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Reviewed By: RediHebi On: December 02, 2007 14:47 CST
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UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 14:18 CST
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Myouga is my new hero!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 (nli) On: November 08, 2007 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always...very nice. Glad to finally have an update. Here's hoping your muse stays active and doesn't go back to sitting on his butt. :)
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 13:27 CST
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...at last Myoga proves his usefulness. I must say that sure is funny. I can't wait until you put up the next chapter. I want to see what happens to Sesshomaru, Inu-yasha, Kagome, Takara and the rest of the crew. Does Inu-Yasha, Kagome, and Shippo go and live with Sesshomaru and Takara? After taking the shard out does Sesshomaru use his sword to bring Hokaku back to life? I must know!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. The more I think about all of the little aspects of it the more I like the way you made things. For instance, Sesshoumaru is a difficult character and almost anything he does in a fan fiction seem out of character, but you were able to explain his cannon behavior and through that explanation, expand his character, so his actions were not out of character. There are some situations that seem odd and sometimes silly (the submitting whine thing Kagome did) and some mistakes that really irritate my that a lot of authors make (Tokijin does not have a sheath) I think most of these problems will eventually go away with experience. There are fewer of them in the later chapters. Also, you didn't provide the full impact of some of the more emotional situations, but sometimes that is appreciated. You are definitely highly skilled in creating a believable plot and creating those emotional situations. I'm not sure if it is all that bad of a thing that you don't seem to play up those emotional situations. It has the interesting effect of settling in later after the chapter(s) are read. It will be really interesting to see how everyone reacts now to the new situations. I am interested to see how people are going to get though the well for that wedding and who all is going, or if that will actually happen in light of the recent events... What happened to Kagura? I get the feeling that Inuyasha's control came with the severed bond. I wonder how Genta and Hakkaku will fit in now that they want Inuyasha for alpha... and how the Inu brothers will settle things. I also wonder what state the breaking of the bond has left Yukiho in... BTW I love that name for her... I'm sure it's not *supposed* to be pronounced that way, but it seems more appropriate. I hope that you update soon. I will be looking forward to it as I hope you can tell. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... really liked the part where sesshomaru was acting more brotherly to inuyasha... and giving him the explanation... seems that myouga may have given them the solution to inuyasha's problem with the other woman... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 01:31 CDT
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great story... i like it... will it be ending soon or need to put a closure on Inuyasha's problem with that other woman... can't wait for the epilogue... update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 20:39 CDT
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Aye, that was a good battle. I pictured it very movie filmish. Glad you got around to finishing it. I'm agreeing with another review: "Perhaps you should write an epilogue." That sounds like a capitally smashing endeavor. And as for life, *shrug* it comes at you fast. There's no possible way you could've known a major haitus-making conflict would arise. Especially since your wife was involved. I'm so happy to hear she's doing well. ^_^ Well, that's it. Hopefully, until next time. Au revoir ^_^
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Reviewed By: tweety-bird On: May 20, 2007 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur st0y i re@d 4x 1n 1 d@y. i h0p3 u m@k3 @ p@rt 2 b3c@u$3 u l3ft @ l0t 0f th1ng$ un@n$w3r3d.
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Reviewed By: lilangelchr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope yo update more i love it
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 01:07 CDT
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Dude, you gonna end it there? What about Kag and Inu, isn't he still mated to that other chick? Perhaps, you should wwrite an epilogue...Write On;-)
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 00:41 CDT
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nice battle!!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 18:02 CDT
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Welcome back! So very happy your wife is a-ok!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 14:05 CDT
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It was a good story, but you left some things unanswered. Like what happened to that woman that raped Inu. Hopefully theres a past two that gives these answers.
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Reviewed By: HOHOHOHOHOHOHO On: May 05, 2007 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asome sweet story but u sooooo need to ud more and way faster and stop with the cliff hangers its so unfair o yeah what does 'akida' mean???
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