's kagomes mad at inu, or inu is off making out with the whore or... kagomes and inus daughter is barely alive... yet the good thing is, naraku is dead. So after u make everyone alive and well again, u can do some random plots with the characters. DON'T END IT! lol good job au revoir
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Reviewed By: Chaynes On: April 03, 2004 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alls i got ta say is, girl you got it goin on! that is one fuckin bad ass fan fic. I gave it this good of a rating cuz thats just it its a REALLY good fic. i like tha title, i like tha plot, i like yer originality! yer an awsome writer, better than my dumbass can think of, you got a gift girl keep it goin!
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Reviewed By: DogDemonKinoke On: April 01, 2004 09:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DONT KILL TASUKI!!!!! Oh, umm if you do and then years later Kag/Inu have new baby girl, i think you should name her Reno(Ree no) pls? thanks for up date:)
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 29, 2004 22:43 EST
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OMG that is sooo sad but i love it it's really good yuou have to update to it soon ok tootles
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Reviewed By: inulover4ever On: March 29, 2004 21:18 EST
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DONT LISTEN TO THOSE BASTARDS THAT HATE YOUR STORY!!! You stories fucking awesome!!!!!! I cant wait till you update again ^_^ I hope everything gets better for you too!
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Reviewed By: Candid On: March 29, 2004 19:23 EST
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great chappie, but there's no way u can be evil enough to take a second kid from them. right? please say im right. cant wait to see what happend (the sooner the better if u ask me) hint hint nudge nudge ay ay say no more
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Reviewed By: link2910 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 21:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Title: The truth about this story Reviewed By: You wish you were me Concieted bastard im onna go bite him. *Finds an bites* Idiot reviewer guy:WAAHH I WANT MY MOMMY!!!! hehehe yup i read this story too
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 21:56 EST
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please to whatever god you belive in update soon. i need to know what happens to their 2nd child!!! shes only 5 for fucks sake ... you cant kill anoutther child. not one that knows what life is! please save their daughter! gods i'm about to cry please!!!!
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Reviewed By: link2910 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 06:13 EST
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ok that idiot is yelling at you when he is too much of a wimp to give his own name. this story is pretty good
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Title: please help me!!!!!
Reviewed By: mirokusgirlsango9161986 On: February 29, 2004 22:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story. please write more. i have some questions 1. why is naraku such an asshole???why does he try to kill Tsuki??? 2. why doesnt sango have any more kids???she is a great mother to her son 3. why didnt sango slap miroku when she was having her child???i would have slapped him instead of yelling at him 4. i kind of need help with my story. could you please give me more ideas??? i'm giving you a summary of what happens so please give me other suggestions Sango leaves Miroku after she finds him cheating on her with a 14 yr old prostitute. She takes her 13 month old son with her and goes to live with sesshomaru. She sleeps with him and gets pregnant. when she is 5 months pregnant, sesshomaru loses his job and starts beating her because he is upset. he continues to abuse her until she is 6 months pregnant. she gets irritated by it and leaves. she goes back to miroku after he lost his girlfriend after having a child,which he gave up for adoption. he takes sango back and helps her during the last 3 months of her pregnancy. he is the one who assists her when she gives birth to her daughter, Miyu. Sesshomaru is there with her too. she tells him that she's nervous around him. she's in so much pain that she cant kick him out so she lets him stay with her. she finally gives birth to Miyu and Miroku raises her as his own child(sango wont allow sesshomaru to be around her child after he abused her while she was pregnant). 7 yrs later on miyu's birthday kagura shows up. sango is pregnant again so she cant fight kagura. she decides to let miyu and kohaku fight her. they battle to the death in a battle between good and evil. please email any suggestions to me at mirokusgirlsango9161986@yahoo.com. i really appreciate it. thank you! ~amanda~
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Title: GO FIC GO FIC
Reviewed By: Sammy -.-zzz On: February 29, 2004 16:26 EST
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Don't pay any attention to that person's BAD review. This is a really good story. I can't wait till the next chapter! >^,^> "do a little dance..."
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Title: The truth about this story
Reviewed By: You wish you were me On: February 29, 2004 02:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVEN THE TITLE OF THIS STORY SUCKS Demonic Demons? A RETARTED TWO YEAR OLD COULD COME UP WITH SOMETHING LESS STUPID AND MORE CREATIVE DO US ALL A FAVOR AND TAKE THIS STORY OFF THE NET I DONT KNOW HOW I DIDNT GAG WHILE I WAS READING THIS CHAPTER IN SHORT...This story IS THE WORST I HAVE EVER READ... you know what... I'm really sorry bout this but... I really dont like this story I mean the title just pissed me off and the first chapter just pissed me off even more so reallt just TAKE IT OFF THE NET
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