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Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 26, 2004 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: March 25, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter glad to see Kagome did finally realize that Kouga actually 'ordered' his wolves to kill Rin's village (and Rin) I had thought she already knew that from watching the series but maybe she just had 'selective hearing or memory' since Kouga was being nice to her and stuff. She needs to learn that just because they are nice to her doesn't always mean they are nice I think Kouga was orginally just letting Kagome see what she wanted to see which was a nice guy and he was trying to make Inuyasha look bad so she would choose Kouga. There is nothing wrong with seeing good in people that is a great thing and even giving people a second chance if she didn't Inuyasha might still be pinned to that tree but while seeing the good you also need to see the rest. Sure Inuyasha killed and supposedly tried to kill Kagome. I say supposedly because I think if he really wanted to he could have killed her before Keade & Kagome got that rosary on him. Plus if I remember correctly after he killed that centipede he attacked the villagers but he didn't kill them he just destroyed their weapons so I don't think Inuyasha was ever and evil killer and only killed to survive. Well that is my humble opinion I do really enjoy this fic and your others I re-read them alot. Sorry for rambling on in the reviews I only do that if I really like the stories then I 'channel Willow from Buffy she always rmmbles' at least I don't have to worry about taking a breath *LOL* I am glad Inuyasha didn't let Kagome leave when she tried to apologize and show submission. Post more soon this an excelant story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 20:31 CST
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Acck! No fair No fair No fair. Post more please!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 25, 2004 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I hope that you can keep up to writing everyday. That could be a challenge having a family and all. Can not wait to read what you wrote tomorrow.
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Title: is there a reason to write the titles...?
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
on i love it...it's so so so something but i can;t think of what it is yet!!!!!! i will though...just wait...anyway UP DATE SOON PLEASE...and remember I said please!
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Title: OOHhhhhh!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 16:31 CST
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Cool fluffy! So poised, so beautiful, so commanding! ***Fluttering heart*** And he's now in yasha-kun's debt! /snicker/ ***Clapping*** Bravo! Bravo! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: PJ On: March 24, 2004 13:56 CST
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Cool chapter!! Did Kagome hear what Rin said about Kouga? I hope she did maybe it will open her eyes that not all people/demon are what she sees. I know she tries to see the good in people and such and if she didn't she wouldn't be with Inuyasha but maybe it will make her stop and think once in a while. Again great chapter can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Gloria Underhill On: March 24, 2004 08:31 CST
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Cool chapter. but remember that just because you write 4 pages a day doesn't mean that you have to post them right away. I've done something like that and the next day went back and hated everything i wrote, even though I loved it before. about last chapter, or the one before. if InuYasha's instincts were telling him Kagome chose Kouga, why weren't kouga's telling him she chose him?
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Reviewed By: PJ On: March 18, 2004 02:34 CST
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Cool chapter I promise not to babble this time...not much anyway *LOL* Glad Inuyasha made it back in time and that Shippou is ok. I liked the way you brought him back. As far as what you are going have happen well this is fanfic it doesn't really have to follow the anime if it did what would the point be of writing the story if you are following the anime well you can just watch it. I mean you are writing it the way you want it to happen just like all the other people here if everybody followed the anime then all the stories would be the same. Ok am done.... again great chapter update soon!!! Hope Inuyasha forgives Kagome soon and they have a nice calm talk about things.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 17, 2004 15:59 CST
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Great chapter. It is too bad that Kouga had to die. It seems to me that he lost his mind over losing Kagome. I can not wait to see what Sesshoumaru has to do with Inuyasha human family? Update soon.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: March 17, 2004 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story - don't worry about it boing absolutely cannon as far as the manga or the anime goes. I have to agree with the other reviewer that Koga does eventually turn out to be a semi- Inu ally, but for the purposes of this story he isn't - it's your story. AS far as Kikyo goes SPOILER WARNING (don't read if you don't want to know) Kagome actually 'revives' Kikyo after her second 'death' (the anime hasn't yet caught up with this, but it is in the manga. Keep up the great story - it's getting really exciting. And please - let Miroku be all right!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: March 16, 2004 03:34 CST
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Cool update! And I am not upset about you point of view I just believed that Kagome should have been given the facts about 'demon mating customs' and such. Like you said Kagome is pretty smart but it is also true that she can be pretty stupid. (you know... knowing better but doing it anyway) It is not always that Kagome doesn't know any better she just sometimes doesn't think things through or something. I don't know what goes through her head sometimes. I don't have any kids and it has been a long time since I was 15 so I am pretty sure you would know better then me what goes through the mind of a 15 year old. But I do remember my mother telling me "I don't know what goes through your head sometimes" *LOL* I know Kagome trusts Inuyasha and should believe him but Kagome kind of strikes me as a person that has to see first hand before she absolutely believes. But then it could be she was just thinking that Inuyasha was 'posturing' and all that junk. Have to give Kagome credit for wanting to save someone she thought was her friend I mean she even helped Kikyou. The one thing I hope Inuyasha will not get mad at her about is if she decides to help him *not in a fight over her* but like against Naraku or something. I mean he loves and protects her... you can't expect her not to love and protect him just a fiercely (sp?) (like a *wolf* protecting its mate/young) Again I am not upset at your point of view and I am sorry if it sounded that way and I didn't mean to shout to loud. I guess I was upset because Kagome didn't have all the info and that is something and bothers me. Now that she does I hope things will be better but I have a feeling the road is going to be a bit bumpy I really think Inuyasha and Kagome need to talk. They both need to understand things from both sides/times so to speak. Again great story post more soon this is bery good!!!!! BTW I hope either Inuyasha kills Kouga or Kagome purifies 'pins him to a tree'or purifies him before Inuyasha gets back.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 14, 2004 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just interested that Sess is interested in Kouga and Inuyasha's battle. Why is that??!! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Pintura On: March 12, 2004 15:44 CST
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Good story, but I really think that you are offbase on Koga's character (and a little on Kagome's). When we first met Koga, he was wreaking havoc with three unpurified jewel shards in his body. Kagome is the reincarnation of a (or maybe several) priestesses who have the ability to purify evil and transmute it into good. Koga's falling in love with her is really his falling in love with goodness. If you have seen the later episodes in the series (upper ninties) this becomes much clearer. Suffice it to say that Kagome is a supernatural being who brings out the good in people, and Inuyasha and Koga are very unlikely to fight to the death.
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Reviewed By: caliko not signed in On: March 10, 2004 13:21 CST
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YAYYY!!! now I can't wait to see the next chappie! I gotta run and pick up my monster from school, otherwise i'd give a better review.. but keep up the good work!~Caliko
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