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Title: katie keita Reviewed By: Hemo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:39 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: it's not the best and pretty good, by the way It's tongue bot toung lots of spelling error
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Title: most devoted fan! Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: September 10, 2004 19:39 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YAY!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!!did u know ur my best friend?;)oh and id really love it if u continue writing cuz school started again....and i find little other things to do....nothin good on tv....ran outa books....so i mostly read fanfictions...but anywho....id appreciate it if u keep working on it and keep up the AWSOME work:P
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Reviewed By: Xx_WoLfGuRl_xX On: September 08, 2004 17:58 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yo, all i have to say is GO TSUKI! lolz, anyways, awesome story so far arianna, i can't wait til the next chapter is up ^-^ oh and Love and Insanity was awesome as well, I got all my friends into reading yoru sotries, they said they loved them to and hope you make more ^-^ they said on a scale of 1 to 10 for overall rating, it's most definiently a 10 (*i think that's how you spell it*) I gave it a ten as well ^-^ and ways, great job! keep at it!
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Reviewed By: YokoXWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 22:58 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the best story i've read in a long time with the exception of some part. Your a very talented writer Miss.
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Reviewed By: YokoXWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 22:58 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the best story i've read in a long time with the exception of some part. Your a very talented writer Miss.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 02:48 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that is a really goos story!!!! i hope you update soon!!! ^_^ and i feel bad about inuyasha nd kagome but everything witll come out great in the end!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 19:36 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Short... but good, i really like this fic, i really like it and love it, i just hope i would get this many reviews on my fics... *sigh*... not like people care anyway.
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Reviewed By: Zir On: September 03, 2004 16:30 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow i just read all the way throughit, i'm a late reader, and i just have to say wow. this is a great fanfic. and you are a great writter and please hurry up and update it. your spelling errors don't make it hard to read either so as far as i'm concerned they don't matter. ZIRRA
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Reviewed By: suca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 03:09 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: sence when do people eat lunch at 6:00 and inuyasha would not look good in leather pant and sesshomuru(sp) acting that nice is starting to scare me but enywho i still like your story so far :)
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 01:54 EDT Comment/Review: ok i dont under stand y ff net deleated it, but i found it again ^__^. i think i can explain what just happened to Tsuki- she went into a miled youkai rage, mutch like her father when his eyes go red and goes into kill drive, yet she is more con troled than inuyasha because she has more human blood to supress it, thus she was able to come back to reality. e-mail me if i made the correct assumption, and if im right, i have a suggestion so that doesent happen again, one of inuyasha's fangs tied around her neck like a necklace(sort of like the one Ayame wears around her neck) the only time its useless is when Inuyasha goes into demon rage. E-Mail= foxylilraven@verizon.net OR foxylilraven@yahoo.com l8r foxy
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Reviewed By: bluRose00 On: August 31, 2004 01:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i kno your BRILLIANT plan!!! your gunna make tsuki grow up and defeat naraku arent ya?!?!?!?! arent ya!!!!?!!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: August 30, 2004 16:33 EDT Comment/Review: please review or/and ill stop reviewing...if u find my reviews annoying...if u dont its a threat then:P...but please i beg of u please continue writing...if not for me then for all of ur other fans:) but anywho im really bored seeing as ur story hasnt been updated im gunna go surfing for more stories...
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Reviewed By: feilo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 23:00 EDT Comment/Review: dis is so kool wor...but it's been a while b4 u've updated la...plz update la...
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 12:30 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!! THIS STORY IS SOO GOOD. IT HAS EVERYTHING. ROMANCE, ANGST, ACTION, AND EVERYTHIHNG IN BETWEEN IT. I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I NEED TO SEE MORE. I CRIED WHEN THEIR FIRST BABY DIES AND THEN CRIED AGAIN WHEN THEIR SECOND ENDED UP IN THE HOSPITAL. BUT IM GLAD YOU MADE HER GET BETTER!! KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: missy manda On: August 24, 2004 14:12 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i forgot to update agian :O sorry about that but i wasnt anywheres near civilization....:Pi cant stand being at grandmas house...theres no puters there!:'( anywho i did review again...ive read ur whole story again all togther today allready and its only like 12:12 :P get to work chop chop snap snap!
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