| "Demonic Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-training On: August 12, 2005 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing please I want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Virgo On: August 12, 2005 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool The fighting and the children running around and people killing people. Sorry about your sis too. Your story very interesting to me I mean they good to the hositpal enough for the doctors to know them by names.
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Reviewed By: Lady_Relm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 14:15 EDT
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Great story baord update soon.
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl (ain't logged in) On: July 02, 2005 20:36 EDT
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K, look, this is the right way of how u spell "allot": 'a (space) lot'!!!! K, well, besides the typo great chapter. The part about how old sesshoumaru was and the hair was funny. lol. The plot is getting a little messy... well, not really, it's pretty obvious where it is right now. lol, k, update soon on the next chapter! ---A anime fan girl ;]
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Reviewed By: lorddurratan On: July 01, 2005 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. i just finised what you had. i think this is a great story. i love it. i hope you are able to finish it. well good luck
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Reviewed By: Sango-the-slayer On: May 05, 2005 20:33 EDT
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please update!!!!I can't wait much longer
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Reviewed By: LadySango On: April 12, 2005 20:03 EDT
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great chapter. please update soon. ~Amanda
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Reviewed By: Yorokobi_roses On: April 05, 2005 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most interesting fanfics I have read in a long time. I first found it on ff.net, but moved here because, well, I like lemons (@.@) If it could be improved, I would like you to write more about the relationships (new and old). I'm supposed to be doing my homework right now, so I can't write alot. Spelling: Shippo-Shippou Kikyo-Kikyou. You see, when writing in Kanji (one of japan's three alphabets, English alphabet) O is pronounced as oo and ou is pronounced as O, but only at the end of a word. Other than that, pretty good beta. By the way, if you don't mind YAOI, that Shatter is a pretty good fic. It is Inuyasha, on ff.net. Also, there is Bitten, also Inuyasha, also ff.net. Overactive fangirl, Konoko Tsetsunokea. P.S. Inuyasha's last name is Taisho, adopted from his father's name. (Taisho Inuyasha)
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: navyboarder17 (NSI) On: April 01, 2005 23:14 EST
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Nice, just a lil confused on what naraku wants the bottles for, hiding himself right? Neways great chapter, i agree with some other people, it's been really dark and morbid or w/e for the past few chapters... we need a lil more happiness, like ummmmm sataru and tsuki are teenagers now right? Just do a lemon starting out as tsuki comforting sataru... just to make things a little more cheerful, i know how good at lemon making u r *_^
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it... I like it very much... Update sooner!
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Reviewed By: pikakitty On: March 21, 2005 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your fanfic, and it was great! When will you update?
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Reviewed By: Diablos420 On: March 17, 2005 18:29 EST
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man... i thought people liked this story on this site... i never get reviews anymore for it though... it's not hard to review... see i'm doing it now... lol PLEASE review! it really encourages me to update faster
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Update soon on ur next chapter! It may have sucked dirty balls, but i still want u to update! lol, I'm just joking, it was great! Heh, i actually wanted to keep that 'suck dirty balls' thing, but im nice, so... heh, bet u would have reviewed earlier if i kept it, huh? Maybe...
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Reviewed By: sesshomarus mate On: February 11, 2005 16:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi I just started reading your story a few days ago but I already read the last chapter anyways in one of the earlier chapter you ask for songs the band could sing and I have a few in mind : closer by the nine inch nails, smile like you mean it by the killers, the widow by mors voltra or somthing (like that ),I'm having a problem with my e-mail so i can't send you a direct e-mail... so I hope you read this review and update soon how about you answer me in your next chapter pleaaaase By the way I love your story.
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Reviewed By: LALAHATEYOU2 On: February 06, 2005 21:35 EST
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CoOl. Or At LeAsT sOmEwHaT cOoL.
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