| "Demonic Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: wildninja916 On: January 19, 2004 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was great. you should write more. it would be cool if sango and kagome had more kids in the story and if kikyo (bitch from hell) was killed again. i also liked when miroku groped sango's ass and she slapped the shit out of him. its just like the show. it would be funny if sango and kagome's children were born at the same time. you should do that. it would be good in the story. what i meant by the baby thing was if their children were born during the same season. btw sango is my favorite character. i hate naraku and kikyo. they belong in hell.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy's bich On: January 18, 2004 21:23 EST
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they had beter live or I send the hounds of hell after you !!!! when is Rin going it get pregnet ? KILL NAROKU AND KEIKO plese I hate them as dus 99.9 % of us out hear !! And let the pore child live she's still so young and has berly had the true experens of life love mareg and .....other things ! ^_^* SO UPDATE SOON!!!!!! cas I love the story.
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Reviewed By: Liwah_Lee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous! Go Sesshy go! (Big Fluffy fan >.>) Write more real soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Ikahen On: January 18, 2004 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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The chapter's kinda... not that descriptive and as good as your former ones but it's cool. Can't wait for your next update... been waiting for this one for FOREVER!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 23:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O I hope inu and kag will be ok! Please update soon!!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Icy_Mirror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 22:28 EST
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Great chappie! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 17, 2004 06:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fics! Thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: Smeagol/Sesshluva On: January 11, 2004 13:29 EST
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yo, u definatly need to update this!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kuether On: January 10, 2004 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey omg you have to finish this story caose if you dont im gonna go crazy , cause this is the best story iv reade, please finish it soon. WOW there are lots of lemons but i like them. PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING.
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Reviewed By: $EANPAUL On: January 08, 2004 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT, SEE AT ALL THE FICS I READ YOURS IS MY BEST ONE I READ. SO CAN YOU WIRTE MORE, CUZ ALL THE OTHER STORYS I READ SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: DogDemonKinoke On: January 03, 2004 16:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, i dont think you are a sex luntick hehe. i wish it was a movie or a book or somthing better than a fan fic. i relly cant wait for next chpt.
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Reviewed By: Zoah On: December 31, 2003 20:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story but there were some things that need to be fixed. Like, only one person talks per paragraph. And there were some moments that I had to read over several times to understand what's going on. All it really needs is some spelling and grammer checks, and it's perfect. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 22:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no oh no oh no
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Reviewed By: Sammy -.-zzz On: December 22, 2003 12:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erie chapter. Keep those chapters coming, and I'll keep reading. Corny I know. Hey, works for me. hehehe
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Reviewed By: Ikahen On: December 20, 2003 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better update soon! The tension is killing me! Heh... I just realized something. You know how Inu has dog ears on top of his head... it'd look funny with him on the phone. o.O Erm... ok. Please update soon. And you better not make Kagome's dream come true, I cried in bed just thinking about it!
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