| "Demonic Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 17, 2004 06:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fics! Thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: Smeagol/Sesshluva On: January 11, 2004 13:29 EST
Comment/Review:
yo, u definatly need to update this!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kuether On: January 10, 2004 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey omg you have to finish this story caose if you dont im gonna go crazy , cause this is the best story iv reade, please finish it soon. WOW there are lots of lemons but i like them. PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING.
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Reviewed By: $EANPAUL On: January 08, 2004 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT, SEE AT ALL THE FICS I READ YOURS IS MY BEST ONE I READ. SO CAN YOU WIRTE MORE, CUZ ALL THE OTHER STORYS I READ SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: DogDemonKinoke On: January 03, 2004 16:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, i dont think you are a sex luntick hehe. i wish it was a movie or a book or somthing better than a fan fic. i relly cant wait for next chpt.
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Reviewed By: Zoah On: December 31, 2003 20:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story but there were some things that need to be fixed. Like, only one person talks per paragraph. And there were some moments that I had to read over several times to understand what's going on. All it really needs is some spelling and grammer checks, and it's perfect. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 22:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no oh no oh no
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Reviewed By: Sammy -.-zzz On: December 22, 2003 12:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erie chapter. Keep those chapters coming, and I'll keep reading. Corny I know. Hey, works for me. hehehe
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Reviewed By: Ikahen On: December 20, 2003 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better update soon! The tension is killing me! Heh... I just realized something. You know how Inu has dog ears on top of his head... it'd look funny with him on the phone. o.O Erm... ok. Please update soon. And you better not make Kagome's dream come true, I cried in bed just thinking about it!
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Reviewed By: Icy_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic so far. It gets better and better with each chapter so Update soon!
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Title: eeeeeks
Reviewed By: inuyasha_maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, i love your story, keep on going i like chapter 15 cause shippou is so cute, once again, keep on going, it's great. always inuyasha nut- crystel huggles,kisses, and loadsa pocky
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Reviewed By: Ikahen On: December 18, 2003 22:57 EST
Comment/Review:
Nice fic. Oh yeah...sure I haven't read it yet. Only Chapter 4... o.O I like Lemons. =D I suggest getting a Beta Reading for your first few chapters. But currently, you seem like a pretty good writer =D
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Reviewed By: Kristie my e-mail is TBits92689@aol.com On: December 18, 2003 22:37 EST
Comment/Review:
hey the chapter is short but really good i love it ok well keep writing ok tootles
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 18, 2003 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! what about Kagome's dream?? ok leave this up to you, but... just one thing please kill kikyo ok anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 18:39 EST
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Oh yeah Inuyasha is onlly a little mad. Just shouting over the phone. Really good chapter, please please tell me she'll survive, if you kill THIS child argh!!! Really good chapter!
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