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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 19:36 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Short... but good, i really like this fic, i really like it and love it, i just hope i would get this many reviews on my fics... *sigh*... not like people care anyway.
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Reviewed By: Zir On: September 03, 2004 16:30 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow i just read all the way throughit, i'm a late reader, and i just have to say wow. this is a great fanfic. and you are a great writter and please hurry up and update it. your spelling errors don't make it hard to read either so as far as i'm concerned they don't matter. ZIRRA
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Reviewed By: suca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 03:09 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: sence when do people eat lunch at 6:00 and inuyasha would not look good in leather pant and sesshomuru(sp) acting that nice is starting to scare me but enywho i still like your story so far :)
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 01:54 EDT Comment/Review: ok i dont under stand y ff net deleated it, but i found it again ^__^. i think i can explain what just happened to Tsuki- she went into a miled youkai rage, mutch like her father when his eyes go red and goes into kill drive, yet she is more con troled than inuyasha because she has more human blood to supress it, thus she was able to come back to reality. e-mail me if i made the correct assumption, and if im right, i have a suggestion so that doesent happen again, one of inuyasha's fangs tied around her neck like a necklace(sort of like the one Ayame wears around her neck) the only time its useless is when Inuyasha goes into demon rage. E-Mail= foxylilraven@verizon.net OR foxylilraven@yahoo.com l8r foxy
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Reviewed By: bluRose00 On: August 31, 2004 01:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i kno your BRILLIANT plan!!! your gunna make tsuki grow up and defeat naraku arent ya?!?!?!?! arent ya!!!!?!!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: August 30, 2004 16:33 EDT Comment/Review: please review or/and ill stop reviewing...if u find my reviews annoying...if u dont its a threat then:P...but please i beg of u please continue writing...if not for me then for all of ur other fans:) but anywho im really bored seeing as ur story hasnt been updated im gunna go surfing for more stories...
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Reviewed By: feilo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 23:00 EDT Comment/Review: dis is so kool wor...but it's been a while b4 u've updated la...plz update la...
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 12:30 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!! THIS STORY IS SOO GOOD. IT HAS EVERYTHING. ROMANCE, ANGST, ACTION, AND EVERYTHIHNG IN BETWEEN IT. I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I NEED TO SEE MORE. I CRIED WHEN THEIR FIRST BABY DIES AND THEN CRIED AGAIN WHEN THEIR SECOND ENDED UP IN THE HOSPITAL. BUT IM GLAD YOU MADE HER GET BETTER!! KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: missy manda On: August 24, 2004 14:12 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i forgot to update agian :O sorry about that but i wasnt anywheres near civilization....:Pi cant stand being at grandmas house...theres no puters there!:'( anywho i did review again...ive read ur whole story again all togther today allready and its only like 12:12 :P get to work chop chop snap snap!
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Reviewed By: Sango the Demon Exterminator On: August 19, 2004 19:45 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i really love ur story!!!!!please update soon!!!!!im happy that tsuki is still alive. ty for not killing her. and plz don't make kagome and inuyasha get a divorce!!!!!they r such a great couple. anywayz, keep up the good work!!!!! Sayonara!!!!! ~Amanda~ mirokusgirlsango9161986@yahoo.com
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Title: yeh Reviewed By: kikyou_28 On: August 12, 2004 18:40 EDT Comment/Review: yeh...love the cappie update soon please
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: August 12, 2004 00:10 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg i just realized i dont think ive ever reviewed my fave story of all time! :o its a shame! and its not people losing interest in your story...we reviewers r seriously lazy;)...sometimes but anywho i want to congrautlate u on ur wonderfull story and i hope u plan on updating soon *pulls out really big kniife* just kidding...i'll just send like a review every other day till u review...:P so umm im running out of things to say about ur story...but i read one review and liked the idea of the tiny pink?(pretty sure it was pink) aliens killing naraku!:P alrighty i have to go to bed cuz i didnt get up today and that pissed off my dad so ill review next time u update
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Reviewed By: dark_faire On: August 11, 2004 19:43 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: dude i love this story ,but just freakin kill naraku already!!!! as you see i don't like him for all i care make some little strange pink aliens invade his castle and kill the bastard! anyways great chapter.so i guess kanna and kagura will be returned to life ok all i have to say and i'll look forward on your nextt chapter dark_faire p.s what do you mean your reviewers lost interest!! we just got lazy!! get writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Slayer On: August 09, 2004 19:21 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy your fanfic. It's verry good. If you nget writers block often you should try drinking water. Studies from the Beylor collage of medicon show that lack of water in the body slows down createive thinking proceses. it would take 4 large glasses of water to replace what 1 can of coke takes out of your body. caffanie weakens your bones by absorbing calcium from your bones.
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Reviewed By: Silver Slayer On: August 09, 2004 19:21 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy your fanfic. It's verry good. If you nget writers block often you should try drinking water. Studies from the Beylor collage of medicon show that lack of water in the body slows down createive thinking proceses. it would take 4 large glasses of water to replace what 1 can of coke takes out of your body. caffanie weakens your bones by absorbing calcium from your bones.
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