| "Demonic Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadySango On: April 12, 2005 20:03 EDT
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great chapter. please update soon. ~Amanda
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Reviewed By: Yorokobi_roses On: April 05, 2005 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most interesting fanfics I have read in a long time. I first found it on ff.net, but moved here because, well, I like lemons (@.@) If it could be improved, I would like you to write more about the relationships (new and old). I'm supposed to be doing my homework right now, so I can't write alot. Spelling: Shippo-Shippou Kikyo-Kikyou. You see, when writing in Kanji (one of japan's three alphabets, English alphabet) O is pronounced as oo and ou is pronounced as O, but only at the end of a word. Other than that, pretty good beta. By the way, if you don't mind YAOI, that Shatter is a pretty good fic. It is Inuyasha, on ff.net. Also, there is Bitten, also Inuyasha, also ff.net. Overactive fangirl, Konoko Tsetsunokea. P.S. Inuyasha's last name is Taisho, adopted from his father's name. (Taisho Inuyasha)
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: navyboarder17 (NSI) On: April 01, 2005 23:14 EST
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Nice, just a lil confused on what naraku wants the bottles for, hiding himself right? Neways great chapter, i agree with some other people, it's been really dark and morbid or w/e for the past few chapters... we need a lil more happiness, like ummmmm sataru and tsuki are teenagers now right? Just do a lemon starting out as tsuki comforting sataru... just to make things a little more cheerful, i know how good at lemon making u r *_^
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like it... I like it very much... Update sooner!
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Reviewed By: pikakitty On: March 21, 2005 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your fanfic, and it was great! When will you update?
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Reviewed By: Diablos420 On: March 17, 2005 18:29 EST
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man... i thought people liked this story on this site... i never get reviews anymore for it though... it's not hard to review... see i'm doing it now... lol PLEASE review! it really encourages me to update faster
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Update soon on ur next chapter! It may have sucked dirty balls, but i still want u to update! lol, I'm just joking, it was great! Heh, i actually wanted to keep that 'suck dirty balls' thing, but im nice, so... heh, bet u would have reviewed earlier if i kept it, huh? Maybe...
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Reviewed By: sesshomarus mate On: February 11, 2005 16:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi I just started reading your story a few days ago but I already read the last chapter anyways in one of the earlier chapter you ask for songs the band could sing and I have a few in mind : closer by the nine inch nails, smile like you mean it by the killers, the widow by mors voltra or somthing (like that ),I'm having a problem with my e-mail so i can't send you a direct e-mail... so I hope you read this review and update soon how about you answer me in your next chapter pleaaaase By the way I love your story.
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Reviewed By: LALAHATEYOU2 On: February 06, 2005 21:35 EST
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CoOl. Or At LeAsT sOmEwHaT cOoL.
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Reviewed By: Manda On: February 06, 2005 20:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn....that was a long wait! o.O im an immpatient person...waiting 2 monthes makes me mad...u can make it up to me by...writing another chapter soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleaase! (im not really mad...just sad) ok well bye!
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Reviewed By: LadySango On: February 06, 2005 11:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! great chapter. Tsuki acts just like Inuyasha. XD
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: dfhafgsjgj On: February 05, 2005 00:34 EST
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*ahem* hey..um...do u think u can like..write a lemon between Saturou(sp???) and Tsuki! please?! please and thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love this fic, very excellent, good to have you back with us again! Oh yeah, since you're one of the best authors i've seen, could you possibly check out my fics as well and perhaps tell me what you think about them? Of course i'm just asking, i'm not expecting a response or anything, i'm just asking.
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Reviewed By: senseistephino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 15:38 EST
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i love this story ! you rock!
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Reviewed By: Apathy5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 02:54 EST
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Awww they are so cute!!! And Kagome, she was having a harder time getting over being lied to than raped, but you already explained that so I won't get into it. I really do like your story. I just found it and have been reading it. I will try to review from now on. By the way, I'm really sorry about what happened to your sister. You surprised me with how quickly you updated after that. I don't know if I could; I'm very close to my sister as well.
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