| "Demonic Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: April 18, 2006 10:22 EDT
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I love this story. This family can never have a moment of peace. What does Naraku want with Tsuki now after he turned her into a bloodlust demon. Whe she becomes normal again she going to want to know what happend. Sesshy kids are just like him and Rin and they have a little Inuyasha in them to. That could be a good or bad conbimatation.
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Title: thanx
Reviewed By: XD!Sexy Little Kitsune Girl!XP On: February 06, 2006 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lov it thanx for updating and this is Reke so ya thanx
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_lover 454545 On: January 10, 2006 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. i mean wow. i was reading this story thinking that is wasn't good when i saw it but as i got into the story, i couldn't stop reading it. it is a great story, and i hope you will be adding to it soon. i was also wandering if you could reading my fanfic. its called An Eternity Apart. it only has nine chapters but i would like some feedback from a pro. Thanx!!! Kim(Kittenkim)
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 19:46 EST
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NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO! She was so close to breaking threw the spell. Why must she go threw all this pain. Poor Sango her family is just falling apart one by one. Kagome losing her only daughter. Inu and Sesshy can't help. And they go to the doctors so much they should have their files out and ready in case something happens. This is one of the happiest family I ever read about and it hurts to read of how they are being broken apart.Tsuki is going to be heart broken when she comes back to her normal state. She's attacked some of her family.
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 15:54 EDT
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Oh, and conratulations on you're engagement! I sure hope I get to marry someone at a young age like you did! Well, I'm pretty young to be talkin bout marriage now, but aside from that, Congratulations, Congratulations, Congratulations! lol.
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 15:51 EDT
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This story's great! I really like it alot! That last chapter was great! I love bloodshead in fanfics! Even in movies! Seeing blood doesn't scare me anymore, that's why I want to be a durgeon when I grow up! lol. This fic is very intresting, that's why I never get boared reading it! Can't wait 'till you update next month! lol.
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Reviewed By: Z On: August 23, 2005 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please hurry and update soon
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Reviewed By: Z On: August 23, 2005 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please hurry and update soon
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story i hope you write real soon. i absolutely loved it. i cried and i laughed alot. you really know how to write your stories. i am sorry about what happened. i cried for you and i cried because of the things that happened in the story. Please R&R my story moonlight eyes. thanks. oh and by the way my name is Nyah i am 15 and i spend most of my time on this website reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours. i really hope you update reall soon. email me krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks again for writing such a beautiful and wonderful story. i hope we become very good friends. Oh and i ask you to please read a story that i like as well it is called 'Suffocating' by 'XX_Blue_Lips_XX' it is very good you should read it. after you might wanna kill Naraku after what he did. but i can say right now yours is probably the story i ever read. i hope you become a very successful fiction writer someday because you deserve it. i hope everything works out for you just fine. and if you need i friend i am always here. if you ever have a problem i will we here to solve it. by the way i live in Franklin, Louisiana. you should make your story into a book. i loved it alot. and i hope other like it just like me. just email me when you need a friend. i just might be on. i wish the best for you, your story and your life. i know i wrote alot but i had to say what i had to say. well i am about to run out a words so. Til the next review my friend. best wishes |
Reviewed By: Princess-in-training On: August 12, 2005 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing please I want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Virgo On: August 12, 2005 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool The fighting and the children running around and people killing people. Sorry about your sis too. Your story very interesting to me I mean they good to the hositpal enough for the doctors to know them by names.
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Reviewed By: Lady_Relm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 14:15 EDT
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Great story baord update soon.
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl (ain't logged in) On: July 02, 2005 20:36 EDT
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K, look, this is the right way of how u spell "allot": 'a (space) lot'!!!! K, well, besides the typo great chapter. The part about how old sesshoumaru was and the hair was funny. lol. The plot is getting a little messy... well, not really, it's pretty obvious where it is right now. lol, k, update soon on the next chapter! ---A anime fan girl ;]
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Reviewed By: lorddurratan On: July 01, 2005 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. i just finised what you had. i think this is a great story. i love it. i hope you are able to finish it. well good luck
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Reviewed By: Sango-the-slayer On: May 05, 2005 20:33 EDT
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please update!!!!I can't wait much longer
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